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By : Capitalist
  • From SisterWicked on September 22, 2007
    oooh, i love you!! lol, finally, some more t/y angsting! anyway, thank you so much for updating, this made my whole day! please do more soon, i'm dying from the suspense!
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  • From ANON - Rhian on September 22, 2007
    WOW Not good, not good... I wish they could all find some way to be happy and to accept the situation/ Did it say Ralen DIED? If that's really true, thank goodness! I hate him so much, especially from that last scene before the true chaos of the chapter.
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  • From ANON - WTW on September 22, 2007
    Aaaaahhhh! T.T *cries* Finally finally Ralen gets his but please please please don't let Li get hurt. Y.Y
    I congratulate the lovely author for creating a cliff hanger that strickes such a death plow. XD I look forward to your next chapter.
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  • From ANON - shisshi on September 21, 2007
    awww man...i EFFIN LOVE YOU!!!!...though its funny cause i forgot all about the deal too ^^a...
    man what is Yue gonna do...though since its been so long....Does Touya even have a place to go
    back too...man this was an awesome chapter=D
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  • From silvergirlrox on September 21, 2007
    HOLY FUCK!! HOW COULD YOU JUST END IT LIKE THAt!!???i hate you for ending it with such a HUGE cliffhanger BUT i LOVE YOU for writing this chapter!!!!
    the fact the Ralen id FINALLY dead, makes me wanna dance with joy!!
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE dont hurt li!!!
    awsome job like always Capitalist!!

    *silvergirlrox*
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  • From ANON - renbrant on September 21, 2007
    OH
    SHIT
    NO

    ...you just love your cliffhanger endings don't you. xD but this chapter was really great... the last one had me afraid that it was OVER or something with that title. but i'm glad it goes on. :D
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  • From almne on September 21, 2007

    I've been reading this story off and on, and just finished the most recent chapters. And after the last one I just have to say:


    Daaaaamn is Yue going to pitch a fit.

    Loved Ralen's passing though.
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  • From ANON - Keiko Yuki on September 21, 2007
    Oh. My. God. :: breathes deeply :: Okay, so my story starts three days ago when my best friend randomly shouts "Omg I forgot to check if she updated!!!" So, of course, me and my other friend are like "which fic?" and I've been on a mission to finish this ever since. I was four chapters from my goal last night (or rather, this morning) when my other friend texts me saying "SHE FREAKIN UPDATED!!!" So, naturally I panicked and was like "I'm so not going to sleep tonight." I ended up asleep at my computer, waking up with just enough time to make it to my first morning class. I love this story and I think you are the most amazing person EVER. I know that there have been some rough patches with some haters out there and people who don't know the meaning of constructive criticism but I'm so glad that you persevered and continued despite the cruel words of others. I respect that. At first, I know you said that this is a bit cliche but I just wanted to tell you that you've taken the idea and made it your own, painting a beautiful picture from day one years ago to the present, never losing the flow and brightness of color and beauty. I knew from the first paragraph that your writing was unique and wonderful and I just want to thank you for the last three days and for the future updates to come.
    Now to my thoughts on the actual story: I am so worried for Li right now that I almost wished I read a little slower just so you'd have updated by the time I got to this chapter. I'm glad, however, that Ralen is *finally* dead. I'm a bit disappointed in Touya but it's understandable that he would act that way, I mean, acknowledging that you're a slave doesn't exactly take away from the deal that had been agreed upon (even if it is Sakura's fault). I wonder how Yue's going to take the departure of Touya, or, if he will even let him go. I don't think Yue will kill Syaoran because it seems to me that Yue needs Syaoran and his magical combat skills. I'm interested in seeing how you'll get poor Syaoran out of his situation. I wonder if Yue will *ever* call him 'Touya' and not 'Toya' although I don't think Touya would handle the transition well... He'd probably get annoyed after getting used to it in the past 5 months.
    Enough with this essay, I could probably go on and on with my thoughts but I know how busy you are and would rather you not read my essay of a review in favor of finishing the next chapter. I won't yell at you to hurry up and update soon because I know, as a writer and human being that life happens. May your muse keep you company and I wish you happy writings!
    PS You have two new worshipers::ahem::readers now you can add us to your tally.
    - Keiko Yuki -
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  • From ANON - CBCC on September 21, 2007
    OH MY GOSH!!! this chapter is a must to review! this chapter is so incredible! Totally awesome!!! This chapter is definitely the most amazing chapter in terms of the turn in the plot!
    YEAHEH RALEN DIED!!! YEAHEH Yue lost his slave!!! YEAHEH Syaoran is still alive... (I think he won't be dying in the next chapter but you always manage to surprise me so let's see how this one will turn out...)!!!
    How I love the speed of your story's development!!!
    I can't wait for your next update! please update soon! very soon! can't be too soon! please make it very very soon!
    now let me go and reread it again...
    [PS: While Yue is always a man of his words... will he just accept that the deal is off and let Touya go freely??? I think this question will keep me busy til the next chapter I'm sure... if the next chapter comes out soon enough...)
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  • From MistressMizu on September 21, 2007
    You were right. That was an absolutely horrible cliffhanger. Of course I still love you, but I'm wondering how I can right about now.

    I'm speechless. What can I say?

    In any case, now Ralen is dead. Wow. And what a swift ending for him. But of course, like everyone else I'm sure, I hope Syaoran doesn't die. He just can't!

    Ugh. Well, I really do hope the next update comes soon. That was terrible of you. :(
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  • From ANON - Shadow Light on September 21, 2007
    OMG! Tgat was so friggin' beautiful. I swear that's like one of the best chapters I've ever read. It was so packed with drama. Oh your the best. I'm scared for Li but I can't help thinking that this was one deliciouly juicy chapter you made, till next time.

    Ja na.
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  • From sodapop0006 on September 21, 2007
    *whispers* ooo, he's maadd... great chapter. can't wait to see what happens.
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  • From ANON - ayachan on September 21, 2007
    oh wow.. since it's so early and I need to go to bed, I've skimmed through this chapter. But the emotions still hit me like a ton of bricks. Hmm.. I don't know how I should feel about Ralen's death. I mean, it's great that he's dead, but then again, who's going to be the jackass in the castle that everyone loves to hate now? And Touya's thing just kind of confused me. After all he's been through, he just doesn't seem like the guy to call it quits.. well, but then again his sister was almost raped... Anyway, GREAT chapter! I can't wait to see what the next one is like!
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  • From ANON - 0ri on September 21, 2007
    I have no words. I'm stunned. I think this chapter has now replaced my previously favorite chapter. If you don't update I might just implode. o_o


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  • From Edith on September 21, 2007
    THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU, you killed Ralen, finally.
    I Love you.
    I'm worried about Syaoran tough, but I know he can't die (well I hope so). I can't wait for the next chapter and see what Touya and Yue will do...
    Saludos!!!!
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