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By : Btfan
  • From ninesenshi on August 05, 2015
    Pretty sexy, grammar and sentence structure needs work at times. Prefer to focus on Ash and her past plot-lines, but you can add more girls. It's pretty dark already, don't think it needs to be much darker.
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  • From Joseph_Nathaniel_Spears on July 20, 2015
    Hey :D nice chapter, pal. Poor little Dawn, she surely hates to be a "Breeder". At least May takes it more like a brave mission to save certain species from extinction or at least to avoid that some males'/shemales' testosterone make them wreak havoc everywhere...

    And yeah, I hope that Iris and Serena don't suffer too much. I think Iris would gladly accept dragon-sized dicks for her clan's sake ;)

    I wonder if Drasna (Cynthia's mom and one of the Elite 4 of Kalos, if you don't know) had been into the Breeder program some years ago.

    Anyway, keep up the GREAT job :D
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  • From ANON - Ki on June 26, 2015
    Woth Mist how about one with kindra, using a female and male (for the helping)
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  • From Joseph_Nathaniel_Spears on June 22, 2015
    Awesome special chapter! Bianca is such a big boobed slut! xD. And yeah, I never liked Bianca's father either, not even a little bit. Selling his daughter to pay gambling debts? PAH! That's even more disgusting for me than incest is for nearly everyone else. I mean... sisters, mothers and daughters are for loving, not for using them as scapegoats or trading cards. But that's my opinion.

    I'm getting all revved up after seeing that you have plans for Dawn, Iris and Serena.

    Remember when you asked me about ideas for Misty? Well, I just hypothethized... when the Alpha Kangaskhan in the Safari Zone was mentioned to have a former "mate" that didn't fill her expectations (too loud and low stamina), that slut called Misty came to my mind xD. And now, I imagine her venting her frustrations by whoring herself to other trainers (and her stupid sisters too, btw).

    Keep up the good work, chummer!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 19, 2015
    Safary zone year 2 Pokemon

    Dragonair - from Pokemon yellow/anime
    Chansey - Pokemon yellow - the match could result in boosted fertility
    Marowak - ash gets to see a new born Cubone see if myth is true about skull on head
    Tauros - Ash goes into heat and full herd tries to breed ash about 30 same as what Ash caught in episode
    Venomoth - powder trip - aphrodisiac and growth production increased due to multiple spores released
    maybe add a miltank to balance the Tauros herd and miltank results in bigger breasts and more milk produced
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  • From ninesenshi on June 18, 2015
    Don't forget the nympho pokemon Ash is carrying around with her.
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  • From ninesenshi on June 17, 2015
    I enjoyed chap 4, liked to see Ash submit. You need to proof-read your stuff, it will improve things. Overall good.
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  • From ANON - humoi on June 16, 2015
    make ash permanent breeder girl
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  • From Joseph_Nathaniel_Spears on June 16, 2015
    Interesting. Explicit. Somewhat gross and utterly fascinating. Your fanfiction is amazing indeed

    Although... why didn't you change Ash's name into "Ashley" first? Maybe that would help me to imagine the fucking scenes better.

    But anyway, I want to see other "breeders" being ravaged instead of Ash. Oh, and when you mentioned the Alpha Kangaskhan getting a "mate" that was loud and with loud stamina... Was that Misty, Serena or Dawn? xD.

    I wonder if Jasmine or Iris are in the program like Ash or May. I'd love see that delicious lolis fucked hard and have some Skarmory or Druddigon eggs.

    Keep up the good work! :D
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  • From ANON - bgvf( on February 05, 2015
    rapidash breeder farm
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 06, 2014
    Rapidash would be an interesting next pokemon a high ratio of male rapidash could be the reason
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 05, 2014
    at first i thought this story was a little odd and i'm liking it! what i really want is for when the five years are up for her to leave Gary behind, crushing all his dreams of being with her. after all, how can he sate her needs, or even compare to the love the nindoqueen gave her?
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  • From ANON - k on December 04, 2014
    charizard? pretty please?
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 28, 2014
    How about dragon pokemon or steel types to keep with the rare theme? What happened to Ash's pokemon though?
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  • From theyaoimistress on November 23, 2014
    Interesting. Fantastic. I love it! Please update!!!
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