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By : Capitalist
  • From lilian on October 04, 2007
    This chapter was so moving. The part where Sakura and Syaoran are speaking to each other is amazing; I was definitely crying. I also really liked the last part, when Yue finally releases Touya. The way he acted somehow felt really clean. Before, with the pressure of the Void threatening to kill Touya and all the deceit and Touya's own wild possessiveness over Sakura, everything felt kind of dirty and confusing and chaotic. (What a fat run-on sentence that was)

    I also really liked how you paralleled Yue and Touya's relationship to Touya and Sakura's relationship. Sakura's reaction towards her brother was also very disillusioning and was a long time coming, I think. The emotions in this chapter really got to me. Definitely my favorite, favorite, favorite chapter in the whole entire story. It was so good. It was really good. I'm being redundant but I really really mean it.

    ...although yeah I kinda hate you for that cliffhanger!!!! Hope the next chapter comes out soon!


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  • From ANON - kat on October 04, 2007
    wow. this story is awesome. i love your writing. please keep going!
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  • From ANON - sxl on October 04, 2007
    I'm totally hating you right now for the cliffhanger but pllleeeeaaaaassssseeee!!!!!!!!!!!! keep writing!!!!!!!! post ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thousands of people are "dying"!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - cherry on October 04, 2007
    omg omg omg why did syaoran have to leave???? is there a happy ending though??
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  • From Aureawolf on October 04, 2007
    Woot!! You updated. ^_^ And perfect timing too...on a day when I actually don't have assloads of homework to do. Rock on!!

    Fantastic chapter. Poor Yue. So many changing emotions. If I were in his position I think I'd be throwing up like Touya. But yeah, I didn't think you could make a worse cliffhanger than the last chapter, but you're close with this one. Woot! Update when you can. (in other words...PLEASE update soon ^__^)
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  • From ANON - Sana_chan on October 04, 2007
    I can sense the story is coming to a close...
    PLEASE dont end it with Touya and sakura in their forest
    ..and all that.
    that CANT be the end
    they both gotta confess their love for each other

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  • From ANON - Sana-Chan on October 04, 2007
    o....mg
    omg omg
    ...om...g
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  • From ANON - Amet on October 04, 2007
    wow! i cant believe it, how u manage to link every small detail from beginnin to tne end without any gap n the dialogues n lines in this chap was really outstandin, the Yue n Touya's mirror image character n how u portraied that was really marvellous~ Yue confessed! Noooo.... n touya is leaving, hope he realises his feelings soon too~ cant believe Li was banished n poor Sakura, will be waitin for ur nex update! thanks for this chapter!
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  • From ANON - skrcha on October 04, 2007
    Syaoran and Sakura's goodbye brought tears to my eyes.
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  • From ANON - Nikki on October 04, 2007
    I cried. And I never cry. Good job.
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  • From ANON - I love converse on October 04, 2007
    Now i dont hate you. for you didnt kill Li. but it is gay you let him go and kept Sakura. but you know how to fix that, so i'll wait for the next chap. loved this one btw
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  • From MangaForever on October 04, 2007
    ow my goodie god!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    how could u end it dere!!!!
    pls u must update soon
    pls!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From sodapop0006 on October 04, 2007
    Wow! I didn't think Yue would release him right away! But the goodbye scene was heartbreaking, beautifully done. Can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - cherrixwolf on October 04, 2007
    Everytime I read this story, I swear I go to hell and heaven at the same time. I don't hate you because you take the time to write this amazing story and write it well, though I am not exactly appreciative of this last cliffhanger. Everything you tied together in this last chapter was utterly brilliant. A real big step forward for Yue and a no step anywhere for Touya. Someone needs to burst his bubble and I get the feeling that Sakura will be more than delighted to do so next chapter. I cried and my heart broke at least 3 times. So I shall hold you responsible for mending it soon (reallyyy reallyyy soon if at all possible) for only you can put the pieces back together.
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  • From ANON - Madd Hatter on October 04, 2007
    You are wonderful, I had a hard time keeping back the tears during the Sakura and Syaoran moment. I've said earlier in comments that I wasn't looking forward to this, that I only really cared about Touya and Yue. In the end I've become more concerned about Sakura and Syaoran because they are more deserving to love. Thankfully out of the two at least Yue realized this.

    It was awful hearing Touya contradict his own 'hatred' for Yue with controlling his sister.
    Touya sounded just as heartless and cruel as Yue had, and it almost seemed out of character. It just shows under the right influences a demon can come from anyone.

    I feel more at closure with this chapter, and I feel like this story is coming to a closure soon, and I hope it doesn't. I don't want it to be a miserable ending.

    However, Yue did say they both were free. I'm sure Touya is running to tell Sakura and she'll more then happily to tell him to kiss her ass and go find Syaoran.

    *Hopes* D:
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