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From ANON - Fariyfae on July 27, 2007
Speculation Time!!!

The monsters are going to start targeting Toya for some reason....Right...RIGHT!!! Pet me on the head and tell me that I am right. *smiles* Since the little monsters tell the Void what they see and know, the Void now knows 'something' about Touya. That's why it sniffed at his head. What would make the void of life so interested in Toya. Is it obsessed with Toya's powers like Naku-chan in the manga and anime. What will Yue do if Touya is consistently targeted.

OOOhhhhhhh...its so exciting!!!

Of course, I would like to know what the heck is going on in Sayoran's thick head. I really never got the extreme antagonism between the two men in Sakura's life. They share certain characteristics so you would think that they would at least respect each other even if they didn't like each other but noooooo.

I have no means to speculate over Touya's reaction to Sayoran perhaps getting Sakura. Following your story, it is likely to be negative but the anime leaves me doubting. Here, Touya is more than a little mysognistic but that is not surprising seeing that BOTH his mother and his father is dead leaving him to hold the bag. In the anime and manga, although Touya is very protective, he isn't necessarily overbearing. Afterall, both always imply that he knows a little of what is going on. He is aware that Sakura is doing dangerous things. But, he never directly interfers or trys to restrain her. He protects from a distance. The anatagonism against Li is a side affect of the fact that he thinks Li will try to take her away. Nevertheless, he doesn't interfer between them ultimately even though he could have. Nevertheless, I can't help to think that a little of Touya's apparent antagonism is just his brand of teasing. He calls his sister a monster and Li a brat. Touya doesn't give such 'pet' names to people he doesn't like at least a little. Thats just my take on it which leaves me in the dark for predicting any interaction between Sayoran and Touya.

Until next time (which could be another review for this chapter *smirk*)

You know, you should start up a discussion board for this story. A yahoo chat group or something) There are so many interesting people that read this story that I am sure they would enjoy chatting with each other about what they think of the characters. And of course, we would all like to 'meet' you and figure out a little about how you mind works. I enjoy reading the reviews for your story almost as much as I enjoy reading your story. Some of them make me want to write an AU of your AU (although I wouldn't dare. I would be a sore disappointment being rather ineloquent myself).
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From ANON - Silverwolfe on July 27, 2007
OMG!! That was so unexpected! Damn lizard things....I'm more ad at what Li's cahracter did! I'm sure that he'll ask Yue by the end of the story...if he doesn't let them go first...I think that's what's going to happen...maybe. Yue is going to die*sob* and Touya will not be happy and be regretful, until Yue somehow comes back. Maybe lol.
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From ANON - Sana on July 27, 2007
oh aaand..your a girl!!
wow, im so happy to finally know..
sry *blush*
it's not that i ever wonderd if you were a guy or girl
but like..i just had no clue?!
*slaps self across face*
i am sorry oh wonderful writer..T-T (oww..my face)
but Haza! now i know your a girl, and a very talented one at that :)

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From ANON - Sana on July 27, 2007
oh how wonderful T-T
i thought Li was going to..uh...you know?..with Sakura
and SEEEE!!!! SHE ALMOST GOT TOUYA KILLED....AGAIN!!
%#@E&%$@$*$&%#^%&$@%^&$%$*&$!!!!

*sips tea*
very good job as always, i have been waiting for that chapter ^O^
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From ANON - CBCC on July 27, 2007
I guess there is just absolutely nothing that I can complain about this chapter. It's just awesome~!
I wonder if Syaoran had the guts to ask Yue for Sakura as his reward... and if Sakura can convince Touya that she loves Syaoran and that he accepts the two together (ignoring the slim chances here...), just what are the chances that Yue would say yes... Hopefully Yue will not forget that he has still to grant Syaoran his reward and that we'll soon hear about it in the next chapter or two~~! (or is that my wishful thinking?)
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From ANON - ayachan on July 27, 2007
umm.. wow.. yeah, totally did not see that coming! But it was very exciting!!!! Now to figure out what magical powers Touya has which made the monster actually stop attacking him! And that was a very awkward sentence, LOL. Maybe Clow is magically protecting him in some way? And I want to see what happens between Sakura and Syaoran (wow, never in my life would I thought I'd be saying something like that :P). But GREAT chapter! Can't wait for the next one!!
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From ANON - Sorceresszila on July 27, 2007
Forgot to say happy birthday! You got your 1000 reviews and so much more!
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From ANON - Sorceresszila on July 27, 2007
I thought Touya was perfectly in character. People change dramatically when something serious occurs, like the almost rape of a sister. I am not surprised that he is bending to Yue's will now, because he has realised the threat that Yue holds against his sister. Who's to say Yue won't attempt to hurt Sakura again, if Touya is disobedient?
Are you going to have Yue go through the stages of realising that Touya's submission is not what he wants? Similar to how he reacted the time when Touya gave him the silent treatment? I'm addicted to your story. You should see me when I realize that there's a new update. I dance around the room and sing ^,,,,^ Todays is Friday so I think there will be an update today? I'm excited about that.
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From lilian on July 27, 2007
and man gittachi, I just checked out all those pictures...they're gorgeous!
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From ANON - Anon on July 26, 2007
Happy belated Birthday!!
it was last..tuesday?
sry i was camping *takes out birthday cake*
i wiiiish..oh wait..you get to make the wish
..ok i still wish though!
that the next chappy will be as excellent as the others
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From ANON - DragonAvenger on July 26, 2007
AMAZING. I'm speechless, and so so so so so eager for more.

