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By : cupnjava

From ANON - fuzzybunnytoo on May 26, 2006
How do I tell you what I have gotten from your fiction. I love how you write and enjoy every minute of the read. The chapter was quite long but I was able to fight for the computer and win. Yeah me! The dragon and dog part was inspired. You write the characters to where you know so much about them and how they feel. It is wonderful. Very enjoyable!
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From ANON - Gg on February 02, 2006
I love the story so far but are u ever going to up-date? please do so soon . thank u
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From ANON - fuzzybunnytoo on December 13, 2005
I have not reviewed your fanfic until now. I have read to thsi end and have enjoied everyminute of it. There have been long days and nights in front of the computer and even muffled giggles during the night so as not to wake up the houshold. You have a real knowladge of the language and I have REALLY enjoied Hakkai and Goyjo , who are my favorite caracters of all and they seem to come and visit me at night when I am asleep thanks to you .many boxes of pocky to you and some realy (good) brownies, too. Cna't wait for another chapter,,,,type little ....fingers.......type. Go cup!
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From ANON - Shadowfox13 on October 30, 2005
Geeze, I finally get to review! Sorry RL's taken me away so long, not to mention a few projects that need doing. *sigh* Anyway, I really loved this chapter (CJ I haven't missed any other chappies have I?) It was both extremely HOT and tender. I think I teared up a time or two. *LOL* Kou is as protective of his sister as ever. I hope for the brothers' sake that eventually some kind of reconciliation can happen. And....I enjoyed reading the interaction between all the characters too. I eagerly await for the next chapter of course when it can come...I mean be posted, sorry. The story as it always is, is very well thought out and well written, and as ever a pleasure to read. Hm....me thinks that Gojyo was maybe even a little healed? But what about Hakkai? How's he gonna react now? And what's Sanzo gonna say to Gojyo about his flirtation with dangerous things? Hm...being drunk seems to help Sanguinans get a little loose even with the restraints, ne? Gosh, there's so much I wanna post but I actually need to go do some work now. Keep up the good work ^.^V
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From ANON - Travellyr on October 25, 2005
^__^ I've been rereading this, and I must say that I like Ah'Nesty, I _LOVE_ the unspoken jokes and the SQUIRMING that comes from her presence, and I just like her. She's a very good catalyst.

However, I absolutely adore the Merciful Goddess and Jiroshin in this story. They never, never fail to make me laugh out loud, and you've done an excellent job with their characters.

...I can't wait until I reach part 19 again.
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From ANON - Kali on October 17, 2005
Wow. I have to say this is one of the best Saiyuki fics I've ever read. Actually, to be more accurate, it's one of the best yaoi fanfics I've ever read. lol You've certainly got a handle on the boys' characters, and the way you have integrated their Gaiden personas into everything is really inventive and smoothly done. �ber kudos for originality and innovativeness! I also don't know whether to be cheering for Jiroshin or Bosatsu finally having a little fun! I very much enjoy the psychological aspects you're presenting here. Playing with the characters' minds is always exciting, isn't it? I'm aslo quite impressed with your creativity in naming your OCs. Very original there, too. The only factor I'm still unsure about (and this is just personal preference and opinion based on reading most of the manga and watching all the anime thus far) is the possibility of pairing up Sanzo with Hakkai and/or Gojyo. I don't mind it so much with their Gaiden selves, but in their current incarnations, I just don't see it happening. However, being a writer myself (though my most prevelant fandom happens to be Beyblade at the moment, with the odd Yu-Gi-Oh! and Digimon fic thrown in), I totally understand one's creative license, so ignore me. lol Write it however you want, because I promise I'll still be reading it! I will say I do enjoy the tension that comes up between them all because of that possiblity though. Well, well done. It took me four hours to read this whole fic to the most recent chapter, and I will be absolutely ecstatic to spend another four reading it again and again...hopefully with a new chapter coming soon? Wonderful work and please keep on writing! It's been a joy!

