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From lilian on July 20, 2007
This chapter was amazing. Took me on a lot of spins and turns; for a minute there I thought Yue realllly wouldn't listen to anything Touya would say when he was about assault Sakura. But then Touya said his bit and I caught my breath. Touya is finally broken, but I wonder whether Yue is going to regret it, because Touya submitting himself completely isn't going to make them lovers again. And love is for equals, I believe!! And Sakura nad Li, I just love them, and I'm happy that they're going to get some action soon, hahaha. The visual of them hugging through her cage bars is sad but romantic. And ah!! Birthday soon! Congratulations, thanks for sticking with this story for nigh 3 years of your life XDDD

Thanks for the chapter, loved it!
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From ANON - KarenElhyam on July 20, 2007
Happy Birthday!

Although, my goodness, it feels weird saying that after such a dark chapter. Way to totally take a billion steps back for ever gradual step forward you took toward sweet niceness in the story.

I am quickly losing my sympathy for Touya and Yue. Gosh, they're dumb. I love them, but my patience is starting to wear thin. Not even over this latest development with the spirit breaking and everything, but more because Touya doesn't seem to realize he's just as big, if not a bigger jerk than Yue could ever wish to be. His misogyny towards Sakura is becoming kinda creepy. Also, I really hope that Yue eventually gets over his need to own and moves toward wanting a real relationship. But that might be asking for too much.

At least Sakura and Syaoran continue to be sweet and deserving of all my concern. Heh, but it'll be fun when the other shoe drops when Sakura finally earns that black collar. At least Syaoran will get laid, though! The boy deserves it.

I care so much, though, about this story that simple compliments don't seem to do it justice. I've been following it for months and months now, and I'm so excited to see it continue to play out! I don't know how much longer, but I know I'll enjoy the ride as much as I've enjoyed it up till now. Thank you for the great story, that continues to brighten my day whenever you update.
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From ANON - ayachan on July 20, 2007
you're pretty close to those 1,000 reviews!!! Oh man.. I just started freaking out when I read the title of the chapter!!!! You could hear me screaming for half of the chapter, LOL. And thank god he didn't actually rape Sakura.. but wow, you took years off my life with that. -_- Haha, but I LOVED IT!!!! I can't wait to see what Syaoran is going to do! and Happy Early Birthday :)
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From ANON - alice on July 20, 2007
i just wanted to say that i LOVE this story..so keep writing!
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From ANON - yue lover on July 20, 2007
so will there be an update this Friday? I hope so.
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From ANON - kai's grrl on July 19, 2007
awesome. i can't wait to read more for what happens. i mean yue can't blame touya for trying to escape when given the chance. he is feeling unloved at tthis point with no security as yue's lover. i want to read on the progression of sakura and li's realtionship. please don't let the evil overlord of the girls take sakura as punishment for running away when it was all touya's fault.
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From 0ri on July 19, 2007
My god, I don't even know how to BEGIN this review.

Omgomgomgomgogmgomg 10000000000000x times over.

Seriously.

:_: OMG.

I sat shaking in my seat after finishing this chapter. Holy god. You are brilliant. I feel so stupid for reviewing because I suck at reviewing and can never form my liking of a story into proper words but - I LOVE YOU.

I actually remembered that quote back from chapter 12 also. Chapter 12 was probably one of my favorite chapters, because of teh angst. So that's probably why I recalled it. I just.. didn't say anything. :x

I was so happy when Touya knocked Ralen's ass to the floor. I HATE Ralen. XD I hate that bastard like woah.

And I liked how Touya was being so devilish and planning his escape when Yue was making love to him... Oh he's been naughty.

I don't possibly know how you can abuse him more then you did in the whipping-chapter unless you killed him. (zomg!11 I doubt that'll happen though.) I seriously want to glue myself to the computer screen until you update. And you REALLY deserve all the praise you're getting, no doubt about it. It's incredible that you've been so loyal to this story for so long, truly incredible.

If you ever write anything else on any other sites or whatever - put a link in your profile p.l.z.! I would definitely read everything by you.
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From Aureawolf on July 19, 2007
Oh no..cliffhangers! Literally...people hanging off of cliffs. Oh dear. ^_^ Fantastic chapter. I'm so glad Touya got Sakura to attempt the escape. I was worried she was gonna stay behind and poor Touya was gonna feel even worse. Man, the next chapter is gonna be so good. Poor Yue. Hehe...can't wait for the emotional blender that shall be the next chapter. Woot!
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From ANON - gaspers on July 19, 2007
gasp. tomorrow is friday. a week passed slowly! i hope an update tomorrow!

another gasp. yue will be violent next chapter? scary! it will be interesting to read lol
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From ANON - Madd Hatter on July 19, 2007
After giving this chapter some thought, of how Toya was able to leave without seeming too upset about it - is I'm thinking he's not thinking about himself. I haven't given up hope of him revealing his true feelings for Yue, but I think Sakura is on his mind more than Yue at the moment. He promised his mother he'd take care of her, and her sitting in a bird cage for display is probably not what his mother had in mind.

