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By : Capitalist

From ANON - amy on July 21, 2007
this chapter was fantastic. you have to hurry any write another chapter!!! also happy birthday for tuesday, i hope its a good day for you. :D i only want one thing from you...HURRY AND WRITE SOME MORE!!!

thanks
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From Scorpinac on July 21, 2007
huh, rather mixed reviews so far...

Just my two cents(or whatever your currency-of-choice equivalent), but I found the punishment more than adequate. But then I can honestly see it from Touya's POV, having a younger sister myself. I'm nowhere near that protective of her, hell, in school she had a tendency to bop guys who pushed her buttons wrong, usually with blunt instruments(a lunch box on the bus once, a block of wood in the school library(didn't actually get to see that last one), etc.), but I would jump in if I could or had to. And if that had been me and Nans, yeah, I'd have cracked, too. Well, that's all I have to say on that. Oh, yeah, and Happy Birthday! Ciao!
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From Scorpinac on July 21, 2007
Decided to answer the fans pathetic pleas, oh great one? Thank you, oh thank you!

Okay, I'll admit it, it hadn't even occurred to me that trying to escape would constitute a breach of the agreement, but thankfully Yue didn't actually do anything to her, so, [i]whew![/i] And I'm glad she didn't lose her walks, though I wouldn't be surprised if she's still banned the visitors and dance lessons for a while. And the collar turns black and/or comes off in just two more chapters?! YES!!! Ahem, I mean, okay then. Well, here's looking forward to #40, and then #41! Laters.
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From Takarachan14 on July 21, 2007
AWW!

I was really hoping to see Yue rape Sakura T_T

OH well XD

Well, advanced happy bday Capitalist! I really like this fic like everyone else XD (like checking it.... every time I go on the internet? XD)
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From ANON - ayachan on July 21, 2007
I was thinking about this, but the Touya punishment scene kind of seemed like a compromise to me. Technically, touya did get raped in front of Sakura as everyone was guessing, but she couldn't see or hear anything, so the situation wasn't as scarring/spirit breaking. I agree with KarenElhyam about Touya and Yue though. I'm about to sic Clow on both of them and make him force both of them to get alone and say their feelings and all that jazz. *sigh* men and their egos, ne? LOL just kidding guys :P Haha, I just want another fluffly scene with both of them since they were getting along oh-so-well. I also agree with Madd Hatter that the punishment scene just didn't seem as bad as it could have been. Maybe we were expecting blood and all that nastiness and stuff.. or that we just aren't grasping how bad of a punishment Touya's submission is?.. or maybe Touya's submission is just the start and it'll just get worse from there? Anyway, I hope Sakura doesn't fall into Ralen's hands though. That fantasy rape scene in Ch. 34 still gives me the shivers just thinking about it.
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From ANON - cocoke5 on July 21, 2007
so yue broke tonya spirt and now what is going to happen . can not wait for the next chapter and see . up date soon the story is real good and can not wait for more. you fan.
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From EVILinnocence on July 21, 2007
Happy Birthday Capitalist!!!!! I love this fanfic and I check on it every day. The least I can do is to contribute in your 1000 reviews.
EVILinnocence
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From MistressMizu on July 20, 2007
Oh, you tease, you! XD Two more chapters? A lot of work to do? Why, I wonder what that could mean!

But oh damn. I was wrong! Although nothing too serious actually happened to Sakura, so that's good. Still... That must have hurt, and been very frightening for her. God, the sadistic person in me almost wanted to see her raped in front of Touya, just for his reaction. To picture him writhing in pain at having to watch. Or maybe to see his stomach turn even more in disgust... Yue sure wouldn't be happy about it.

Anyway, I shouldn't be so sadistic. :( It's not exactly a good thing... Now, as for Touya. The poor boy has finally been broken. And when Yue was out on the hillside, thinking of everything, my heart was aching for him. I even held a breath thinking about it... I wish one of them would have admitted their feelings already, but I'm sure it'll come eventually. At this rate, I see Touya admitting his feelings first just because Yue doesn't seem so close to thinking that way. He's just being selfish. Bah. Back to Touya. It was kind of painful to see him broken like that (except the sadist in me disagress, and smiles with joy) and to beg, cry, and bend to Yue's will... To call him master... I wouldn't have wanted to do it either. It's humiliating. Degrading...

