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Reviews for End of A Weary Day--Formating Revised 12/21

By : Lin

From ANON - CybrEmly01 on January 12, 2004
Yeah, me again. I just read most of the reviews that are currently posted. I only saw a few
flames, and those I did see wunsuunsubstantiated. And even though SesshaKenshin did have
a point about how you characterized Battosai, it's your story. You have the right to do anything
you want to it without having to answer to anyone.

On another note, how is it that some people think that a person could only love -one- other
person that way? I've seen beautiful relationships where there are three people, all deeply in
love and lust, and only the normal relationship problems. True, these are very special people,
but it can and does happen. But that isn't my point.

The point is, I still want to know what happens next. I'm thinking that the green-eyed woman is
really a Madame Butterfly type deal. I wonder how Sano would deal with that...

Thank you for reading my little rant, and don't let "The Man" bring you down. (I know, bad pun)

Ja Ne,
CybrEmly
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From ANON - CybrEmly01 on January 12, 2004
Write what you want to write, and screw anyone who tries to tell you not to. Figuratively speaking,
of course. I happen to like your story. And the first version of the Teahouse scene. After all,
Kenshin is Human, Male, and Alive. (Storywise, anyway) What did they expect him to do, have no
physical reaction to an obviously attractive woman? Not very realistic.

Anyways, I hope you continue despite the stupidity of other reviewers. Like Einstein said "The difference
between Genius and Stupidity is Genius has it's limits."

Ja Ne,
CybrEmly
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From ANON - Vii on January 11, 2004
I'm very sorry to hear that you are putting an end to this fanfiction. For what it's worth, I have always enjoyed readihis his fanfiction and hope you will continue with others in the future.

Vii
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From ANON - Jennifer on January 11, 2004
You can't leave! Don't let a bunch of bullshit opinions push you in the wrong direction. You're not worthless. You can write about true love. Hell, I've been in a 'relationship' for several years with a man I truly love and I still can't figure out how to put it in words. But you did it beautifully in perfect content! Please don't leave if only for my sake. It'll keep me away from my therapist for at least one chpater.
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From ANON - kikyo on January 11, 2004
End of a weary day is a wonderful story. I don't think you have abused the characters at all. It is very expressive and quite humorous at times. One of the best I've ever read. I wish you could finish the story and solve the green-eyed woman mystery. Please don't be discouraged. Arigato.
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From ANON - reader on January 11, 2004
in my opinion this story is a great story and I say FUCK everyone else who has a problem with it...if this is something you feel is worth writing than finish it and the hell with everyone else's opinion. True love is in the eye of those who experience it those who commented about it are addicted the the fluff found in romance novel no true love is without real problems....anything worth experiencing is always worth fighting for.

an sad reader
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From ANON - scaredofgirls on January 11, 2004
I wouldn't take such things to heart. I think people just got a little too into things which could be taken as a compliment. I think that that's just the appeal of Kenshin. He's like the perfect man, a lot of his, you know, fanfiction followers think that he'd never conceive of being unfaithful to Kaoru and no one's really ever thread such ground so I think people were just shocked. Personally, I thought the story was quite riveting. The revision seemed a little forced but I think that was to be expected. Just don�t take what a few people think all too seriously because I think that the vast majority of people really enjoyed it.
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From ANON - Ryan on January 11, 2004
Hey hey you're forgivien. I, a guy, never thought any of that stuff about you or what you wrote. You also can't just leave this mystry unsolved, we need to know what become of the situation with Sano and the woman he was supposedly with. It doesn't even havebe lbe lemonised, I just need to know what happens to Sano and Megumi's relationship, and what it was that Tae really saw.
Please continue this wonderful fanfic.
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From ANON - Ph�dre N� Delauney on January 11, 2004
Alright, first of all, I think those people who wrote those stupid reviews were nothing but a bunch of insensitive jerks. The story is how you want it to be. You write what you want, and that is your right. I find nothing wrong with your story. I think those people can just take their stupid opinions and shove them up their asses. I'm sorry I never reviewed now, because I might have helped keep you from getting so depressed over your story if I had expressed my opinion before. They may have the right to express their own opinions, but not when it's as rude as what you described.

