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Reviews for End of A Weary Day--Formating Revised 12/21

By : Lin
  • From ANON - Xona on April 08, 2004
    Such a good ending to your story! And you write superb lemons! I've really enjoyed your story, I'm looking forward to more stories by you. Do you think you'll write another Kenshin & Kaoru story? I hope so, this one was so awesome! Take care and happy writings!
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  • From ANON - Waterflash on April 07, 2004
    YAYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!! *dances happily* I'm really happy, and I'm really sad because...

    Well, I'm happy because I love this fic and I've had a lot of fuadinading it...

    But I'm sad because it's over... *sniffles*

    Anyway, PLEASE, I BEG OF YOU, WRITE MORE RK FICS!!!!!! *latches to Tsuki-san* PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE? I'M A HUGE FAN OF YOURS! ^_^

    P.S., thanks for the review on Our Night! =)

    LOVE YA!

    -Nikki-chan
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  • From ANON - Lady Alexiel on April 07, 2004
    Very nicely written, may have taken a long time to finish and post the whole thing, but it was really worth the wait. I commend you on a story well written. you can be sure that this is will be a story I will be rereading again on occasion, that you can. I hope you write another kenshin kaoru story, one of the best I have read. is this enough of an ego boost for you so we can be expecting you to perhaps write another story? Hope so ^_^


    Arigato
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  • From ANON - lere on April 07, 2004
    Oh, my God! I can't believe it's over (I have tears in my eyes)! What can I say after reading that fantastic lemon, and a huuuuuuge one too?

    The last chapter was your golden key. It's the resume of your talent and style. The emotions were so hight bet the them and their love paupable. The marriage and the news about the baby were the cherry above my ice cream ( you know how much I love Kenji-chan). But my favorite part was when kenshin FINALLY said how he wanted Kaoru. OH MAN!!! Hot, hot, hot thing! Things like that make me think you'r this special author. Because situations that envolve this kind of intimacy between couples, revealing their fantasies are rend dnd difficult. It happens in the real world so you make us fell like real time, plausible. I just wish real men could be that caring and loving about making love and make us, women, feel that confortable, secure, beautiful, special, loved!!!!! I will send your story to my last boyfrined and make a note: why can't you be like him, asshole???!!!!

    OH, myrt hrt hurts when I think it's over, but that wonderful manual about how to proper love a woman will be forever with me. Congratulation!!!! You did it!!! You are the best and will allways be to your faithfull fans!!!

    Big, fat, huge hugs from Brazil!

    Your number one fan,
    Lere.
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  • From ANON - stella on April 06, 2004
    i loved it,wow its finished and i loved everybit of it. can't wait to see more of your stories. may ur life continue to get better and may u continue to be blessed.
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  • From ANON - MZ.AMbER EYES on April 06, 2004
    awww....that was so sweet... oh yeah, loved the lemon ^.~
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  • From ANON - MZ.AMbER EYES on April 06, 2004
    awww....that was so sweet... oh yeah, loved the lemon ^.~
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  • From ANON - ewunia on April 06, 2004
    It is great story. I loved it from the beginning to the end. I wish most of the people would be like the characters in this story. The world really would be great. There are some but really hard to find. Write a new story. This one was awsome and next will be too.
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  • From ANON - catti-dono on March 24, 2004
    I was reluctant to keep reading after the fiasco of those baka reviews for what you wrote in chapt 6 and then rewrote in chapt 7. I believe strongly that this is your story, you made it up, dreamed it up, and wrote it for the sheer pleasure and then just wanted to share it with all of us ruroni kenshin fans. I give you credit for rewriting a very, very good redo chapter but I also liked the first one as well, but they were both very, very good so I reread your story all the way up to the latest chapter and all was very good and I await breathlessly for the next chapter.

    Thank you for continuing your story, I bow in supplication to your wonderful story.
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  • From ANON - stella on March 24, 2004
    beautiful, just beautiful. continue the good work. i hope everything is going well for you right now and i'll continue to keep u in prayer.
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  • From ANON - twishinky on March 24, 2004
    Hey.... I think you're the best, really... and those flaming ****s can go stick their opinion where the sun don't shine... so who cares if there's spelling mistakes?! It's the content that counts!!! And the content is really, really, fantastic. Don't stop because of them, they're just people without enough imagination so they have to go and spit on everyone else's. Keep it up!
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  • From LunaHope on March 23, 2004
    Wow! I'm *so* impressed with this entire story but especially with this last chapter. The sadness, the horror and the despair of the people trying to deal with the tragedy *really* came through. More than once I was brought to tears as I read it. Bravo! I'm also very glad you ended the chapter on a positive note. If you hadn't I'd have probably been depressed for a week! ^_^;; I really admire you being able to write the sorrowful and sad parts. I'm trying to write the second half of a story and I'm totally stuck because I can't bring myself to write the angst, sorrow and death. You wrote it so well that I'm totally envious!

    I really like how you've written Sano and Megumi's characters. Many people write both of them as shallow and two-dimensional. Sano's angst because his drinking and carousing had possibly cost him his chance with Megumi, and his growth when he realized that behavior wasn't worth losing her over, really showed him maturing. I also liked how Megumi's inner conflict about why she was having such a hard time accepting the love Sano offered, helped her to mature and grow emotionally. You've given their characters a lot of humanness and depth in this story. The only thing I'd say to watch out for is that both of them are still stubborn and headstrong. Changing from being self-centered to other-centered won't be completed after just one epiphany - no matter how 'earth-shattering' the revelation was. This would probably be a life long struggle for both of them so don't forget to give them back some of the 'fireworks' once the newness of their relationship has worn off. ^_^

    I'm *very* much looking forward to the interaction between Xander and Sano and finding out more about the history between them and Kenshin. I also can't wait to read Megumi's reaction when she finds out that Xander's woman is the one she thought Sano was with that evening. ^_^

    Overall, I'm really enjoying the suspense, the drama and the spice of this story and will be eagerly waiting for the next chapter! Thank you for sharing your wonderful and vivid imagination with us! ^_^

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  • From ANON - lere on March 23, 2004
    They are the best!!!!!! You have a rare talent to make KK lemons. I'll always say that!!!! How can you think this story isnood?ood?????? It is the best lemon here and you don't need to BORROW ideas anywhere because you are original and have a romantic heart and a sweet imagination. You don't write sex scenes without meaning, Heart, soul and body are a fantastic mix and that take my breath away!!!! You can see the caracter's flame and they jump from the PC, alive and real. Never doubt your talent and keep aprimorating your style.

    love you!!!! Big hugs from Brazil!!!

    Lere
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  • From ANON - Mai Mai on March 23, 2004
    I love this story and I know how it feels to just want to end something if you ever need ideas believe me I'll be glad to help in anyway possible!^_~ Keep writting! Love Ya Mai Mai
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  • From ANON - MZ.AMbER EYES on March 22, 2004
    NICELY done... im going go jump in a tub filled with ice now...it is WAY too hot in here...
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