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From ANON - Beca on July 26, 2007
Ahhhh!! *runs into a wall* ... *gets up and does it again* x_X
Yue!!! ;_;
What have you done?!!

*continues reading*
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From priya on July 26, 2007
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i haven't read this chap yet n so i refure to look at all those reviews!!!!!!!!! I will be back again later!!!!
....the links didn't work eh?? thats strange....

http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa45/chasva/ps2.jpg
if that doest work again....then
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/60639946/
i hope this link works!!! I'm waitin to see wat u think bout it!!!
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From ANON - sei on July 26, 2007
Oh my God... I read your latest chapter (Broken) while at work and I almost cried... my eyes are actaully watery and my hands are still shaking, and it has already been 5 minutes since I finished it.

Touya finally admitted defeat and accepted everything Yue did and said. Well, Sakura has always been his greatest weakness and Yue finally used his trump card. I guess Touya will really do anything for his sister... even being completely subservient to a master.
For some reason, it was so hard to imagine Touya submitting and finally being broken like that.

Oh my... I'm sorry for the incoherency of this review... I'll be patiently waiting for the next installment.
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From ANON - Cute-but-Psycho on July 26, 2007
Oh my god. My heart is pounding and my entire body is shaking. I'm completely in tears and have been since Yue almost confested that he loves Touya (well he said 'adores' but its close to love!). This is hands down the most beautiful fan fiction I have ever read. I'm not joking about anything. Yue is so in love with Touya that he is willing to give him anything for the boy's happiness even if it broke his heart in the process, so no wonder he is so angry that Touya left - life with Yue ISNT that bad!! I believe this fic is the true definition of love. This is the most beautifuly writen fan fiction out there. If I wrote half as well as you, I'd truly be an amazing writer. Thank you so much for writing this and posting this. It really made my heart melt.

I don't think I'll ever stop crying (and that's a good thing)
Cute-but-Psycho.

P.S. I don't think I've ever cried this much in my life.
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From ANON - Mekana on July 25, 2007
Here I am again writing another review for the same chapter, but I felt I missed mentioning something that needed to be mentioned. I wanted to thank you for showing the depth of love that some siblings can have for each other. To do what he has for Sakura in the past in remarkable in and of itself but to completly submit and give up the last thing he had, the last power over Yue (his dignity and pride) for his sister is truly impressive. I just wanted to say thanks because very few writers in all the fanfics I've read have so beautifully and masterfully described the kind of relationship I have always thought that they had. Your protrayal is perfect, so thanks. On that note, I'd also like to say Touya finally won. Other readers may disagree but I think he finally beat Yue. Everything he has ever done as been to protect Sakura and he has always insisted he wasn't a slave. And when he is finally broken, he is FORCED to say it. IT doesn't come as endearment or love for Yue, it comes at the hands of protecting Sakura from a fate worse than death (probably in his mind anyway) He ran from Yue to reclaim his freedom and he is only giving it up now for his sister. Yue was right when he noticed (during the dancing, music scene) that there was no room for Yue in their perfect existance. This has proven it. Yue can take everything from Touya except his love for his sister and he is a slave to that relationship first and foremost and secondly to Yue and that won't change. TOUYA WON!! Anyway, this was just a long review to say what an immensely excellent job you've done in writing this and how I applause you for the depth you added to the story in just this chapter. Can't wait for the next! :)
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From MangaForever on July 25, 2007
OMG!!!!!!!!
dis is kool!!!!
but now dat yue has broken touya's spirit, will he like him dat way?
pls pls pls update soon
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From ANON - Mekana on July 25, 2007
Hello Hello! I've been reading this story faithfully through for the last several weeks but this is my first review. To which I must say I LOVE IT. The characters are incredible and you have a great writing style. Seriously, I've been sitting and reading to the point of tears at parts, biting my nails at others and screaming at various characters in still others. You are a good writer and I'm super glad to have the opportunity to read your story. I only hope the next chapter will come soon too.