I loved this chapter; it was excellent and had my heart going doki doki. XD Also. Happy Birthday! I wonder how old you are... But you probably wouldn't want to tell us, or would you? :B
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From vix111 on July 20, 2007
Oh my...he broke down...YES!!!!
this was an amazing chapter. Yes, they did it with sakura there in the room, but hey, at least she didnt hear it or see it. About time he admitted something! Is it possible that Yue has no idea yet from where they escaped? And what happened to punishing Ralen for his mistake??? XD
Glad to know Syaoran is gonna get laid in two more chapters. And it would be soooo cool if she appears one day with a black collar and Touya goes berserk ^_^

Happy birthday next week!! *throws cake* because its sooo much better to throw cake than confetti XD
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From ANON - long_time_reader_but_never_reviewer_until_now on July 20, 2007
I've read your fic when you had about 20 something chapters and I never reviewed until now but uhhhh happy b-day. Really can't wait until Syaoran and Sakura take their relationship to the next level.
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From midnightfox on July 20, 2007
T^T OH you're so mean but this is so f*cking awesome damnit! I felt the adrenaline coursing through my veins while reading this *fans self* I can't believe Touya's finally broken and Sakura's virginity was almost taken away (Ralen would be happy if it was) ^~^ Oh my I can't wait for more.
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From ANON - Silverwolfe on July 20, 2007
Wow....poor Touya....had to be reduced to that....but I feel the most for Li because Sakura was almost taken from him. His character really does seem to portray an undying amount of love for Sakura, and the story would never be complete without those two together!! I loved the chapter!
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From ANON - Madd Hatter on July 20, 2007
I smiled to myself in success when I thought Yue would do that. I kept thinking back to their deal, and while I was excited at my own achievement, I felt so bad, lol. When Yue reminded Touya of their deal I was just "Go me!- wait.. aww.."
I am, however, surprised Touya admitted all that, however, logically it made sense. That surely would break him, and Yue knew it. Touya shouldn't be too embarrassed with his sister though. Being blindfolded and unable to hear anything - she doesn't really have a clue what Yue did to Touya right below her.

To be honest, I'm not real excited about a Syaoran and Sakura sex scene. I'm not opposing it, but it's not the part in this story that drives me to read it. Probably, because there's so many Syaoran and Sakura pairings. Plus, I haven't the slightest clue as to how he is going to take her virginity within the next 2 chapters. Something tells me Yue's anger won't be extinguished unless Touya gives some really good oral or something. Not to mention Syaoran's certainly not going to be able to pay her off in 2 chapters either, unless he gets a serious bonus.

Oh my, I just now thought of it. Unless Sakura gets her collar turned black before hand. If it's black it won't matter how many times they go at it, but that also means a spirited broken Sakura. So something might spark the sudden interest from Yue, or Ralen gets completely out of control. Or even worse, Yue doesn't make her his slave anymore, which might make Touya happy at first, but not when he finds out Ralen has just been dieing for this day. Touya won't be able to do anything about it though, and he might not even know if he's confided to his chamber and balcony. Though, Syaoran will know and will have to spill blood over it. Maybe that's what you mean by he'll be really busy and need his strength. Ooo... that also means he won't have to buy her anymore if she just becomes a maid in the castle. So I'll go with this feeling. I'll go with her not being a slave anymore, getting in Ralen's midst, and if that's the case Syaoran could stop Ralen, physically, before harming Sakura. Although, knowing you, put us under the most intense suspense of what's going to happen to Sakura in Ralen's bed. Then Syaoran saves the girl and they're free together. -This sounds too good to be true though-

One thing I am disappointed at is, Yue really did go light on Touya. He had intended with the worst punishment for Touya ever. But gave in to Touya, so I still see Yue as Touya's slave. Despite the fact Touya is groveling at his feet and kissing his hands. Yue is melting to it way too fast. Yue has the element of water and wind, I think Touya has the element of fire... because he is always able to melt Yue's frosty heart. I hope I didn't miss that somewhere in your story and I'm just late at discovering this. I think Yue should've gone through with his punishment and not melt to Touya's pitiful groveling. Yes, it means a great deal to the story, but to me I was a little disappointed in the punishment. Great chapter though. Really put me at ease when I woke up to see this chapter updated. Can't wait to see the next one, but at least I have closure now.
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From AnimeHuggler on July 20, 2007
Wootness! I was semi-right. But Yue tried to rape Sakura instead. Aaaaawww, poor baby. Well then! Can't wait to see life now with every sentance being finished off with Master. You're evil. Very much so.
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From sodapop0006 on July 20, 2007
Poor Touya. Poor, poor Touya. I wonder how long it will take Yue to realize that a Touya without spirit isn't really Touya at all. Great chapter.
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