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Reviews for Moondance

By : DrunkenScotsman
  • From ANON - Fading Light on July 02, 2014
    I really enjoyed this chapter. I was surprised that the bloodplay was minor considering that Tsukune is a half vampire.

    I suppose it just couldn't go beyond that for the moment.

    Either way, awesome job.
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  • From ANON - Death From Above on July 02, 2014
    This was very touching.

    I am impressed.

    Looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Ego Killer on July 02, 2014
    This chapter turned out better than I could have hoped.

    Good job.
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  • From Aysha on June 30, 2014
    this chapter is a good set up for the next chapter. I agree that moka needed to come to terms with her feelings for Tsukune, however I think we're watching the show what she really wanted was for him to take the initiative to be aggressive and assertive. we'll see how things go in the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Fading Light on June 27, 2014
    This chapter explained A LOT.

    Awesome job!

    Can't wait for the next update!
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  • From ANON - Ego Killer on June 27, 2014
    In regards to my comment on the previous chapter, my apologies.

    Due to the fact that Tsukune and Yukari had sex on their first date I had assumed Inner Moka and Tsukune would follow the same pattern hence my anticipation.

    However after reading this chapter I can see the reason behind the hesitation. You really made me empathize with Inner Moka. Not an easy task.

    Magnificent work my friend.
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  • From ANON - Death From Above on June 27, 2014
    I have said it before and I will say it once again....you are a god-damned TEASE!

    This explains a lot from the previous chapter and now I can see the reason behind Inner Moka's hesitation.

    You have redeemed yourself with this chapter. Excellent job.
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  • From ANON - Fading Light on June 17, 2014
    I must say...I expected something other than a foot scene.
    Regardless of Inner Moka's pride or dominant nature, I was surprised she didn't just ravage him like I had expected.
    Still, I'm sure the actual love scene will be in the next chapter. Good job either way.


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  • From ANON - Death From Above on June 17, 2014
    Well this was unexpected.

    Didn't think a foot fetish thing would happen. I was expecting some type of vampiric sex scene or something of the sort.

    Well I can only hope the next chapter delivers it.
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  • From ANON - Ego Killer on June 17, 2014
    It's good that you updated but I have to say I'm a little let down by this chapter.

    All signs considered I had expected to see Inner Moka actually have sex with Tsukune and possibly unleash his inner power so to speak.

    The foot fetish thing, as Aysha commented, I never understood.

    Either way thanks for the update. Hope the next chapter is better.
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  • From Aysha on June 17, 2014
    I've never understood the foot fetish thing and I suppose I never will, as far as I'm concerned feet belong on the floor and not on my genitals. That being said when it comes to a super hot s-class super monster like Moka I would not turn down the favor! I think I understand why you chose to go this way. The outer Moka would have used her hands at the very least, but as we know Inner Moka expresses herself with her feet so all in all I say it's a good fit. Well done! Now I have to suffer be insufferable... The wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Ego Killer on June 13, 2014
    I am really curious as to what Inner Moka will do to Tsukune.

    Nice job!
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  • From ANON - Death From Above on June 13, 2014
    You tease....you god-damned tease.

    Excellent chapter. Looking forward to the next.
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  • From ANON - Fading Light on June 13, 2014
    Oh now you're just being cruel!

    Either way another chapter perfectly executed. Well done.
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  • From Aysha on June 11, 2014
    I feel like you're trying to torture me to death! Again you in the chapter right when things are starting to get interesting! This chapter was very good and kept me riveted the entire time;right until you left me hanging. >
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