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Reviews for Sibling Rivalry

By : SpiralBreeze
  • From ANON - Kevin Keane on August 27, 2004
    This is a really creepy story. You know that don't you? Max scares me. You even made me use short sentances. I never do that. I normally rant in long sentances, using too many commas and adding unrelated things to them, like how Ash should have proven he was a virgin medically before they sentanced him, it's really easy to do, all you have to do is urinate ten feet or something, but I have to becabecabecause he aistyisty just ruined that plea.
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  • From ANON - Patrick on August 26, 2004
    Wow! I love this story! You are awesome, I absolutely loved how you showed how fucked up Max is, I've always known he had a screw loose, little bastard. The Ash/Misty scene was absolutely beautiful, and when I say beautiful I mean it was so moving and touching it was great. I can't wait for the next chappie, keep up the great work
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  • From ANON - Unknown on August 25, 2004
    (In shock after reading this)

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    .........................................

    (Snaps out of shock)

    ...Something's wrong with you...really!


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  • From ANON - RoboRed on August 24, 2004
    Dang...that chapter was a freaking work of art...I really liked that part with ASh and Misty together. What he said was almost like poetry. Great job!
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  • From ANON - Wolfboy1988 on August 21, 2004
    O.O; i can see this wont end well..... oh well keep the story going!
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  • From ANON - ChaosD on August 19, 2004
    A little off the deep end, but craziness and chaos are what I like. Great story, keep updating!
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  • From ANON - Samzen on August 18, 2004
    judge ruled :)
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  • From ANON - Jimbo_2400 on August 17, 2004
    I have to say this story is amazing. That's the only thing that describes it accurately. Keep up the incredible work and get the next chapter out soon.
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  • From ANON - Darkened Soul on August 11, 2004
    heh...you say that something is wrong with you...well guess what. There is nothing wrong. The imagination of a human being can dive deeper into the depths of self torture and mutilation. If anything you could have gone even further with the mutilation that Max rightly deserved. But you didn't therefore you are not mad. Compared to some of society's people who I'm sure venture even further into the acts of sexuality and mutilation you were pretty light. May this give you some solice and merit towards your own worth and may you update soon.
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  • From ANON - man wtf on August 06, 2004
    dude this is just one !@#$%^ Fanfiction u have to be a sick person in the head to write this i jsut read one chapter and i know this is disgusting
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  • From ANON - MiniWankisHuge on July 31, 2004
    You are a fucking gen Gen Genius i say. You are a pimp and if your a girl you a she-pimp. Jesus christ women. I especially like the giovanni-ash family connection though i would have preferred a full trial with Gio showing his lawyer prowess. Also nice sex scenes not as detailed or long as i like but still very nice
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  • From ANON - Botched on July 25, 2004
    I would love a sequal and hopefully i can think up some ideas for you. but another great chapter but you kept your loyal readers in suspense for too long. good luck
    and i'll be watching for the next chapter. -Botched
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  • From on July 21, 2004
    Wow, cute story ^^
    (Am I too late?)
    I really like it, maybe cause I can't stand Max ^^'
    Just keep on writing, will ya? Pleazzzzzzzzze.
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  • From ANON - GoldstormKaos on July 20, 2004
    And I was hoping for a scene of Pikachu shocking the shit outta some idiot, either the Brit, Max, or that damn judge...
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  • From ANON - vanessa on July 19, 2004
    I love this story, please update...it has been longer than two weeks lol. Your an awesome writer
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