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Reviews for Concubine Chronicles

By : bsmartfanfic
  • From ANON - Big Bad Wolf on September 26, 2004
    You have a excellent story here, but I am having trouble seeing how fast you developed the female relationships, I understand that they were all frustrated by Tenchi inability to choose one of them but seeing the woman wanting jump into each other panties 3 chapters in is a little quick don't you think. I really like this story. I do wonder how the emotions will play out now that Tenchi has made the Choice. EXCELLENT!
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  • From ANON - Wolf Demon on September 26, 2004
    Is it just me or does everybody in your fic want a piece of Mihoshi. Well anyway great story looking forward to reading the more mature parts.
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  • From ANON - Alabaster Dragon on September 26, 2004
    5 Beautiful alien woman wanting one man, That is awesome. Cool story.
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  • From ANON - Ickabod on September 25, 2004
    This story is not a waste of time you are doing an excellent job with this story and you don't suck. I am looking forward to seeing how Tenchi manages to keep all of the women happy and what trouble they all can get into. Please post more of this excellent story soon please.
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  • From ANON - JockoMegane on September 25, 2004

    Anyone who devotes a chapter exclusively to kissing and pulls it off as well as you do deserves thanks.

    Thanks. :)

    Looking forward to Chapter 5. Go for it, dude. You've got an excellant foundation to work from.
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  • From thebigW on September 20, 2004
    I like the level of detail you go to in explaining what goes on in everyone's heads. That the entire house is an explosion waiting to happen and Mihoshi is the catalyst is both alarming and exhilirating. Also, you could have made Ayeka the back-stabbing bitch so many would have, but you allowed another facet of her personality to emerge. Please continue because, contrary to your assertions, it doesn't suck.
    W.
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  • From ANON - Darkcupid on September 19, 2004
    I like this story it doesnt suck but i like it more if more was completed but hey i can wait.
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  • From ANON - Carlos on September 18, 2004
    Cool! I thought maybe u abondoned this story! Glad i was wrong. Looking foward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - JockoMegane on September 17, 2004

    Looking very good, keep going. This looks very promising...maybe one of the few good "Tenchi chooses 'em all" fics. :)
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  • From ANON - Carlos on September 16, 2004
    Your story is looking great
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  • From ANON - LoganSaj on September 05, 2004
    Nice story so far.
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