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By : Capitalist
  • From ANON - Hyewon on September 07, 2007
    An update! You wouldn't believe how excited I felt seeing it! This chapter definitely depicted a different side of Yue; the side he longed to hide. I thought it was pretty sweet, the way Yue is so vulnerable and submissive around him. Clow and he really shared something special.

    In a way, this was the final confrontation. For so long, you've had readers squirming in anticipation. Who does Yue love more? The answer I've come up with is that Yue loves them both equally. His love for Clow is incomparable to his love for Touya. Clow was a fatherly figure, a mentor, a person he was made to love. Touya was the one who shattered his cold heart, reheated it and made their love so genuine.

    Still, I had butterflies when Yue thought 'Clow was kissing his Toya.' His Touya. I love the way Yue is so overprotective. It's endearing. The decision has finally been made. Clow shall be his eternally beloved master, but Touya has captured his heart. I also thought it was adorable how jealous Touya got when Yue and Clow shared their final kiss. Poor boy, Yue's got a lot to make up for in bed! (Ha ha!)

    The last line in particular was my favorite. It was so simple, but its symbolic meaning brought a smile to my face. I'm not exactly sure what it represented specifically but I came up with: A) Clow's spiritual presence has finally come to a rest or B) Clow and Yue's 'timeless' love has finally come upon a conclusion. Or am I totally off on either?

    I'm excited as always for your next update! (I'm such a stalker!) I'm hoping Touya'll hear Yue out and make his own final decision. And perhaps we'll see how Syaoran and Sakura's relationship has progressed. I'm kind of curious about Tomoyo's feelings as well. Have they subsided or is Tomoyo playing the 'self-less' beauty?

    I should stop rambling and such but I remember you mentioned this story was originally based on 'Ai No Kusabi'? I actually went to check it out (the anime) and I was thrilled that I could pick out the similarities. One thing I do hope strays from the storyline is the end. I'd never be able to live it down if Touya and Yue die; especially dismembered (on Yue's part).

    Write soon! I'll be checking constantly!
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  • From ANON - Syra on September 07, 2007
    I almost cried o-0. YOU MADE ME ALMOST CRY, and successfully made my heart flutter. I didn't know what to expect from this chapter, but oh my, oh my. I can't believe he finally said it! ...I can't believe that Clow slipped Touya some tongue XD

    I'm going to go drown in textbooks now, so as to maybe gain ahold of my wit after that.
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  • From MangaForever on September 07, 2007
    AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
    HOW DA HELL COULD U LEAVE IT DERE!!!
    URE SO EVIL!!!!!
    PLS PLS UPDATE AGAIN SOON
    PLS
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  • From midnightfox on September 07, 2007
    Woah that was chilling and mysterious. I can't believe Yue said that out loud to Touya. @_@ And the clock stopped *surprised* what does this mean? (Yeah I'm slow T-T don't hurt me)
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  • From silvergirlrox on September 07, 2007
    Poor Yue!! I'm so glad he picked Touya though ;) no 1 says no to Touya!!!Awsome job Capitalist:D
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  • From lilian on September 07, 2007
    Hey again. I really liked the ending of this chapter. The situation wherein Yue finally tells Touya he loves him was just awesome. I also thought Clow's interaction with Touya and Yue was really well-written. The part where Clow talks about his "creation" and Yue reminded me of Shelley's Frankenstein (except Yue is, you know, beautiful).

    Anyway I commissioned a few pieces for this story awhile ago on this forum site, but then just earlier I was browsing the reviews and the artist already posted up the links, rofl, the story is too good (I gave her the link to the story at her request) There's actually one more couple piece so I hope we can look forward to that :)

    but anyway, more~~

    http://i204.photobucket.com/albums/bb139/lucie_en/sakuraxshao.jpg
    I wanted to see Sakura's pretty butterfly lace dress in color and all

    http://i204.photobucket.com/albums/bb139/lucie_en/touyacj.jpg
    Touya in his silk clothing that he is so unused to when he first arrives

    Thank you for writing; for three years; for a great story!
    -lili




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  • From MistressMizu on September 07, 2007
    Holy Shit, Yue said it first! My, my, that chapter was a doozy. It really is coming to an end, isn't it... And Clow knows about Syaoran and Sakura! It's too bad Yue doesn't know what he was talking about. He'll find out soon enough I suppose.

    Yue's attitude, no, his whole persona changeds completely when dealing with Clow. He turns into an adoring little child who knows nothing but of the one he loves so much. It's hard to believe it's the same Yue, but I'm glad he's broken free of Clow. And with the clock no longer ticking we know that Clow is forever gone. It's an ending to that part... Now I only hope that Touya will admit his own feelings. I'm sure he will soon enough.

    With all of Clow's talking, I can see why you had such a hard time. I'm sorry if I was pestering you! You did wonderfully though!

    I'm very curious about the next chapter, after the ending to this one. It leaves no hint of what's to come, other than Clow's comment about Syaoran. I doubt he'll do anything just yet, but then again I'm probably wrong. I shall wait as patiently as I can!
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  • From ANON - CBCC on September 07, 2007
    Good to see Yue and Touya's relationship finally moves onto a new stage... though it's a pity that we won't be seeing Clow again esp. now that I finally start to like him a bit more... Hm... (but I guess no regrets given we get to see Clow kissing Touya?!?!)
    Very good chapter indeed. Please update soon~!!!
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  • From vix111 on September 07, 2007
    oh my...that...that bastard kissed Touya!!
    ok, I'm lying, that was really hot XD
    wow, just wow, that chapter just blew my mind. The writing was great, steadily rising to the confrontation. I've gotta say though, that my favorite line was
    "I’d already created you to delight in bondage"
    That sounds sooo kinky, and yet, it describes the situaton perfectly. Now, to just sit and wait to see how is he going to make Touya hear his confession. Even though you left it at a cliffie, I feel content with the revelation at the end.

    Yue cracked first!

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  • From Aureawolf on September 07, 2007
    Squee. What a fantastic ending to such an exciting chapter! You had me on the edge of my seat the whole time. Man...usually yaoi fic writers can't carry an action scene to save their lives, but you leave me in awe with this one. Rock on!!
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  • From ANON - Sana-Chan on September 06, 2007
    I am anon above..
    muya mya? did i do something ood mya?
    thats good!!! your welcome for whatever i dit :D
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 06, 2007
    the wait till the next chapters frustr8ing :P
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  • From ANON - yaoi_qt on August 30, 2007
    i'm in love with your story! it reads like the old romance novels i use to love only with more spicy erotica and angst. except my humble praise for i haven't read a really good story in a long while. let alone on one of my favorite anime. most always get to high chaps and stop leave me hanging and i'm an sooo estatic that you are continuing. (I know I full of it right :P) anyway i can't wait to see some more of sakura and syaoron relationship development. those two are my absolute fave.
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  • From priya on August 30, 2007
    i'm sorry if this offends clows fans but.... that freak job of a magician just had to come!!!! now i bet he's gonna twist poor lil yue's mind even more!!!! that poor angel is already confused as it is!!!!
    but this was one heck of a chapter! i loved ur ver of the void.... not the demented child doll thing in the movie.....I just can't wait to see wat happens next!!!!!!
    *waitin eagerly*
    n thank u sana chan!!!!! n those fan arts were so awsome!!!! i loved chibi touya!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Silverwolfe on August 30, 2007
    OH. MY. GOD!! In this chapter, I thought Touya or Yue was gonna die! My heart was in my throat the whole time! I liked it how Yue won't give up the information because of his pride and love for CLow...thats a good thing hes got goin there, so keep it up!! Great chapter!
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