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By : Capitalist
  • From ANON - Silverwolfe on September 21, 2007
    OMG!!! CLIFFIE!!! AN EVIL CLIFFIE!! I'm glad Ralen got what he deserved though...but Touya can't go away!! Yue will be cruel and evil again, and screw girls like they were doorknobs...each one would get a turn!!! NOOOO!!!
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  • From ANON - Nikki on September 21, 2007
    OMG... I have been reading this story for years, and I have been waiting for this chapter since the beginning. Wow.. thats all I have to say. Update soon cause I'm dying here. (sorry I haven't reviewed before, I'm a loser I know.)
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  • From cocoke5 on September 21, 2007
    oh the story is getting real good and i love the chapter and i can not beleve that tonya told yue that the deal was off. now what will yue do. i know that he love toya and what will happen to li. i can not wait for the next chpater of the story. i will be waitting for thenext chapter. up date soon. love the story .
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  • From ANON - Madd Hatter on September 21, 2007
    I love you for updating this sooner than I expected, but I hope to dear lord you update the next one faster Dx
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  • From ANON - Samadz on September 21, 2007
    HOLY FUCK.
    omgomgomgomgomgomfgomfgomfgOMFG

    omg, i'm not going to be able to sleep tonight. my eyes are like 0.O;

    AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!

    this.is.epic.
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  • From ANON - Rin on September 21, 2007
    Don't take Sakura away! ;_; I can't wait till the next chapter. I've been reading this since you've started it off, and I absolutely love it.
    Ralen though, could have died in a slightly slower and more painful fashion, creepy sicko that he was. Now that they're leaving, they should visit the town where Tomoyo and Meilin stay for a while.
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  • From ANON - Madd Hatter on September 20, 2007
    @ krunalshei

    Touya did have his fun, remember? When he was in 'his storm' he had 'his way' with Yue. Btw that was a smexy chapter x3
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  • From FlaxenWings on September 20, 2007
    OH MAH GAAAAWD!! (that's me freaking out)

    Anyway, judging from the ungodly number of reviews, I'm sure you've heard this before. But I loooooooove this fic soooooo much. I spent the last two weeks staying up late every night just reading it! And then of course wholeheartedly recommending it to all of my friends. I still think everyone is just so in-character, and it seems like that's really hard to do in AU fics! And Yue just melts me into an indistinguishable puddle of fangirl goo.

    Is it bad that I totally love Clow?
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  • From priya on September 20, 2007
    AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!! that rat! that scum! that... that filthy piece of a human(is he even human!?)!!! Why why why.... he was non existant all this time n now that he comes.... THIS HAPPENS!!!!! We have been predictin fireworks between Touya n Li for sometime now... but we always figured that Yue would play peace maker.... but now this... in the middle of Touya Yue confusion.... NOOOOOO!!! yue is so gonna side wit touya.... the only hope for Li to live is if Kero comes back.... he's comin back.. ne ne NE??... or wait... knowin that scum Ralen he mite use this as an advantage to 'play around' with both Li n Sakura....
    that filthy piece of filth!! Kill him!

    on a slightly diff note.... that hug that Yue gives Kero... absolute KAWAII!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD loved that scene!!!
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  • From midnightfox on September 19, 2007
    o0o that was awesome and now Ralen knows what's going on between Sakura and Li. ^^ You're like the ruler of fan fiction *cheers* I can't wait for more =]
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  • From ANON - krunalshei on September 18, 2007
    I do not mean to sound terrible, and please do not take this the wrong way, but I sincerely could not enjoy this chapter. I have thoroughly enjoyed everything else, but this time around something felt skewed. Perhaps it was that the weight of this chapter focused on Sakura and Syaoran whose plot I am not the slightest bit interested in, though I understand that you, as a writer, are the only person who can choose who to center your chapters around. Or perhaps it was the disappointment that I felt upon learning that Touya never heard Yue's confession, and that the two haven't progressed in the way that I had hoped would. Yes, I think it was that which really put me off. I was amazed at your ending to Chapter 44. It almost brought me to tears when you so thoroughly described Yue holding the pillow to his chest as he admitted the words that we all have been waiting for. And yet Touya didn't hear them! Their plot has gone nowhere, and with such terrible timing! (with the conclusion of this fanfiction in sight). After Clow's ceaseless effort to get that part of Yue to mature and finally admit his love, he is still incapable of doing it! It frustrates me to no end to discover that, after almost half a year of living together, the best those two have accomplished is to live in relative harmony. Nothing more. Nothing less.

    Touya is no better. Sometimes he acts like nothing more than a child and I do wonder what his motives for these actions are. Why would he fear such a confession from Yue? Why revert back to something as immature as silent tretment? It makes no sense to me! I cannot comprehend why these two would act in this way. In a way I am pleased that Clow has left the earth, so he cannot witness the absurdity of Yue and Touya's actions. At least he left the earth believing that Yue had finally opened his heart to another. Unfortunately he was not right in his assumptions.

    I do hope that Yue does not only admit his love in the final chapter. That would severely disappoint me. I do hope some progress is made in their relationship soon. At least before the finale.

    One question: will Touya ever dominate Yue?

    I apologise if this rant offends you.
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  • From vix111 on September 17, 2007
    ok...breathe...crap!!
    Ok, Ralen, we all admit it: from being a rat bastard antagonist, you turned into a cool rat bastard antagonist. You just earned my repects man, even if we all love to hate you.
    I completely understand the poor Sakura, people expect her to be stronger, but this isnt a situation for that. This is something completely different. Anyone would be scared to do what she did for the first time, and it did took her a lot of guts to go through with it.
    I agree with sana-chan, I think Ralen will try to rape her and then blame Li. Now, if he can pull it off, then he'd become the best evil original character ever!
    But still, my favorite part was where Touya asked Yue to do him rough XD
    And if Yue *could* have kids, then the castle would be full of little Yues @_@

    here's the art I promised you girl!

    http://cocos111.deviantart.com/art/Yue-s-Slave-65008137

    I'll send you a bigger copy to your mail :D
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  • From ANON - Fluffers on September 17, 2007
    Hey! I found your story around a month ago and read the whole thing in two days lol, which was a horrible idea because ever since then I have been fervently waiting for each following chapter... I just wanted to say that this is one of the most provocative, well developed story lines I have seen in a long time. Kudos to you for creating such an addictive story! Though I hate the fact that, along with everyone else, I can't wait to see what happens next chapter. I have many thoughts on where this is going, but I know that you will bring everything together in the end... and hopefully, HOPEFULLY you aren't so cruel as to deny us our beloved pairings' happily-ever-after =P

    ~Fluffers

    *P.S. Do you have a mailing list for when this story is updated? How about a link to other stories you have written?* Glycerine_7788@hotmail.com
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  • From ANON - Sharae on September 17, 2007
    still love this story...
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  • From ANON - pockyfille on September 16, 2007
    I'm just glad 'fin d'affiare' didn't mean it was the end of the story.

    can we just smack ralen upside the head and stake him out for the lions to eat, plz?
    or is the rat-bastard going to be a conduit for the Void to get into the castle? His slimy little brain seems like the kind of place the void would be a t home with.
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