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By : Capitalist

From midnightfox on August 24, 2007
Bloody freaking hell!!!!!!!! I was on the edge of my seat and I could feel the adrenaline rushing through my veins as I read this. Damn great chapter!
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From ANON - Hinata's Twin on August 24, 2007
That chapter was very interesting and touching. I never thought Yue could cry or sob for that matter.
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From ANON - Sana on August 23, 2007
falconeye, HAHAHA!!
*wipes tear* oh you amuse me so greatly :)
your comment was funny :D
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From ANON - Sana on August 23, 2007
writers block?
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From ANON - Sana on August 23, 2007
*sigh*...:(
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From ANON - Sana- Chan on August 21, 2007
this chapters taking a while :(
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From ANON - falconeye on August 20, 2007
One of the longest running, deepest shakespearian storytelling, and canonically accurate CCS fanfiction. What else can I say that hasnt been eliquently stated already. ^_^

One Favor/Plot Idea
-start-
�Isn�t it obvious? I love her. So thank you for taking care of her until I could, because without you I might have never known her at all. For that, I owe you. Anything you need that I can give, or do, you only have to ask. You know where to find me.�
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�Captain Li Syaoran,� he addressed, tone abruptly formal, �you have acted beyond all expectations today, and saved my slave�s life. For that I am indebted to you, for she is quite precious to me. Anything of mine that I can give is yours; you only have to name it. There must be something,� Yue insisted. �What you fought today, no human has ever fought before. I will give you anything!�
-end-

I cant possibly be the only one sensing possiblities here! Syaoran is beholden with Tomoyo for introducing the love of his life, and Yue insists on rewarding him for going above call of duty. Might I offer three possible outcomes:

1) GOOD SCENARIO: Sakura (possibly using Syaoran's reward) convinces Yue to purchase Tomoyo. He now has 3 pleasure slaves, but he has Touya. Yue might perceive this as purchasing an extra pet/playmate would only require Tomoyo and Sakura to keep each other's company. Eventaully Yue would value Tomoyo as precious as Sakura and Touya (how can anyone not like Tomoyo?). Alternatively, Tomoyo could be Syaoran's or Sakura's slave (can a slave legally own a slave?). OUTCOME: Sakura is happy. Tomoyo can be with her love. Touya will be glad she as company (thats not a boy). Syaoran can breathe easier knowing he has an ally within the castle interrior.

2) BETTER SCEARIO: Building upon the #1; Instead of asking for Sakura's freedom/hand in marriage, Syaoran repays his life deft to Tomoyo by granting her freedom. Yue then gives her a job at the castle (I doubt Touya/Yue make a connection here?), preferable a high-wage one (see #3) and/or as Sakura/Touya servant (and away from Relan!). This way, Tomoyo can help Syaoran buy Sakura's freedom and be see her everyday. As a free woman, Meiling will teach Tomoyo the finer arts of telling Relan 'go to hell'. Later one when they do buy her freedom, Syaoran and Sakura can invite Tomoyo to live with them and be apart of his family; since Tomoyo has no other home. Yelan (the mother) would welcome both girls with open arms, and the 4 sisters would go CRAZY at the combined uber-cuteness of the two ladies. OUTCOME: Sakura and Tomoyo are REALLY HAPPY. Sakura will forgive Syaoran. Tomoyo respects him more. Li sisters suffer from uber-cuteness overload.
-joke-
Wife's freedom cost= 200 golds. Friends freedom cost= near death experience. Cousin's wedding ring gift cost= please dont ask. Living in a household of 8 women (1 mom, 4 sisters, the above 3) and away from that brother-in-law, cost= priceless. For everything else its mastercard. ^_^

3) BEST SCENARIO: Fire Relan, tarish and feather him, and launch him from a cannon over the castle walls (my personal favorite); Then give Tomoyo the now vacant position as castle keeper. I'd bet my life savings she'd could do his job 10x better (and unlike that bully, the maids will fall for her charm and beg her attention, including Sakura ^_^). OUTCOME: EVERYONES HAPPY!

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From priya on August 20, 2007
...... WAT WAS THAT ABOUT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! omg!!!!! now i just can't wait to see where this goes..... n i so wish this has a happy endin but i still haqve the feelin its not goin to be n this chapters endin just strenghtened that feelin..... I do NOT want to be a gloom cloud but that's wat i think!!!! n for some reason that power givin episode in the original series also seems to fit my current line of thought with where this is goin.... hmmmmmm..... i wonder.....

oh oh!!!!! i loved the way u got the original touya Kero hate into PS!!!!! only this time kero is much stronger!!!!!!!!! I wanna pet kero!!!!! he is just so KAWAIIIIII!!!!!!!!!!

http://chasva.deviantart.com/art/lil-yue-62774771
this is not exactly a PS pic..... but current obsession wit Yue is coz of PS n I'm just more that gratefull!!!!! his gloryness needs to be worshiped.... n i'm so glad u liked the prev pic!!! only a great story can motivate art!!!!!
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From ANON - WTW on August 20, 2007
Thank you very much dear for your dedicated time in writing this plot out over the years. I can tell you've placed much heart into the story and I thank you for sharing your writing skills.