Specifically on this chappie though. I was dreading the moment with Sakura. I somehow knew that something like this would happe. When you wrote how Yue was thinking of what would hurt Touya the most, I instantly thought Sakura and then felt a pain in my chest for what might happen to her. (Thats props to your great writing) Thank goodness you saved her. BUt could Syaoran be anymore of a wuss? I know he was told not to disturb them on pain of death, but seriously, its the woman he loves! You'd think he'd do anything for her. Hopefully he'll redeem himself in future chapters. When are they going to be found out? Are you putting anymore Keroberos in the story. HE was a fun character. Anyway, thanks for the amazing story. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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From ANON - Dovesary on July 25, 2007
*conks herself on the head* Silly me, I was so distruaght over the (odd...okay, disturbing)feeling of saddness at not seeing Sakura raped that I forgot to mention everything else!

First off, Happy Birthday! How old are you going to be? Although, you might've said it and I just wasn't paying attention...oh, well.

Second,I've decided, that if at all possible, it'd probably be in the best interest (for the reader's sanities [or is it 'y'? Gahh...]and for the sake of your windows[you don't want angry fans beating them in with oh, let's say rocks and bats])if you would post the next two chapters at the same time. I don't think many of us would survive the agony (not to mention anxiety) of waiting to see how Li does get past second base with her. (Speaking of, if he teaches her to play baseball and she just gets to third base, I'll be so angry!!) While the Yue/Touya sex gets me all worked, I'm dying to see a little boy/girl action kicking....that doesn't involve Ralen! That little freak...grr.

Third, I was just positively purring when Yue raped Touya. (Sadistic side of me again. It nearly rules over me. I attempt to beat it down with thoughts of cute and fluffy kittens, but it just doesn't stay!)It was just so...intense. It wasn't by far one of their more-detailed sexcapades, but dang....woo. *fans herself*
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From ANON - Dovesary on July 25, 2007
...Damn it! It's so terrible of me, but...I wish Yue had raped Sakura. Oh, God. There I said. That horrible, sadist side of me forced me to do it! I swear! *runs away to cry in a corner*

Great chapter, by the way!
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From OutlawAngel on July 25, 2007
WAAAAAAAAAH!!!!....Yue's finally broken Touya...but why??...now he will be all zpmbie-like...
""I'm Touya your� slave, you are my master""....you better do something about this...but in general
I like where your going with this story...But Touya has more spirit then that...do something more vicious!!
hehe....dun listin'to me...keep doing the great work....update as soon as you can...i wanna know noe what will
happen now that Touya is broken...will Yue regret it???...hehe....UPDATE SOOON!!!!!

YA NE!!!
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From ANON - yue lover on July 24, 2007
I dont think touya really is broken. he has no option but to act like a slave right now. but yue wont want touya to be broken, cos then he will be boring like yue`s other slaves. its sad Yue has gone back to treat touya horribly. he should find a way to understand touya, not hurt him.
happy birthday.
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From KyoSlave87 on July 24, 2007
OMG I FORGOT! HAPPY BIRTHDAY!! hope u get those thousand reviews lol
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From ANON - Amet on July 24, 2007
Happy Birthday dear Author!!!
May this year your wish come true n u also write more chaps of this fic. XD

This chap was really hard fo' me to read. Touya's helplessness was really painful.
I am so lookin forward to ur update~
hopefully coming chap will be more better for touya.

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From lilian on July 24, 2007
HAPPY BIRTHDAY!! And I was thinking again about this story. After reading a couple of reviews, I thought, How the heck DOES Syaoran get some action by the next 2 chapters? unless, besides the conjectures Sorpiniac put out, Sakura and Syaoran both get swept up in the moment and are trashy romance noveled. XD In the aftermath, however, how is Touya going to know, since he no longer has dinner with her anymore? And when he does find out he'll probably freak out madly, although how he is going to take action I'm not sure, considering his current relationship with Yue. One thing I'm also looking forward to is whether or not Yue and Touya take their evening meal together now. Before the escape occurred, when Touya always had dinner with Sakura, I always wondered about what a Touya/Yue tableside conversation would be like. But now, seeing as to how their relationship is all master/slave, they probably won't be eating with each other I suppose; Yue will probably make Touya sit on the floor or something.

Aah so many questions. but anyway HAPPY BIRTHDAY, YET AGAIN!!!!!
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From ANON - rainy_days on July 24, 2007
I love all these twists and turns in this story! I wonder how long Touya can manage staying so docile... Can't wait to read more - thanks so much for the update!

And last but not least, Happy Birthday!!

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