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Reviews for Crash

By : Shuukitty
  • From ANON - A. Lafaye on October 25, 2005
    Understanable about the harddrive crashing. I've lost stuff like that myself--including pictures and downloaded music. As of right now, I do half of my writing at my college library because I have a virus on my computer that slows it down and makes it hard to right completely and as fast as I write ;) Nice suggestion with the imagination, by the way. With all that you both wrote, I'm sure that no one who read this felt that they couldn't imagine a nice ending for Shuichi and Yuki.
    I liked this story a lot. It had a nice ending, even if it wasn't completed as planned. It totally held true to what was written in the mangas and show and showed what they have to go through, even if it is an alternate universe. Well done.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 25, 2005
    hmmmm very good :o however... I'm curious about the change in the timeline... Shuichi was raped, by the gang that Aizawa hired. It's very obvious in the manga, and implied in the anime. I'm not sure if you're doing fanfiction lisence, or if you don't know tha really did happen-which i doubt.

    Anyways... I know it's the 1st chapter I'm reviewing, and I intendt to read the rest. good job!
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  • From ANON - PIKACHU GODDESS on May 21, 2005
    I was compelled to finish reading this, it was so good! Oh, the dorama, the angst, the pain, the sadness, the worry, it was so much like life that I forgot it was just a story and not Real Life! (At least not to "outsiders"!) This story was like a slice of life, were you a fly on the wall? I hope to DEFINATELY read more from you!

    *BOWS* Thank you for making Shu-chan and Yuki-chan more real than ever before to me!
    PIKACHU GODDESS
    (o';'o)
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  • From ANON - YaoiLoverVixen on December 14, 2004
    this is one of the most amazing stories i have ever read.

    it does drag a bit but i am willing to way get over it.

    I havea quesiton though.

    is there supposed to be a chapter 9 between 8 and 10?

    please tell me because i want to continue reading the story as soon as possible!
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  • From ANON - BloodofBelladonna on August 30, 2004
    More!!!! This fic is glorious. ^^
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  • From ANON - Nikki on June 08, 2004
    OK, I understand WHY you did this, but I still don't have to like it! It's like gettting a lover to the point of orgasm, and then walking away. Sure, you can always finish yourself off (after you get over the shock), but it just somehow isn't quite what you were expecting, and therefore, not quite as satisfying. AGH! OK, there I said what I wanted, and I will still continue to read your stuff, your great, but if you jilt a lover too many times, they aren't happy! Please don't do this too us (your readers) and me (your lover in this analogy) againh!
    Thanks. ;)
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  • From ANON - darcy on June 01, 2004
    i enjoyed your fiction very much. very well done. =D
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  • From ANON - Nikki on April 27, 2004
    You are positively evil leaving off where you did! Wow, another great chapter, and thanks to the ending, I am expecting the next to be wonderful too. UGH!!! More soon please!
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  • From ANON - mirai aria on April 25, 2004
    : 3 Latest chapter rocks. I was hoping it was Shu and you answered my wish :-D I totally understand why Shu was like that and it was just so real. It's like you had actors Yuk Yuki and Shu's characters and you put them in the situation THEN wrote about their reactions... It was just neat. :-) I can't wait for the next chapter and I loved Saiyuki Reborn's new chapters (I'm still reading the last chapter right now : 3) I think the mom cares for Shuichi, the problem is she refuses to try and see things in any other way but HER way, which royally sucks. Grr to the mom. Even more so to the pansy granpa. I bet he was gay too but he had to marry and so he's grumpy now because he hasn't gotten laid for yeaaars... decaaades...

    ^_^; I'm insane..
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  • From ANON - mirai aria on April 25, 2004

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  • From PatoSan on April 25, 2004
    That was wonderful yet again. I liked how you handled the 'misunderstanding' betweeen them without it being overdramatic. The thing I love the most about this story is how human it feels. And you are managing to tell the story with little words, through actions and some thoughts here and there; I'm positively jealous! I have seen some things here in Yuki tht I ahdn't anywhere else, and that I wanted to include in my own writing, but after reading this I fail to see the point because you guys have done a marvellous job out of it, truly. It's how you are writing a relation tha that's not perfect but wants to work; how you show that Yuki does care for Shuchi but still finds him annoying and hard to deal with. It's perfec lov loved the update, and I'm still wondering if this is the last we'll see of Shu's family (I doubt it). I'm seriously looking forward the upcoming chapters, take care and excellent job as always. Bloody fantastic.
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  • From ANON - Aja (imayb1) on April 25, 2004
    Ach! I'm so relieved that they're out of that house. I was afraid Shu's mom's wicked family would do something awful to prevent them from leaving, or to try and 'stop' or 'reclaim' Shuichi. Your ficcy has kept my eyes glued to the screen to consume every word and to glean meaning from every nuance of words and actions. Your updates make me so happy! :D It seems to me that Yuki is slowly realizing that Shu means a great deal to him. I love the subtle development. ...And, of course, I look forward to more!
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  • From ANON - Bysexual Pygmy on April 24, 2004
    poor shuichi, thats so sad
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  • From ANON - Aja (imayb1) on April 23, 2004
    I'm so glad you updated! Another wonderful, powerful, humanistic chapter! I am anxious to see what happens now that the 'secret' is out to the Shindous. I feel a little like I'm watching a haunted house movie: everything is telling them to 'GET OUT' and they are staying... it can only be trouble. :D I will keep watching for updates! I'm so excited that you haven't given up on this story!!
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  • From ANON - Nikki on April 23, 2004
    I am really liking this story so far. I enjoy the the details, twists, and feelings laden into each chapter. I can hardly wait to read more.! Thanks and keep up the good work!
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