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From ANON - Anon on October 05, 2007
Oh, I do hate you, but it's a sort of love-hate thing that's powerful and addicting and I KEEP COMING FOR MORE. This chapter totally blew me away. I love the way you expressed Syaoran and Sakura's relationship and their heartbreaking separation, and Yue understanding their love, and Touya... oh, I /really/ despise him right now. His sister complex has gotten too out of hand. Poor Sakura... and poor YUE. He left him in a second! >:0 Will Sakura slap some sense into him the next chapter, I wonder? 0:)
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From midnightfox on October 05, 2007
:D Nah I can't say I hate you XD though the chapter was very deep (emotionally duh lol) I had my mouth open the whole time while reading (way to look like an idiot). ^_~ your awesomeness is appreciated
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From ANON - Megan on October 05, 2007
Seriously, I feel like I'm going to cry right now. My heart is aching. I don't hate you! It was an incredible chapter. That was the saddest parting of Syaoran and Sakura ever. I can't wait for the next chapter. Update soon!
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From nmos on October 05, 2007
this is so good.
I was even crying.
but there could be massive uprisings if you don't have a chapter next week.
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From ANON - CBCC on October 05, 2007
Hm. I don't hate you at all for the chapter, it even sounded like the plot is going towards a positive/pleasant direction: Syaoran alive, Touya and Sakura now free, Yue stop being selfish... as miserable as all those four people are right now, the knots are being untangled...

But of course, I look forward to more positive development in your next chapter... [afterall, I go for happy endings...]
So please update very soon~~~!
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From ANON - yaoi_qt on October 05, 2007
OMG!!! the was great i cried for Sakura and Syaoran and I felt so bad for Yue. Touya is currently on my hate list (But i still love him too.) OMG, Touya is the manipulative bad guy right now. Oooh and my Sakura is so fierce right now. I so want him to go down and confront Sakura right now. So she can bit his head of (ah my pretty little hate machine.) And i don't hate you I LOVE YOU even more for this chapter,it was worth the wait. I can't wait to see what else your brillant mind has in store for us.

Oh, and will Kero make an appearence before the drama settles? I want to see him and Sakura in an angry duo against their brothers.
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From Scorpinac on October 05, 2007
Actually, I don't. Syaoran's alive, so that's good, and the siblings are finally free, so she can run away and marry him before Touya can stop her, theoretically. But, then again, I want my SyaoranXSakura smut!! Stop teasing us, you evil vixen!!! Sorry, sorry, I'm good, I'm good... Well, definitely looking forward to #48, and what will probably be very nearly the end. Umm, has the Void suddenly become irrelevant or something? Oh, well. Laters!!
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From ANON - ayachan on October 05, 2007
oh my god.. no I don't hate you, but that was an intense chapter. I started crying at the very end. Wow.. that's just amazing. I want to see what happens next! Hopefully Touya will be able to pull his head out of his butt and see that he really loves Yue too!
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From cocoke5 on October 05, 2007
yes that was a good chapte it made me cry when li have to say good by to saka and tonya is now on his way to tell her that they are free and poor yue i hope that tony understand that he loves him. and she tell him so.. up date soon.
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From ANON - tenshi on October 05, 2007
OMGosh, this story has become so much more than I have every expected! Yes, selfishness is an ugly thing - and you have crafted its truth beautifully. This chapter was so sad and meaningful. Please update soon!
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From SecretkeeperSouth on October 04, 2007
Argh! it's such a maddening ending!

I want to take you by the shoulders and shake you until more writing comes out!

...Still, rabidly whipping an author around like a dog with a chew toy rarely made chapters write themselves any quicker.

I know for certain that this one will haunt me for a while.

On a lighter note, my head keeps putting in things that would happen if the cannon cast were to mysteriously show up.
Sakura would, of course, kick the void back to the curb in short notice, Li watching proudly. This would incite rage from Yue and his "Slave-Touya," something to the effect of "Wtf you fool, go save her" at which point Cannon-sakura's Yue an Kero would whoosh by and join the fray.