You've made it very worth while for me to be able to read any story here on this site. Thank you.

I've read it all the way through and I have to say that this is one of my favorite fics that I've read in a long time. You take things nice and slow so that the characters and the situation developes just like the authors who sell their matterial do in stores. Thank you for taking good care of details when you write.

I was wondering though what ever happend to Sakura's birthday celebration. After her brother remembered that horried day and had his episode there was no other mention of it again. I was also wondering now the length of time that the siblings have now been up at the castle living. But I most likely shouldn't be concerned or worried since you've been doing such a grand job with forshadowing and all. Like when I was reading through I had noticed that Yue and Touya hadn't kissed yet even with all their fun. ^^ But you always seem to be able to delver! And you did masterfully with writing it in along with so many other examples. =3

I have to say that you've managed to make me cry with all the heartache your characters have gone through along with a bundle full of other emotions as I read. Thank you for doing such a great job. I do hope that it all ends with a happy ending. =^.^= And not one that is rushed to a close.

I do hope you can update soon too. I tend to enjoy reading a story when I know its done so that I dont' have to have that agonizing amount of time in between chapters. However in your case I'm sure till be Worth The Wait. ^^ So I do hope your not pressured into updating or anything by your readers but see it as a sign that we love your writing creativity and talent.

Thank you once more!
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From Scorpinac on August 19, 2007
Is it just me, or is #43 running a little late? And who says it's gonna end in under ten chaps.?! This could easily go on for another ten to twenty chaps. before Capitalist calls it done! It is her story, after all.
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From lilian on August 18, 2007
heya, just to let you know, I really like these transition chapters; I just get slow and lazy with the reviewing because there's less urgency with the lack of the cliffhanger. But really I definitely want to know what happens next. And I was a little sad seeing that this story is going to end in less than ten chapters; I think it just hit me because this story has been ongoing for so long! But I s'pose all good things come to an end :)

Anyway I really liked the girls and their chat together; it was really funny and interesting and definitely reminded me of the series and their rapport. And I'm really looking forward to the development of the Syaoran-Sakura relationship now.

I do wonder though if Sakura and Touya will ever get to see their mountain home again. I have a really bad feeling that one of the main characters is going to die (knock on wood), ay.

Anyway thanks for the chapter, hope to see more soon!
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From Aureawolf on August 15, 2007
Man...you really do just keep getting better and better. The internal parts of this fic, the dreams in particular, are amazing. Damn...now I can't wait for the next one. ^_~
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From acaciac123 on August 14, 2007
Ah the ever present death ending thats been hanging over the story ever since you mentioned that Yue/Toya was indeed a bit like Iason/Riki. I haven't been looking foreword to it but at least I can say I saw it comming. I dunno - it'll probably be necessary or something. Like maybe The Void exsists as long as Yue and Cerberus do. I dunno, anyway . . .

I remember awhile back you said that we were free to ask for things we'd liek to see/see more of in the fic as long as we said it nicely and by no means put any pressure on you that it just HAD to be put in there, you'd take it under possible consideration. Well here's my "what I would like to seeZ", I for one think Tomoyo and Meilin would make a wonderful couple. I said it, I'll fantasize about it and hope to god you'll indulge me oh you wonderful author you. :D

Otherwise keep up the good work.
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From ANON - Tadao Yokoshima on August 13, 2007
Girl, in my humble opinion, you should make it a doujinshi or a manga, really, it�s cool that you intent to publish it like a novel or book, but... a manga would rock the world, you have fan art already, why not ask one of the dudes to try and make you a doujinshi? for the people? really... it is what many dudes and girls would like to see.
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From ANON - pratz on August 13, 2007
hello. I'm your new reader and have just read ten last chapters in a row. I enjoy a lot the interaction between Touya and Yue, Touya with his stubborn persistance not to love Yue and Yue with his, in your word, delusion. Very, very well written. As for the Sakura part, I don't think it's as interesting as Yue/Touya because I only see her as a part that binds Touya to his reluctancy. Well, I may be wrong.

I will continue following this fic around. If youd don't mind, let me just say keep up the fab work! ^^
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