Kali
(Yami FireKali - I didn't log in)
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From ANON - Crimson on September 26, 2005
Gods it takes forever to read one of your chapters, but I loved every minute. I was skeptical about the threesome, but you did it, and I loved it. Really enjoyed the SanzoxGoku stuff in this one too, and the 'I never' stuff, genious. I must say, the biggest problem I have with the story is the past lover thing for Konzen and Tenpou, and any future possibilities of Sanzo and Hakkai going at it. now, if the others are involved, and Sanzo just happens to get his "Hakkai is too damn sexy for his own good" rocks off, then fine, but not a one on one. Course, that wouldn't happen the way you have things going, anyway, but I just want to be sure. The reason I have a problem with Tenpou and Konzen is because Konzen is a certified virgin. In the anime Tenpou may say Konzen has never known the touch of a WOMAN, but in the manga he says another PERSON. It's only woman in the anime because that goes better with what Kenren says just before that, but the real line is person. Just being nitpicky, you have your rights and the story is truly my favorite of all time. I especially like how you manage to fit in little things only true fans would get, having seen the whole thing. Anyway, always looking forward to more.
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From ANON - Travellyr on September 18, 2005
This chapter was so. incredibly. hot. I discovered a new kink in myself (mirrors will never be -quite- the same again, in a very nice way), and reveled in some old favorites. I think I shall be grinning at inappropriate moments all week, and I look forward to it. ^_^
Thank you very, very much for a wonderful evening read.
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From ANON - Despina on September 11, 2005
I'm so glad you are back because totally YOU KICK ASS!!!

So well written, so messed up, so incredibly hot.

Well done, and thank you so much for sharing this with us.
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From ANON - Quirk on September 09, 2005
Yay! Another chapter! I've never heard of the fuzzy duck drinking game, so I think at some point I'm going to write out the instructions for it and pass it along, if you don't mind. We seem to be collecting drinking games for some reason. ^_^;

I still like Ah'Nesty; this was a one time thing, and somewhere along the way, it'll do some good. At least, I think so. The mirrors- LOVED them. People don't do enough with mirrors. Damned western body image issues, I guess. That stuff Hakkai was drinking, for some bizarre reason, cracked me up. Hakkai DRUNK cracked me up. ^_^ Goku made me proud, though. He's so centered, and he seems to know his limits, and it just makes me happy. I am looking forward to The Talk between Hakkai and Goku concerning heterosexual biology. I honestly don't know if Goku's even thought of that, that they could be making babies. And has Yonae talked to Lirin? (I can't really see Kou doing it, so I'm just assuming...)

The dragons are just cute. :D

I understand about the word check going out. I'm facing the same situation. But I think you've done your very best, and who can ask for more? (bow) Thank you so very much. Well, my brain is trying to shut down, so I'll be quiet now.
~Q

Oh, wait! Was Goku's remark about Gojyo a deliberate prod at Sanzo? My evil little voice won't stop giggling manically about it as a poke at Sanzo's attraction to Hakkai.

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From ANON - Ohajiki on September 01, 2005
Hey love,

Wow the lemon was hot ... very nice and I like the way the threesome was handled. I also like how you snuck in Ah'nesty's intentions to take Hakkai/Gonou away but learning that Hakkai isn't Gonou. I was also pleased to see that Hakkai gets jealous when his barriers are down.

Ah absinthe ... yes that is the traditional way to drink it. I've never had the illegal stuff, but I've have had the polish 95% proof stuff, usually mixed with vodka the same strength (hellshot it's called at the bar). The rush is quite scary, you do start to see things in detail but for some reason you can't touch that detail, like raindrops. I usually drink it straight or with lemonade and ice. I can be a bit of a lush though. The feeling of being drunk on absinthe -for me anyway - is the ooh-look-shiny phase and I think you portrayed that well, but with the darkness of Hakkai's youkai side tainting it. We don't see Hakkai let go very much and so I think these tightly laced emotions tend to spill out and I like how the absinthe loosened the lock. (and Hakkai's vine adorned endowments ^_^ made for one happily lecherous reader)

Drinking games - I liked these and would have loved to see it in the manga or the anime. I remember Fuzzy Duck from my first year and we had "Never have I ever" for the "I never" game. It was a scene I could see happening in the anime.

And congratulations to Goujun too, with his lecherous wife ^_^

I also like the mirrors scene with Goku and Sanzo. Sanzo's an exhibitionist really, same as Kougaiji's always gonna be over-protective. I think Goku's gonna have to start wearing a cup before long otherwise Kou will commence some surgery. I think a lot of people forget that Lirin's actually older than she appears, perhaps the relative maturity of Yaone, Kougaiji and Dokugakuji tends to make her seem younger. Although I'm not sure about a pregnancy thing going on, I'm not sure about that as a direction.

