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Reviews for Pleasure Slave

By : Capitalist
  • From Aureawolf on October 12, 2007
    :::swoondie:::

    Gah! So good. Man, that scene with Touya and Sakura was just heart wrenching. So well written.

    :::sniff::: I can't believe its all over. Save for the epilogue. Well, I feel like you really wrapped everything up nicely. ^_^ Loved the ending. Can't wait for the epilogue!
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  • From ANON - x0mi07 on October 12, 2007
    i was the 8th reviewer... =( it's okay :D

    sana-chan, the shrine keeper is Kaho Mizuki. she was the one who helped touya when he first started looking for sakura. isn't it odd that the two chapters where she was mentioned had the same chapter name "journey"? i don't know if it was intentional or just a coincidence but it was wicked (i know there were two chapters of jalousy but it was labelled one and two). i think however that it was done purposely because our beloved author capitalist really thinks her chapter titles through.

    it's also kinda sad that touya won't see Kaho Mizuki again. he said he would when it was all over. i hope he does in the epilogue =D

    i'd really like to commend this story though. i normally dislike yaoi! this is the first i've read. and i love this story! this really is one of the best and most polished stories i've read in an awfully long time. it even pushed me to start reviewing (i never review any of the stories i read... no matter how much i really like them) so i'm really happy with this story. hope the epilogue is really really really long! so that it makes up for the very sudden climactic ending. i was kinda disappointed but all good things must come to an end.

    love it again! hoping for more! wishing all fics were this good!

    God bless
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  • From Scorpinac on October 12, 2007
    Whoa!! What a finish! Definitely not what I was expecting. And I'm a little surprised at Sakura - I'd think she'd at least zip back inside at lightning speed, change into propper clothing just as fast, and then race after Syaoran, but, oh well. Good for her, though, in putting Touya properly in his place. And Void's finale - to be honest, my original hunch was, being a sort of "evil twin" to Yue, to kill Void you would have to kill Yue himself, thus offing both of them(kind of like killing a Mystic/Uruu and having it's Skeksi counterpart instantly dying as well in the "The Dark Crystal".). So, #49's the last, huh? Better be at least one scene of Sakura and Syaoran going at it or I think I will hate you! Just giving fair warning! Well, until next week! Laters!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Nikki on October 12, 2007
    Holy crap. It's over. I almost didn't expect it. Amazing. I'm looking forward to your last update
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  • From oopsiedaisy on October 12, 2007
    that was abzolutely breathtaking.. i shall read the whole thing again right now.. AMAZING!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 12, 2007
    This is an awesome story. Sooo well done, each chapter is just... gah, awesome. I still remember frantically checking the site almost every day to look for updates and squealing outloud when you had posted a new chapter. I heartily congratulate you on completing Pleasure Slave! You are a talented author-ess. Hats off to you! ^^ I'll be looking forward to the epilogue!
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  • From ANON - x0mi07 on October 12, 2007
    am i the first? did i read the end ahead of everyone? you said you posted on saturdays. i always check on saturdays... the chapter prior to this came out late... and i waited. boy did i wait. but today i decided to read. out of the blue. and this is the ending. woah... what a rush! i felt like touya when he jumped. it was amazing!

    thank you for the writing! how i wish it wasn't... but i'm really impressed. it was like a musical masterpiece. it was wonderful. the characters felt so alive... and clow's narration gave it a very beautiful anime-movie quality. i really love it! i hope all the other characters find closure in the end! keep up the good work! God bless!
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  • From ANON - Sana-chan on October 12, 2007
    Am i still sad about not being mentioned once?
    ..a little :)
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  • From ANON - Sana-Chan on October 12, 2007
    1. Now when new people start reading this..they wont have the wait like we did
    though i think by waiting, we took in more of this story.

    2. whos the shrine keeper? o-O

    ...3. Is Yue mortal now?!

    4....sequel? :)
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  • From ANON - Sana-Chan on October 12, 2007
    That was...the last chapter..

    *claps*
    im seriously clapping out loud rate now
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  • From ANON - Eloradanin on October 12, 2007
    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO it can be over *cry* this has been my favorite story on this site and it going to end. damn it. I want you to know that your writing has been wonderful I can't seem to get my words in order enough to express what a joy reading you story has been. I hope you continue writing as you have the gift for it. look forward to the epilogue.

    your trulely
    Eloradanin
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  • From ANON - Cherry on October 12, 2007
    Oh.
    My.
    God.
    (faints)
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  • From ANON - Lolorilagilizanziboo on October 11, 2007
    What? No!! It can't end now!
    This story is too good for it to end!

    Wonderfully written. Best fanfiction I've read in a looooooong time.

    I dislike when good things end -sobs-
    I look forward to the epilogue. I'm hoping you tell us what happens with Sakura and Syaoran [-secretly hopes its a lemon which it prolly won't be-]. And Tomoyo! I wish to know what happened to her!


    I think my favourite part of this entire fanfic is the secret relationship between Sakura and Syaoran. The sneaking around and limitations on what they could and could not do added a nice spark to it. Reading those parts made my heart flutter, because they loved each other so much but it was to be kept secret. It doesn't get anymore exciting than that! Ahh! Its hard to explain!

    I just look forward to the epilogue! Keep up the wonderful work!

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  • From ANON - 0ri on October 11, 2007
    Fucking amazing, that's all I gotta say.

    I think I will leave a veryvery long review after the epilogue.
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  • From ANON - snapelicious on October 11, 2007
    Sakura... now's your chance! Punch Touya in the face and get Syaoran! ::sniffle::

    That parting was so sad! I felt sick watching Touya manipulate poor Yue like that.
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