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Reviews for Relax and Hang On -- Again

By : cupnjava
  • From ANON - Xistential on August 27, 2004
    Update Oh please. I beg you!
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  • From ANON - Hakuryuu on August 22, 2004
    This was fantastic. There was a number of times where I absolutely laughed out loud (ie. their nicknames... the "Oh I think I'll jump off a cliff" for Hakkai XD!!!!!) but the whole thing was great. I love how Tenpou is always soooo... I dunno... bastardly? Hakkai can be pretty bitchy himself, sometimes... and that's hilarious. His more caustic side, when it comes out, is always fun to explore, ne? And poor, poor Kenren... I never thought of that ^^() little guy prolly got his butt kicked more than anyone on the battlefield! But I digress. I loved how you put more emotion into their words... it was a little unclear (I think intentionally, for part of it) when Hakkai went bac his his room and then went missing... but that was easily remedied. Poor Dragon King guy... although he seemed to really kinda mellow out as Hakuryuu, ne? What else what else... oh the part where Goku believes he's asleep... priceless. I think you've done amazingly well with all of the characters and keeping them Canon... I'd just make sure that you remember that usually Sanzo is pretty darn serious, and he has more of an understanding relationship with Hakkai. He'd prolly be more willing to accept Hakkai than Hakkai thinks, even though he'd do it in his own, stoic way... and he definately wouldn't give Gojyo an inch. :) ANYWAY! Sheesh I get long-winded sometimes! Keep it up, I'd definately check out that Honeymoon fic (check it out with a box of kleenex, though. Trust me. You'll need it.) and I can't wait to read more!!!!!
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  • From ANON - addictedtomarbles on August 22, 2004
    Oh I love this! It's damn sexy and makes mine ine tingle when I read it. Update quickly! You're really good at this
    ^_^ Mmm... Kinky Tenpou
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  • From ANON - Shinigami on August 20, 2004
    What a great, fun read! In addition to excellent HakkaiXGojyo action *wiggles eyebrows lasciviously*, I adore your interpretation of Sanzo. Angsty Sanzo makes me sleepy. I would love to see a Sanzo-centric fic in that style. Mayhap a companion piece? A “meanwhile”? Anyway, I’ve really enjoyed these chapters. Keep ‘em coming (so to speak)!
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  • From ANON - Flamingolo on August 19, 2004
    This is freaking interesting! You wrote some fabulously steamy lemons *drools on 'self*. I loved the spin on Hakkai taking control...how hot can one scene be? I can't wait for more!

    ps. Did I mention that the lemons were amazing?
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  • From ANON - mzblue on August 19, 2004
    ooooooo you've done it now. Talk about making a person squirm, this fic was a killer. Multiple personalities & multiple orgasms galore. I love the way you've captured Hakkai's psychological state of mind. And you did a good job with your writing in keeping all of his personalities separate enough where the reader could tell who was in charge. Ahh Goyjo that will teach you, keep your eye on the quiet ones!! Also Sanzo's character, man I laughed my ass off! Talk about getting your freak on he's just sooooo twisted, but that's why Ie hie him. Shame on Sanzo, using his position as a monk to hit some on the side. You've done a great job, I can't wait to see what's next. Great job!
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  • From ANON - mel on August 07, 2004
    Thanks for writing more ^_^ Kink is always good.
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  • From ANON - Cole\'sLover on August 07, 2004
    Whoa, this just gets better and better. PLEASE keep posting chapters for this one. Sanzo's twisted sense of humor doesn't surprise me in the least bit. There are so many possibilites for this storyline. I like your writing style so just keep it going (hint! hint!) ^ _ ^
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  • From ANON - Nozomi on August 07, 2004
    Ooh, this is good. Can't wait for more! Love the way you're toying with Hakkai's mind ^_^
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  • From ANON - Hakuryuu on August 06, 2004
    HEY! Thanks for outlining it... it made it tons easier to understand. LOVE the second chapter, the angst, the sanzo bits, etc! Glorious, absolutely glorious. You have an uncanny ability to read into their characters and find perepheral issues that still effect them. Keep it up! I can't wait to read more!

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  • From ANON - Shota-kun on July 19, 2004
    The second I saw this title I knew I had to click it. "...no entirely straight man kills demons with one hand on his hip." What a *good*, *good* line that is...
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  • From ANON - Hakuryuu on July 18, 2004
    This was glorious. I was absolutely in love with the first one, or the "original", but this is really the kicker. How often do you get one of your fav. fanfics continued?!? Anyway! Characterizations are awesome... poor Hakkai, he just gets all the angst, eh? :) We wouldn't want it any other way. And props to Sanzo. I think you totally called it. I'm not sure if you've seen Reload yet, but there's one scene where he just lauuuuuughs.... when you see it you'll know what I mean. Anyway, I think he's got some terribly wicked and yet terribly funny sense of humor hidden in there somewhere... XD I bet Kanzeon laughed her head off in heaven when he was there. BUT I'm off topic! I'd love to see the Kenren/Tenpou development come XD just cuz I love them too... and if you've never read "Honeymoon" on mediaminer.org (I don't think it's here) then please do. It's one of my favs too, but it's Kenren/Tenpou. One thing to work on is a little bit of transition, especially in the beginning (to show that it's before Hang On 1). Your detail is great, and I love how you write shorter paragraphs that switch between the two of them. It really gives a sense of action :) WAI!!!!!!!!!!!!! I just love it. Keep it up pleeeeeeeeeeease! :)
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