When I read the youkai Hakkai bits coupled with Ah'nesty's reaction my first thought was "Aww, no one loves youkai Hakkai (except the fans!)" but Gojyo's still there. They are both so needy. It's sweet, but just as broken as the other. I think the subtitle for this fiction ocould be "Don't leave me" or "Don't let go"

Gojyo is hot when he cums!

Although feeding us with this now only makes us hungry for more ... you do realise this.
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From ANON - Paisley on August 29, 2005
I didn't hate the threesome as much as I thought I would have. But I was expecting Gojyo to just knock her out and say " GET OFF, MINE BITCH!" I'm glad she's gone. Yay. Like I said, she was cool, when she wasn't touching Gojyo. Argh.

But this chapter had me cracking up like crazy. Hakkai being drunk was hilarious, I kept sending them to my friend Maria and she couldn't stop laughing either.

Yes, I DID catch the Gojyo x Goku line. That was awwwwwwwesome. Gojyo [in my mind] looks hot standing there, let alone cumming.

OMFG. And when Gojyo licked the syrup off Hakkai's chin and started making out with him...god, if that was a scene in the anime I would have started masturbating. That was fucking sexy. You. You are god.

I also realized I love how your coordinate all the events that really happened in Gensomaden into the story. It adds a sense of...like, realisim. Like I almost think if they made Saiyuki Reload Gunlock...2 or whatever, that that's what it would be. It's just so true and possible.

Let's just hope they find your fanfiction and say, " Hey, let's make this into a Saiyuki Porno Series."

I would spend...so much on it.

You wouldn't have to, you'd be getting money for the idea so...you'd be kinda loaded. Lucky. I want a write a porno series inspiring fanfiction. D:

But as always, another amazing chapter. I almost cried when I saw that it was updated.
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From Miaren on August 27, 2005
I thoroughly enjoyed the new chapter, but I have to say that seeing Hakkai completely blitzed had me in stitches. I never knew that abisinthe was supposed to taste like black licorice - I must put that on the "illegal things I might try" next to non-imported Ouzo.
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From ANON - Gracie Musica on August 27, 2005
Java, words just can't express how much I love this story and your writing. You are, without a dobut, one of the best authors (not just fanfic authors) I have ever read in my entire life. I am honored that you consider me both a peer and a friend. Congratulations on your latest chapter, it was yet another gem in your already brilliant collection.

Love you! :: heart ::
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From ANON - Kage Ohkami on August 27, 2005
Whahaaha!! I'm leaving you a proper review! Go me! XDDD

Whee~ I like that idea with the mirrors! Niiiice~ Kinky, XD There's something very... special about uke!Sanzo... *snickers* When Sanzo was telling Goku not to get any ideas ((after they saw Gojyo and Hakkai)) it made me think of your "18 Thinks You Never Wanna Hear During Sex- Saiyuki Style; Goku's diadem hitting the floor." *falls over giggling*

Your threesome was hot~ *fans self* I hope it was worth all those people telling you they hated Ah'Nesty, XD; I liked her though... I like the idea of grey contacts too, O.O Yeah but anyways, XD, I love Hakkai's demon form... who's name I could never hope to spell without looking at it, XD;; So yeah. I love how you portray him though, and how he see's Gojyo. I remember back when dudes captured Gojyo or something... in a cave I think? And Hakkai took off his limiters and killed them all to rescue Gojyo. I just love how he doesn't actually SEE, but more like he sense's. He doesn't see Gojyo physically as much as see's him as fire and red water and stuff... Then in the cave deal I was talking about he didn't see the demons as much as he smelled their fear and blood and stuff. *sniffles* Tho' it was sad how he inflicted all those wounds on himself...

....Why am I talking about a forever-ago chapter NOW?? Oo;; *kicks self back on subject*

The I Never game is one I've heard/read about before, but yours was by far the funniest, XDD I loved all the little inside jokes in there and stuff! God I was cracking up soo bad in that part. The Fuzzy Duck sounds like a fun game too... to play though, ^^; Must be pretty hard to pull off in a fic...

I'm actually kinda sad Ah'Nesty left... I liked her okay. She makes good for a threesome too!! *cackles* XD I was surprised when Hakkai just... ENTERED her though! I mean, I was just like "O.O Ohh shit..." but the way you explained it all makes sense and stuff... Still a tense moment though, heehee. I wanna know what the note says! I hope Hakkai doesn't feel bad or anything. Oo That's all that poor guy needs, lol.

This chapter was great ((of course)) can't wait for the next!! *bounces*

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LaTeR ^___^

Kage
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