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From oopsiedaisy on October 03, 2007
i totally still love you but i wish you wouldn't have left me hanging like that.. lol im checking everyday.. PLEASE UPDATE SOON
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From ANON - Avid Lurker on October 03, 2007
If a scream of complete and utter anguish can be communicated through a review, then please insert it here. I may be able to find it in my heart to love you again if you would kindly update soon so that our suspense is at least not dragged out longer than it needs to be. ^_^ Cheers.
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From ANON - Falconeye on October 02, 2007
Responding in form of entries to each character (and possible predictions and winks to the esteemed author in possible hopes). All opinions are based on life-long (since 1998) innate understanding/obsession with the involved party of characters, from sources Card Captor Sakura, Tsubasa Reservoir Chronicles, and Pleasure Slaves (to name a few). Any inherent differences or poetic licenses are unavoidable.

1 > Sakura-chan: Tell the truth� Everything� No more secrets from master and your brother. You are among the few elite: You are blatantly guilty of deceit, naivety, remiss, and ignorance; yet you�re immaculately innocent of all wrong doings. Drawing people to you without intent or realization, you have an invincible spell and the blessings of the gods themselves; and yet rarely do you acknowledges or appreciate the intents/feelings of others, when oft chance you do it is convenient revelation, the spot like is yours brighter than all others, as effortlessly you metamorphism form victim to heroine (and back again). So much like Touya, Nadeskico; a bit of Fujitaka and Sonomi; and so opposite from Tomoyo and Syaoran.
P.S. Despite what others may believe, what you went through is none ever should experience nor be wished upon, I sympathize whole heartedly and may the trauma swiftly pass. However, I do hope you learned from this experience and gain valuable insight into your own true power, the recognition of those around you, and an independence/determination in place influential/obedience nature during your journeys.
P.S. Will you hold the key necessary to tame the caged/raging Void?

2 > Dear Touya: As a brother to a brother with an overprotective bent and just finding that their little sister has been hiding a little man in her life for the last 5 months, but in no position to know or do anything about it at present time� you can freak out all you want but� talk to her and go easy on her. The last thing she needs is to be fearful of you, and particularly Yue; he went for her after your fiasco so what�s to prevent him from disciplining her again? Speaking of Yue (again so such like your sister) your pride/arrogance could are, both of you; get over it already!
P.S. So you are free, but there is still one problem� your sister isn�t. Kind of puts everyone back to square one, minus one; a chance to start fresh. Good luck on solving that problem!

3 > Lored Yue: Umm� OK, I can see you are busy now� what with all the waiting for the divine author permission to zap the captain, he�s a brave fellow hey taking it like a warrior I salute you� nasty stain on the floor with that zap, Yelan really should have better control over his bodily functions, will that stain come out easily, cause I know of a great carpet cleaners, 20% discount too� oh dear look at the time, I know when I�m unwanted� well good luck with that predicament, I�ll just leave you two form some alone time� I really need to run along now and fetch a certain feline immune to your cold stare� its freak�n cold� Man if looks could kill! People for your own safety I advise that you evacuate the castle NOW!
P.S. Next time, I suggest you hire a female castellan/manager, they are far more congenial and less prone to lost of slaves in a bargain where men are concern. I even know of an overly qualified applicant in dire need of a career change and a get out of slavery free card.

4 > Dear Syaoran: Have you ever ---- up more recently on such a scale before in your life? To be fair I do like you, you have a way of growing on folks that even S+S haters cant deny. But I have always connected more and have often been on the side of Touya and Tomoyo, and such expected/demanded that much more of your worth (you truly started earning it in TRC). Now as distasteful this may be, in this single instance, you are no different than Relan in putting Sakura�s life in jeopardy, though I commend you for your chivalry actions. As for your punishment, let us pray the author holds out for a month to collect her sacred thoughts while you ponder your life�s flashback and make peace with the reaper as Yue death glare�s in this ultimate/best ever cliff hanger to date!
P.S. You might have to use that favor Yue promised you! Don�t ever say I never liked you!

5 > Relan RIP: Wow that sucks� Brothers and Sisters, we are gathered here today to pay our final respects for the recently deceased. While true he was far from more perfect man and sadly a chauvinistic perverted bastard and pathetic excuse for a man, many who are surely gathered here today loved to hate him (and are probably just witnesses here to make sure he�s dead) but let us take a moment to understand his life with proper dignity [excerpt from story] he died the way he lived with had no family, no friends, and no comrades or loved ones to speak of. This concludes our sermon today.

6 > Lord Cerberus: Oh mighty, fearsome (and handsome) Sovereign of the Sun, I besiege thee to soften thy fragile brothers soul and soothe his tormented homicidal rampage.
P.S. Please stop buy our house tomorrow, we are having sushi and sashimi by the truck load. Do you like wasabi?

