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From ANON - Madd Hatter on August 29, 2007
Oh I hope this isn't a tragedy D: I'm going to be so sad if he doesn't get to have Touya.

From the way it sounds, with yin and yang, it doesn't sound like it's simply a monster that he has to have enough will power to kill... it's the darkness in light. It's life. I'm looking forward to seeing how this ends.

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From ANON - Hyewon on August 29, 2007
CLOW!

Okay so - new reader here. I've spent the last two days of my life cooped up in my insanely uncomfortable computer chair staring wide-eyed at the screen. I just have to say: ILOVEYOUANDYOURWRITINGSOSOSOMUCH! But fangirling mode put aside, Pleasure Slave turned out to be incredibly thought-out and planned. I haven't enjoyed such a nice read in months. Normally I'm not into the whole yaoi/yuri concept and admittedly came across this story on a whim. (That and the fact that the link to this story was the second one.) Still, you've completely blown me away. I think my whole perception towards yaoi/yuri has been changed from disgust -> acceptable. (But only if you're writing.) It's a big change, hn?

While I was reading the 43rd chapter, I was thinking: Oh no - it's coming to an end (reading-wise) and the plot isn't even remotely close to its finish! So I clicked on the review button and froze, literally. Silly me, not realizing the reviews are shown in chronological order, thought this was a discontinued story. At this point I was thinking 'shitshitshitshitshit!' But when I finally scrolled down - hah I nearly sighed in relief. Don't blame me though - this is the first story I've read on AFF. (The more common site is FF.net, but I was hungering for something a bit more mature.)

Anyhow - perhaps I should actually get on with the reviewing rather than ranting. I'm amazing at how much effort you've dedicated to Pleasure Slave. I know it was originally intended to be a plotless porn fic, but I'm breathless at how well you've developed the characters. I felt like I was growing with them. I enjoyed Touya's initial reluctance (for lack of better word) with Yue and marveled at his open devotion to Sakura. I liked Yue's icy exterior, both literally and figuratively, and the way Touya chiseled his way through the block of ice also known as his heart. I believe Sakura has gone through the subtlest of transitions. It seems she started out as an innocent, dependant, naive and childishly cheerful girl and well, stayed her innocent, dependant, naive and childishly cheerful self. Perhaps with a bit more sexual experience, physical growth and newfound love. Still, I was a tad disappointed at that. Syaoran is indescribable. He's always been my favorite character of CCS. I've always gone for the prominent S/S storyline, so I'm unused to having them as supporting casts. What I like most about his character is the portrayal. You made him realistic. Sure he said and did a few assholish things, but I totally saw the justification of his actions. We're all human: we all are possessive and irrational at times. But maaaaan, 43 chapters and our gorgeous amber-eyed Li Syaoran hasn't gotten laid! Somebody is either (unwillingly) practicing abstinence or there's an evil authoress on the prowl. I stick with the latter ~ Oh, I forgot to mention Kero! I love that you kept him in his original form. His appetite is insatiable as always. It's only natural that he's taken an instant liking to Sakura and Syaoran (though he'd die before admitting that).

I was also thoroughly surprised that Eriol hasn't appeared. It's good that at least somebody has steered away from the typical Eriol/Tomoyo pairing. Once again, I really enjoy the realism of your story. Tomoyo who has (had?) an unrequited love with Sakura and isn't just randomly paired off for the sake of E/T shippers. I'm also glad you don't have the whole Yue/Yukito deal going on. It'd be hectic with two forms of the same person running around. One hot Yue is all we need.

So honestly, fourty-three whole chapters and I feel as if the story won't be ending for a while. I'm expecting a heartwrenching breakup from Yue and Touya, Syaoran and Sakura, destruction of the void, hopefully a few unimportant deaths (*hinthint), reunions, more food for Keroberos, Yue and Touya having wild make-up sex, and at least five chapters of Syaoran and Sakura going at it like energizer bunnies. It should be safe to say there's a lot more to come, right?