Also, from every fic I've ever read, it seems that men are turned on by sight alone sometimes, so you are justified as far as I'm concerned.

Never lose faith in yourself.
-Ph�dre N� Delauney
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From ANON - sunshine hell on January 11, 2004
sweetheart, most of the people who review are dumbass teenagers with severe dillusions of what love is and no idea about the truth of human frailty. Don't take it to heart! This IS a good story. You have not debased the characters in any way. That is the simple truth. if you don't believe me, just look at what your fellow authors scribble. Some of it is completely subliterate. You do not fall into that category. believe in yourself.

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From ANON - Eternity on January 11, 2004
I know it's hard to have people putting down something you've worked so hard to do... I know from experience. It's tough to pull through with all the people bashing your stories and art and such, and it makes you feel really bad. But I truly loved your story. It's absolutely awesome. I wish I could see how the story ended. Please, for your fans, reconsider and continue writing this fic! Thank you, and don't give up! ^^ ~Eternity
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From ANON - Lychee on January 10, 2004
Here's a big F U to all those who flamed you!ame ame on them! I was surprised when you revised that chapter. Personally I thought it was fine the way it was. Perhaps that is because I too am an older fan. Love (and life) is never a simple black and white, it is myriad shades of grey. I love my husband with all my heart, after ten years of marriage we still act like young lovers. We are soul-mates. But we are nlindlind! We both apprieciate a good-looking person. And yes, we can be tempted. We are only human after all. It is the actions we take dealing with the temptations that matter. Many of your detractors are probably rather young, and certainly idealistic in their views of love and human nature. As they get older they will see the truth and honesty in your portayal of these characters. I am sorry that you will not continue this story, I do hope you will not let the immature reactions of some prevent you from writing. As for me, "Thank you for your fine work."
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From ANON - Clemen on January 10, 2004
Sorry again, but I just have to say this, you shouldn't give those pricks the satisfaction of ending your fic. I want see those pricks put themselves out there and recieve flaming reviewers from stupid people like themselves. Hey if they don't like it, just don't read it. I hope you know from me you have a loyal fan and I look forward to your future works. I truly mean everything I said. Please take care and reconsider.
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From ANON - Clemen on January 10, 2004
That suck, I'm sorry you feel like that, but you and everyone who said ill of you should remember it simply fanfiction. It not be taken seriously. It just a way for the fans of any shows to express themselves. You wrote what you felt like writing and no one should speak ill because when you write fanfiction or any type of writing, you guys the authors are putting yourselves out there. I hope you do continue do write fanfiction because you have a great talent, but you should consider not everyone is going to agree or like your writing, but you should write for yourself and those of us that love your writing. Remember those who said you didn't get what true love is or what it means to be in love are simply stupid because everyone is this world has their own defintion of what true love is or what it means to be in love. To criticize a person defintion of what true love is or what it means to be in love is as wrong like to judge someone base just on color, religion,etc. I'm sorry if I drag it on, but I hope you realize to not take these comments seriously, because their simply stupid. You should write for people like us tat love to read differente people defintions of on love, success, etc. I hope you you reconsider finishing "End of a Weary Day" as it sh, th, the way you want. I want to see what happen with Megumi and Sano and especially with the gree-eyed woman. Another thing I like about your story is it show a value point in any relationship, when you have to deal with temptation. I hope people realize even if a relationship has true love, no relationship is prefect. Again I truly hope you reconsider, don't let some ignorance people ruin your passion for writing your ideas. Sincerely Clemen
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From ANON - Randomfan on January 10, 2004
Excuse me, but i just want to tell all the flaming reviewers that what they say is pure BULLSHIT. What the hell do they know about love anyways? I believe that yes, true love is hard to encounter, and that most are lucky to recieve it. That is probably why they degrade your view on love. I haven't gone through many relationships but I have gone through enough to experience a broken heart. It places distrust as a defense for yourself. Thus, shattering your belief in actual love. Please continue the story and ignore those who insist on argueing. Don't let them get to you when you have more talent than many of the works I have read. Just remember your reans ans when you read crap from morons like that again.
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