Double-take a few times, while Li smirks cooly and Sakura seals up Voidy-poo.

the "Nothing" card (or is it called the Hope now?) Would naturally go to great lengths to become friend with your version of Yue and the Void...much to their horror.

Heh, and now I'm rambling...

A very good chapter, but don't MAKE me come shake you.
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From MistressMizu on October 04, 2007
This whole chapter was like torment. I honestly was about to cry at the end of this chapter. I didn't because I felt that even though no one saw me... well... Just that feeling... Hmmm. But almost. It was fantastic though. Very heart wrenching. If I had been in Yue's position during Sakura and Syaoran's display, I would feel awkward being there too. This happens any time I'm around a couple being very romantic, having a moment. I feel like I'm intruding. I'm glad that Yue finally had the nerve to let them both go. If only he'd done it before all this... But in return he and Touya have learned something valuable...about love. I can only hope things will turn out right in the end. Not much longer now; I don't want it to end, but it has to eventually.
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From ANON - Lolli on October 04, 2007
Yeah. I kinda do hate you right now. ):
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From OpheliaUndone on October 04, 2007
I really, really, really don't like Touya right now.

What a change since I first started reading this! My first yaoi story! See me cheer our hero on! Which one? I've never been sure. On one hand, slavery is so teh suck. On the other...Yue and Touya are hawt *and* epic! There's angst, yes, but so much passion and love that if they could just get their heads out of they're respective asses, they could be oh so happy!! Yes? Maybe?

And then came Sakura and Syaoran and suddenly my hopes were pinned on a completely different couple. Here lay more angst but they found love so quickly I was pretty reassured.

Silly me.

The scene between Syaoran and Yue was perfect. P-E-R-F-E-C-T. How fitting, that Yue finally succumbs to the painful truth because of Clow's descendant. The moment is so important because Yue has already realized the nature of his love for Touya. All he had to do was accept it in all it's terrible reality. Which then makes what he's done to Sakura and Syaoran even more horrible. So why am I not so mad at Yue? *shrug* I guess I'm used to him being selfish. I don't expect our manipulative little moonchild to change in one day. But at least he was able to tell Touya that they did wrong. And he hasn't even cared for Sakura for as long as Touya, which brings me right back to my first statement.

Bad Touya. When I read the words "victorious smile", I wanted to do great harm to him. I know he's all super-protective-oniichan but I didn't expect he'd intentionally act in a manner that would so destroy her happiness.

�She�d never hate me,� Touya muttered, uncomfortably. He hugged himself, rubbing his arms. �And even if she did, at least she�d still be mine. It�s better than losing her forever.�

I swear, I recoiled when I read that. Poor Yue, to be faced with such a reflection.

I'd say that the only good that came out of all this misfortune would be dead!Ralen and defiant!Sakura. It's about time she put Touya in his place. Only now do I see how much their relationship paralleled his and Yue's to a lesser extent. He doesn't call her slave, but he does dictate much of her life because he believes he knows better. Earning her hatred may be a harsh lesson, but he's gotta learn before his very unhealthy love costs him everything he's tried to protect.

My Gawd, he's so much like Yue. You had this planned all along, didn't you?!! Now I have to read this from the very beginning to find the clues I've missed.

And so my babbling ends. What a long winded (and probably redundant) first review!
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From ANON - Silverwolfe on October 04, 2007
Wow!! Touya REALLY needs to get an attitude adjustment there....and the scene with Sakura dn Syoran made me cry!!! *sniffle*

What a turnaround! Yue is letting his prized possession go!!! YAY!!! I think Touya will come back after he's had his fill of free life, realize that he misses Yue and go running back to him, but find that he's gone, and then go find him lol. But, that's just my take on it xD

GREAT CHAPTER!!! I really like it, so keep it up!! And good for Ralen....he deserved to die lol
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