7 > Tomoyo-chan: Get over there now, girl! The love of your life needs you more than ever! And be sure you and Meiling give Syaoran a terrible scolding the likes that would make him wish Yue zapped him first! (While you are at it, remind him that he owes you big time.) You placed your whole hearted trust in him; he made you believe he was best and that Sakura made the right choice (though no one could ever blame you, so don�t beat yourself up). For someone who gentle, more intelligent and lovelier than most; why is it that people rarely listen to you? Honeslty you leave Sakura and Syaoran alone for a couple of days and things go to plat; how that girl ever manages to survive without your guidance and devotion is beyond me.
P.S. If you are excepting applications for positive career in castle management, I know of a currently vacant opening if you�re interested. The pay is good with excellent benefits and the previous management made extensive use of available female staff facilities.

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From oopsiedaisy on October 02, 2007
IM ADDICTED!
FER SERIOUSLY
Please update soon!
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From ANON - bb on October 02, 2007
you are ... i am wordless. i've been looking forever and ever for a story that had just yue and touya, no yukito and i finally found it. and now you've got me addicted. like seriously, crazily, freaking obsessed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! if i had a choice between a million dollars and this story, i'd choose this and die happy. i luv da tale you spin, i love the characterization, i love the characters (exception: ralen, ewww... but i like how u gave him more of a 3d role in this chapter), i love damn well everything!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you've done an absolutely awesome job!!! (not tht u need sum1 to actually mention it) and i'm just spellbound. and da BEST thing in da world is returning again and again for your story and finding not one but like three to four new chapters!!!!!!! i have no IDEA how u can do sumthin like tht but wow. waaaaaaaaaargh, n i'm so glad ralen's dead!!! n da last few paras are heartstopping. i'm dying in anticipation to see what's going to happen next!!! i can't wait for your next update!!!!!!!!!!!
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From Anata on October 02, 2007
I've actually been following this story since long ago. The last time I read it (before catching up now) was when you were only up to chapter 15 or 16, and I'm so glad I found this again!
I must say, I almost always absolutely hate Yue in this. I love the way you've explained his character's selfishness and cruelty; it's fabulous! You make me want to love and hate him, in turn making me both love and hate Touya. Can't say that I dislike Shaoran and Sakura-tachi, though. =D
I cannot wait for you to update this. This is fantastic and amazing. I am supremely impressed, both with the work and with your dedication to it!

...PS: Poor Shaoran! ;-;
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From ANON - Sharae on October 01, 2007
*gasp* am waiting with great intrest for the next chapter...*gaspgasp*...*breathebreathe*
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From priya on October 01, 2007
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update soon... plz plz plz plz PLZ!!!!!!!!!!!
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From midnightfox on September 29, 2007
o0o *spits out drink and dies* X_X (W-what?! Oh sh*t! are you serious?!)
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From SecretQuill on September 29, 2007
definitely love, you killed ralen- and touya is free!! finally!! i really hate it when someone has slaves and thinks they own them, body and soul, it's so disgusting!
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From ANON - Uruki on September 28, 2007
Oh my god. Very intense. THough this story may be rated a bit higher for my level but i find this story very well written so far. Please update when you have time. Best of luck! ^^
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From SecretkeeperSouth on September 25, 2007
Breathtaking.

And we do love you for it, though if you take too long to let us know if certain key people live or die, we may learn to hate you.
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From Scorpinac on September 25, 2007
For killing Ralen? I LOVE YOU!!!! For what may or may not happen to Syaoran in the next few minutes, I'll wait for #47 to make my decision on that one. But considering Syaoran's connection to Yue via Clow, he may yet get away in one piece...or two...or three.... Let's face it, he's gonna have pain one way or the other. Of course Touya's forgetting that he may technically be off the hook, but Sakura isn't! Oh, yes, the next one will be intersting, and from now on Ralen free!! Laters!
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From ANON - strawberry buttercup on September 25, 2007
OH! that's. just. cruel. out of all the things you've done in this story, that was the meanest! but it is why we keep coming back (for years now isn't it?) love the story, it has it all and i can't wait for its conclusion but i will be sadened by it ending.

tootiles!
-Strawberry-Buttercup-
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From Aureawolf on September 25, 2007
Holy shit dude!! That was freaking nuts! Oh man. Geez. My chest is all like..tight. And I've lost all my ability to speak coherently. ^_^ Man oh man. That is just so good. I can't even put it into words. You MUST update soon. There is no being polite here. I cannot survive without the next chapter. ^_~ Go forth author, go forth and help us off that cliffhanger. Now...please? ^_^
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