Happy (belated) birthday!
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From ANON - Fairyfae on July 26, 2007
Well, I am back to review a chapter for the second time. I just couldn't stay away. A matter of fact, I am still crying on and off without even having reread it. Its not really in me to reread such a tortuous chapter. Me and my stupid habit of becoming too attached to the characters. Add that to the fact that I research slave systems ranging from India to the Ancient Roman Empire as part of my job, I get trapped in the horror and the reality that no one can remain unbroken (especially people who do not bend easily like Touya). However, this is fiction and we can remain somewhat optimistic.

The main speculation seems to be over 'what is broken.' At the same time, everyone insists that Touya loves Yue in this fiction. If that is so, maybe what is broken is Touya's heart. Afterall, part of what makes love is trust. A belief that you can make mistakes and somehow work through it. A beleif that the other person will not intentional seek to do you real and severe harm. Its a feeling of safe harbor and security. Maybe Touya really did begin to feel this around Yue. Thats why he tried to escape. Even if it was subconcious, he believed in Yue enough that it never dawned on him that Yue would kill hundreds or that he would rape (violently and repeatedly I might add; something that frequently kills the victim from internal hemmorhaging and other related problems)Sakura just to get back at him.

That illusion of security has been ripped away. Whether he wanted to admit it or not, he started to feel really secure around Yue. He knew what punishements he would recieve and trusted him to not get too extreme. In this chapter, he saw Yue almost kill him. He saw Yue almost rape his sister. He heard Yue casually throw out that he would take action that would kill to severely hurt hundreds. He saw the joy on Yue's face as he was in intense pain...as Yue raped him violently again and again. It must seem from the outside that Yue's greatest pleasure comes when his slave is in pain. Right now, Touya's heart must be bleeding. All sense of security or dreams of anything even as mild as contentment must be shattered at his feet. I am not saying that he is not strong enough to pull himself out of this rut. I am just saying that if anything is broken, it is not only his pride but his love.

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From vix111 on July 26, 2007
ok, I had to review once more...

People keep saying he broke down Touya's spirit...I actually think capitalist wasn't talking about a broken spirit...his spirit was more shattered when he wasn't eating and practically gave up,and like somebody said before, his attitude was broken, nothing else.
No, I think he means everything else is broken: the trust he had on Yue, Yue's own heart, Touya's pride, and even Touya's promise of taking care of Sakura. And lets remember, he still can't face her.

I hope you had a nice birthday capitalist, and hopefully by the time you make the next update I'll be able to send you a fan art of your story I'm drawing!! ^__^
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From morwen4re on July 26, 2007
arg! that was good, but sad... and that little skit in the an made me smile. i can't wait to see the next update! whoot whoot!
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From ANON - Leelay on July 26, 2007
*deep breath* Where to start................Wow. I come back from a small vacation, and discover that you had two more chapters and were already on chapter 39. I could hardly believe it!

I have concluded at the end of chapter 39:
1) I hate Yue
2) I hate Yue
3) Syaoran is irritating me
4) Sakura makes me smile (when she's not getting almost raped)
5) I love Yue
6) I love Touya
7) Despite Touya shattering Yue's trust, I forgive him
8) Despite Yue treating Touya terribly, he's in love so I forgive him
9) I want something horrible to happen to Yue to teach him that force is not the best way to solve problems
10) I want something horrible to happen to Ralen ......... because he's Ralen

I can't wait until your next up to see what is going to happen next; so update soon. Please. By the way is the next chapter going to be Yue-centric? I love chapters that delve into Yue's mind.

It's so strange to see the contrast between the 2 last chapters. 38 began with Yue making love to Touya gently (he's never been so gentle before) Then he is almost overcome by Touya's loving kiss goodbye.
Chapter 39 began with Yue contemplating how best he could hurt Touya and later on he rapes him.
It's incredible how easily things go from good-to-bad with these 2. They just can't keep their emotions and feelings from hurting each other. Amazing contrasting chapters.

Keep up the excellent work!

Love,
Leelay
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