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Reviews for Too bad you\'re beautiful

By : DeguchiMoNaku
  • From ANON - Crmy on December 22, 2006
    Hello,

    you have a good story line so far, but i'm sorry to say, not trying to be mean, your chapters are a little short and the plot is kind o completely screwed up, but other then that, i hope you update soon
    Cheers
    Crmy
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  • From ANON - HentaiZaru on October 15, 2006
    this story is great, please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Laura on September 08, 2006
    Aah.. such a nice fic, un ^^ You should update! i was browsing through old fics for Gravitation and I saw this one, un.. Did you just give up on it? Because it has a LOT of potential! I love it
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  • From ANON - Ash-chan on January 22, 2006
    Not bad, though a bit OOC for my liking.
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  • From ANON - JouKaibaMokie on October 22, 2005
    whoa! I hate yuki so bad, well from the first time read it I hated him and Tohma,anyways update soon
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  • From ANON - Fear Is The Mind Killer on October 04, 2005
    hey. this was really dark, I didn't expect that. It almost looks the one I am writing under FanFiction.net (Bloody Kisses) look pretty light. -mental note I must work on that.- I think you have a masterful idea of the inner workings of Eiri Yuki. I really do. So. Keep pn keeping on and I hope to see more of you soon. ;-)
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  • From ANON - Youkai Dreams on August 16, 2005
    Konnichiwa!
    I enjoyed reading your story so far, it was nicely written. There are some grammatical and puncuation mistakes, as well as some spelling mistakes that should be corrected. If you do not know which I am talking about, I will glady tell you. Just IM me at Shadowgirl84525@Hotmail.Com (I'll most-likely IM you instead, because I usually get in touch with authors of stories I like ^^).

    Now, secondly, you have "onegai" twice in the chapter that should be "kudosai," since Shuichi is requesting something of Eiri.
    Other than that, it's fine. Nice work.
    -Youkai Dreams

    PS- By the way, I don't review every chapter of any story unless it's short. Expect reviews from me every five or so chapters.
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  • From ANON - Willow Osbourne on July 03, 2005
    MORE PLEASE!!! GO ON! I now you can do it! You want to, right? RIGHT?
    You HAVE to! Pretty pleeeeeaase!!!! *makespuppyeyes*
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  • From Shiba on May 26, 2005
    HURRY UP WITH THE NEXT CHAPPIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IM SO BORED AND I WANNA READ MORE!!!
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  • From ANON - AleX on February 12, 2005
    MORE MORE MORE!!!!! must have more *twitchs convosivly* it's February more!!!! *squeals* please it's good really good

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  • From ANON - Kyuubi no Kitsune on December 12, 2004
    This is a fair fic. The characters are a bit OOC (or VERY OOC, depanding on how you look at it). But the only thing that REALLY gets me is your fangirl japanese. Ok, they live in japan. We know they are speaking japanese. It makes your story look very odd when you insert random words of japanese in with a sentance full of english. It just doesn't make much sense. About the only time I can see japanese being used at all is in names of people, places, or objects Don't get me wrong now; this isn't a flame, but please avoid the fangirl japanese as it it very distracting.
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  • From ANON - kat on December 01, 2004
    I wish that you would add more chapters to this story!..I really love it and have been waiting for months!..Plese add more....
    lotsalove
    kat
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  • From ANON - Angel_Dove on August 15, 2004
    This is a very good fic. I was just curious on the last time you worked on this. I myself am trying to get into the swing of things again with my writing. I haven't scene more than the first three episodes of Gravitation but I believe that they way you contructed Yuki and Shindo is great. They actually sound like the ones on the movie. Great job!
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  • From ANON - Night Kitsune on August 05, 2004
    I really like the the way you depict Yuki, because I view him in the same light. And I thought your writing and style was great, it didn't seem young at all, of course, I'm 18 too. I really hope you continue eventually!
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  • From ANON - Dar ï on January 24, 1920
    i'm very interested to see where you're going with this fic.
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