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Reviews for Breeder

By : Btfan
  • From ANON - MrsBumbleB on September 17, 2014
    The breeders are given a new assignment to be serigent mothers to a new clutch of adandonen baby pokemon who've lost their parents and still need caring. The girls are given a couple babies each so is not to stress him out too much but a few of the babies refuse to accept the others girls and won't eat (breast feed). Gary decides to try them with Ash since he remember her affect on Beth. (Maybe the pokemon that Ash are given are her first few pokemon she got when she a boy. Pikachu, Squirtal, Bulbasaur, and Charmander since they've all only seen the bad of humans and don't trust them) once the babies car defend and forage on their on they are taken back to be released back into the wild where they were found.
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  • From ANON - MrsBumblebee on August 26, 2014
    Try that a scientist what to try and see if offering a breeder to the legendary pokemon Lugia will encourage it to breed.
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  • From ANON - Cat on August 18, 2014
    I wish to request a chapter written about a Alakazam, a Victreebel or a Venusaur. Thank you for your time.
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  • From Bishonen on August 16, 2014
    Super happy to see an update, This story really has a great concept and I love the way things are done, but it really feels rough around the edges. I strongly suggest you get a beta reader to help polish up the details and langue.

    With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
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  • From ninesenshi on July 28, 2014
    Breeding is always hot.
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  • From Bishonen on July 28, 2014
    This is kind of fucked up…in exactly the way I like. Over all the story has potential but you need to work on pacing and descriptions a bit. A little more detail on just what is going on, and you should mark thoughts in a different way than spoken words. But over all this is worth keeping an eye on, and I would love for either Rapidash with a big flared cock head or some dog like pokemon with a super thick knot.

    With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
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