I didn't know this until I scanned someone's review but HAPPYBELATEDBIRTHDAY! I'm so glad to have discovered Pleasure Slave, seriously, and will religiously stalk this story until your next update. You'll update soon, won't you? I'm not sure if you'll take the time to read this monster of a review, but I have rated your story (like you requested many chapters back) annnnnnnnnnnnd I guess that's all I have to say. May your muse be with you! Write away!

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From vix111 on August 27, 2007
That was a great chapter, I enjoyed it a lot!! Especially the fight, it was very well described, even the pirouttes in the air.
Keroberos, always amazing, helping when he is needed the most, I just love him *hugs kero*
I hope Clow wacks some sense into Yue, but I also hope for a bit of fanservice from them both; at least a very hot kiss XD
My favorite part was when everyone in the castle felt the cold, and the windows broke. I actually squealed like a fan girl (that I am XD) when it happened, and my sis was all worried about it...:D
I cant believe someone in Gaia commissioned some art from this story, thats amazing work!!

To the one that mentioned the name being "the nothing", usually "the void" is used as its name in fanfiction, because it just sounds cooler. Oh, and here's a little known fact: the Void is one of the japanese elements, and quoting wikipedia "represents those things beyond our everyday experience, particularly those things composed of pure energy. Atoms, their component particles, and atomic forces fall under this category, as do people in a higher state of consciousness." The Nothing, thus as is pure energy, even if its negative, would be the 'missing' element in the clow cards (not counting metal, but sword could be that one XD)
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From MistressMizu on August 26, 2007
D:

Clow?!

....Oh man.
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From ANON - Lancha on August 25, 2007
OMG! *___* This story is SO awesome!
*rubs her eyes*
I was intrigued by it for the last three days and read every free minute!

I love how you picture the characters emotions and how you write. The story is getting more and more interesting!
Somewhere in between I was crying and more than once my eyes got wet.

I had to draw some fanarts for your fanficion as Gaia comission and as the comissioner described the circumnstance of the fanfiction, I got REALLY interested and asked her for the link XD'
I just wished I could have read it BEFORE drawing the comissions ;o;
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g152/Lancha_1987/Gaia%20Online/Commies_Pairing/sakuraxshao.jpg
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g152/Lancha_1987/Gaia%20Online/Commies_Guys/touya.jpg
Nah XD but there is a scene that I really would love to draw now XD'
I hope to get the time for it!
AWESOME JOB!
♥ continue like that ♥
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From ANON - Sana-chan on August 25, 2007
omg..that picture of lil Yue!! KAWAII
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From ANON - Sana on August 25, 2007
ANON IS ME!! damit why does it keep sayin im anononononononono
it automatically makes me Sana on the original section...
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From ANON - Anon on August 25, 2007
oh poor poor Touya..
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From Scorpinac on August 25, 2007
I also came up with a thought as what it would actually take to "kill" Void while reading this chapter right when it was revealed to be Yue's "twin", but I'll wait and see before expressing it.
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From Scorpinac on August 25, 2007
Wow, didn't expect that, though I guess I should have, huh? Of course, Yue and Kero are forgetting that Touya won't leave himself without Sakura with him. Interesting "true form" you gave Void, by the way, considering in Movie 2 it was a girl. And Clow's come to mind screw in a dream again, oh joy. Well, I look forward to #44, and do hope it doesn't take as long as this one did, not that I'm complaining....welllll, okay, maybe a little... Laters!
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From ANON - ayachan on August 25, 2007
LOL, I loved that chapter. You aren't that evil :P Well, you are, but I've been waiting for the longest time for Clow to show up again anyway.
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From JLucPitard on August 25, 2007
I've been avoiding this fic based on the summary and that I don't like "breaking the spirit" type fics, but since it was a CCS story and focused on the siblings, I started it. Couldn't stop, (though I did skim some sections) and I love the complexities you've worked in and all of the character inserts have been masterful! Li is a fave, but Tomoyo keeps coming back more and more likable. Good work and I promise not to avoid any of your work in the future.
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From cocoke5 on August 25, 2007
yes that was a good chapter and can not wait for the next chapter where yue is dream of crow. up date soon.
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From ANON - Sana on August 24, 2007
"anon" above..was me
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From ANON - Anon on August 24, 2007
*gawks*....OMFG?!?!?!?
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