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Reviews for Concubine Chronicles

By : bsmartfanfic
  • From ANON - The G on August 31, 2005
    bsmart. I'm not sure how you can think you suck, do to the fact that the majority of Authors on AFF get 1-3 reviews per story...And you have 57 on this one Alone. All of your storys are frankly, incredible. They simply are. You go to a level of Detail that Most Authors here can't hope to achieve. You have One of the Highest hit rates on the counter. Your work is beutifull, and it inspires. This is my Favorite Story on AFF to date, And I am, and I am certain that anyone who has read your work is aswell, looking foreward to the Eighth Chapter to this Fiction. As I have followed your work, I realize that you take quite some time to update, but the wait is well worth it. Your indepth look into the characters thoughts and feelings is wonderful, the details in your love scenes is breath taking. Your work isn't the same old smut in every piece. You go to great lengths to think up good plots, even in some of your earlier works. As far as I'm concerned, your work is the best, and this one is especially good.

    Also, I would like to take a moment and explain the vast majority of AFF viewers to you for a moment. I can do so in one word: Horny.
    They may greatly enjoy a story, but not review it do to more...Urgent buisness. So, while one cannot expect as many reviews as one would like, and the ones you get may not be as detailed as you would like, know that your story is enjoyed, and bask in the hit counter mark.

    -The G
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  • From ANON - Littleredhat on August 07, 2005
    I love this story. Please update soon! You gotta know that Tenchi's problems are just begining. ^_^ But Tenchi doesn't care anymore, cause he gets sex!
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  • From ANON - Loneman on August 05, 2005
    u hav a lot of spelling errors in the story general. copy it to word perfect or something like it and correct it. repost it latr. despite the errors, a great story
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  • From ANON - jkblake on August 05, 2005
    You take time to update, but it is so worth it. I really hope the next xhapter is completed soon though
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  • From ANON - Loneman on August 04, 2005
    u do not suck, ur actually pretty good. fuck that, fuckin awesome. plez, dont let this story die here. keep going. plez plez plez plez plez plez keep going.
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  • From ANON - Tunod on July 31, 2005
    You don't suck. Hell, I quite liked it. Of course, I'm a sucker for the sweet stuff, so.
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  • From ANON - kuma on July 07, 2005
    THis was nice, a passionate love story.It took me 4 days to read it all.
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  • From PumpkinKing on June 17, 2005
    This is one truly amazing story. Not only is this one of the greatest outcome Ive seen of the show, but it's pretty well put together as far as characterization goes. Please tell me there's more to this.

    P.S. I never really had a name for that position before, but I think "Princess Pose" oughta do just fine. lol
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  • From ANON - firelord on June 07, 2005
    o my god o my god that was bloody fantastik u have done it agin another great chapter keep up the great work and up date agin asap
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  • From BrianChattillon on June 06, 2005
    Read up to Chapter 7 Tenshi is a REAL lucky bastard now!
    Damn that chapter was something else indeed!
    *Looks arund*

    Opps beter behave My father warns me if I laugh like a madman again he will seal me up in a cave alongside Happosai
    *Shudders*
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  • From ANON - rilly on June 06, 2005
    GREAT!!!!! Cmon Next chapter!!!!! I loved the princess position LOL and Mihoshi is so cute lol KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK man...or r u a woman..wateva good one
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  • From ANON - DJrob on June 05, 2005
    I liked it, definatly one to continue!
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  • From ANON - JWM on June 02, 2005
    Good chapter, please update. I hope you pu tin an older Sasami.
    PS: You don't suck.
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  • From ANON - Chrono on June 01, 2005
    >_< Took you long enough.
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  • From thebigW on June 01, 2005
    Three cheers for the "Princess Position"!!!

    Well, I think subconsciously, every male whoever watched TM! at some point extrapolated this whole thing in his head. You've taken that fantasy and put it into words quite marvelously.

    Given a human woman's natural propensity to keep on going long after the man has had enough, I'd say that with four alien women, well, Washu had better keep an enormous batch of that stuff around, or they might just kill him and eat his remains.

    Wunderbar!!!

    W.
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