That's why I'm also not surprised she didn't reveal everything to her brother and she didn't whine *too* much. They have been spoiled despite their restrictions, but I think Sakura understood her brothers intentions. If she hadn't, I'm sure she'd announce everything and beg her brother not to leave.

As for Yue, I still can't imagine what he's going to do. What I'd like is for a show in front of Sakura, or maybe including her (
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From ANON - fairyfae on July 18, 2007
Ahhhhh...you evil little thing you. Leaving us with a long wait and a severe cliff hanger. There is more angst in this than in a teenage girls drama. *sigh* I can't help thinking that Touya would choose to stay if he only had the freedom to leave. He would enjoy the sex more if it wasn't all about dominance and submission. Like was hinted in previous chapters, love is taking a risk and giving up whats important to you to make another person happy. I think if Yue was to set Touya free, he would get more of what he wanted.

Ah well. I am the everlasting opptumist (sorry...I can't spell). On another note, I can't understand the minor obsession everyone seems to have over Touya being raped in front of Sakura. Thats that type of trama that sends people into self-induced comas. It crosses the line from punishement to sadism. This fic walks that line anyway but has always stayed just this side of it. I can't help anticipating exactly what Yue will do however. I can't help but think its not what everyone is suggesting. Afterall, you've been able to keep this fic going by constantly doing the unexpected.

Of, course I can see all privledges being revoked. Are the chains going to make a repeat preformance. Afterall, there is not guareentee that there was only one secret passageway out of the castle. Touya has to be keeping an eye out for them in the future.

Nevertheless, its obvious at this point that prior to whatever punishment you have in mind, Touya was leaving less out of a desire to leave and more out of a desire for freedom.

You keep us in so much suspence that it draws a bit away from the sid plots but I am extremely interested in what is going on there. Are Yue and Kero chasing after rebel magical creations. Did Clow make a big booboo in his arrogance. Are Touya's powers ever going to develop to the point where they are really an issue. Although he is 'just a psychis' in Yue's words, the manga and anime make out his abilities to be no joke. Otherwise he wouldn't have been a good source of 'food.'

Ahh well, I have taken enough of your time with my speculations. Like everyone, I hope you will update soon.
Fae
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From SisterWicked on July 18, 2007
Oooh, thank you SO much for updating, I was looking forward to this for a while..

Anyway, I love how you've managed once again to keep everyone so completely in character, even down to Touya's reluctance to leave in spite of himself. Of course, he'd feel almost obligated to attempt the escape, love or not, ne? But besides that, I still don't see how he can deny the obvious feelings that he and Yue have developed.. Oh well, I guess that's just like a couple of silly men, right? Always too caught up in dumbness and complication to step back and take an objective look at things..

And Yue?

Classic "Hmph" reactions be damned, I thought it was sweet that Touya's farewell affected him like that, it's great to see a believable "ZOMG YUE HAS FEELINGS!?" scene! Most people portray him as pretty lacking in that respect, most of them write him as either Uber Uke-ish, or Super Sadistic, haha.. You've managed to retain his aloofness while simultaneously showing a development in his emotional state, and that takes quite a bit of doing, congratulations!

Keep it coming, I'll be eagerly awaiting the next wonderful installment!
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From ANON - YACUMO on July 18, 2007
WOW, I wasn�t able to read some fiction because of my computer for quite a while, but to read you again is really great. I am sorry for Yue, but well noone is there to comfort and try to woo our porr devatated Yue. I liked very mucho how you describe Toya�s attitudes towards Yue, he is kind of cute when he tries not to be an asshole all the time. lol
So, anyway great fic, great characters.... and I really, really hope to read your next chapter soon and see what is going to happen to Toya, or how is going to develope this lustfull relationshio into a more lovely one. But first; Toya�s punishment!

Hope to read you soon.
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From ANON - Lionhart on July 18, 2007
It's understandable that Yue wouldn't be himself after all that happened - even the most seasoned masochistic killer would have a problem with a loved one (or someone they cared about) choosing to escape in front of them. I probably would have written it the same way. I happen to enjoy this story very much - and if you can update quickly then that's even better.
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From ANON - yue lover on July 18, 2007
Yesss! we need some gloomy atmosphere in the castle! really give the servants something to talk about!
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