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Reviews for End of A Weary Day--Formating Revised 12/21

By : Lin
  • From ANON - anonymous on December 29, 2003
    i think that u need to be more specific in the sex scenes. i got confused halfway through it! that is all. The rest was very good! please make more.
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  • From ANON - SesshaKenshin on December 27, 2003
    yo!! This story is so GOOD!!! sessha would rate it perfect do gozaru!! I hope you update soon...sessha wants to see his "turn" *wink*. This is totally one of the best lemons i've ever read. Anyway, are yu familiar with the story "wild welcome home"? yep, it's an rk fic..."I" just got it posted, again..yep, it is sessha no fic. Sessha used to post it at ff.net but they deleted my fic due to *ahem*. Anyway, sessha would like to ask for help. I don't know what's wrong, but sessha can't login. And actually, if you noticed, THERE WAS NO AUTHOR IN MY STORY. argh! frustrating! what's wrong! sessha can't post the other chapters de gozaru and sessha don't like it that his name is not posted as its author. Please help me....Oh! and please update soon too^^ you camailmail sessha at: sessha_oro@hotmail.com....(just makin sure)
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  • From ANON - cattibrie-dono on December 27, 2003
    i enjoy your writting very much, your spelling has vastly improved, i would still rephrase the part about the sexual encounter against the post, it was not worded right, if you know what i mean, i would have stgated something like it made her feel like a virgin again, but otherwise i look forward to more of your stories, keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - MZ.AMbER EYES on December 25, 2003
    omg! i loved it! kenshin is so sweet in here >.
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  • From ANON - lere on December 25, 2003
    Lere's swirling eyes @ @!!!! She roses and her head is spinning. YOU MADE THE POOR GIRL FAINT!!!!! Evil author!!!! Bad, bad, wonderful, great, fantastic author!!!!!!

    That man is the most sexy beast in all the world!!!! It was your best lemon EVER!!! My palms are sweat and cold, my knees are shaking yet and I have a burning feeling in my stomach. Just fantastic!!!!! I love Kenshin, but YOUR Battousai was amazing.

    Big hugs from Brazil!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - James on December 20, 2003
    Beautiful. Your emotional and physical description is top notch (you really capture how and what people tend to feel), and your tribute to Kenshin and Kaoru's love is simply wonderful.
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  • From ANON - lere on December 18, 2003
    It's me again!!!! Your number one fan! And I love the fact you choose to transform the lemons series into a story. But Ie yoe you keep the lemons coming, you know? The other couples are fun but KK will always be the best and you have a special talent to write about them.

    Hugs from Brazil!!!!
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  • From ANON - KagomeKat15 on December 14, 2003
    ...............wow...............
    That's really, really good!! Hell, that's fuckin' awesome!!! So descriptive and intense...THAT'S how to write a damn good story!!!
    KagoKitty
    ^-.~^

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  • From ANON - Anon on December 14, 2003
    i love your story, kanzen ne tsuki-san. especially the japanese terms you use.
    please update soon. if it's not too much trouble, add a little play and mischieviousness
    in the next chapter(you with me?)arigato!
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  • From ANON - Caroline on December 11, 2003
    great story!
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  • From ANON - gaby (hyatt) on December 07, 2003
    good idea.
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  • From ANON - caged bird on November 20, 2003
    you said that you needed a bit of fluff and so decided to write it for yourself. well thankyou 'cause this girl needed it too. yummy! my only compt wot would be that you should have condensed the story down in to one fic with multiple chapters instead of three separate fics. but that's not really a complaint, more of a suggestion. the writing itself was superb and just what this k/k/b lover needed. the dynamic between the wanderer and the murderer over their combined sexual tension makes for such excellent reading. thankyou again!
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  • From ANON - ennsaiyn on November 18, 2003
    Never loved the Battousai more. Keep up the good work, please.
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  • From ANON - Anime Goddess on November 10, 2003
    I am...at a loss for words. I have just read, what I believe to be one of the most beautifulfanfictions of all time. To call it a lemon would somehow..cheapen it's greatness. I adore how you describe everything, and how you make Kenshin behave as a human would. You never seem to see Kenshin get angry at mundane things do you? Such as you made him with the laundary. I think you wrote Kenshin's character very well, without flaw if possible. And of course your brilliant display of the ever present battosai/Rurouni struggle inside him. You are an inspiration! And I hope that I can follow in your example and write a 'lemon' this magnificently!

    Well Don Gre Great job!!!

    ~Anime Goddess, Lindsey
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  • From ANON - Mimi on November 07, 2003
    WOW... So you are going to write more aren't you? I mean obviously you have talent. Your story has depth... A decent depth that allows adequate build up for the ~_* climax. There are happier situations that you could elaborate on and all of us would enjoy it, as we did this little jewel in the sea of RK perversious-obsession. Usually I don't read... angst. Kinda brings me down. However on a scale 1-10 comparing stuff I would usually find my self reading to your little angsty piece.. I give you a 9.9 Why? Because nothing is a 10 because nothing is perfect. Sometimes it's good for a build up of emotions that need to be given an outlet. I'm glad you didn't let your emotional down time harded you heart. There's just something about that Himura Kenshin... Makes everything fall into place or fall apart. Thankyou for sharing, it's a good thing to share.

    Peace,
    Mimi
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