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By : Capitalist

From ANON - yue lover on July 18, 2007
I hope you tell us how Yue found out about the escape. did Ralen contat him with the jewel? Did he rush home to find the necklace on the bed and it break his heart? Did he follow touya and Sakura? Did he hear Sakura's scream from a distance and investigate? please tell!
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From ANON - ayachan on July 18, 2007
man, I don't even want to contemplate how bad the atmosphere will become in the castle if Yue does rape Touya >_< Sakura'll be scarred for life.... well.. hmm.. she's smacked some sense into Yue before, so maybe she can do the same thing before things go too badly?
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From ANON - Anon on July 17, 2007
That was an epic chapter. I really thought that touya and sakura were gonna get all the way home.
About yue losing control, is he gonna end up like clow said young yue was like (when yue couldnt handle being in his physical body and was totally unpredictable and dangerous). that would be so awesome! i am happy that ralen got yelled at!! he deserved that.
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From lilian on July 15, 2007
This chapter was so suspenseful. When Sakura fell, I almost thought all her powers would suddenly awaken and she'd rescue herself, but Yue rescuing her brings so much back and now Touya's in massive trouble. Punishment worse than before? Cripes. Also, Sakura managed to keep Syaoran and their relationship from Touya! There were about 5 times where I thought she'd blurt it out for sure. Then there's that thing with Li and how he can't remember what Touya said, exactly...I can't either and I'll be reading closely to see what happens with that. And also how Li reacts to the attempted escape.

But my favorite part of this chapter was when Yue rescued Sakura. I got so nervous for a minute there, and then Yue swooping down in blue and white was really great, and so was Touya's reaction to her survival. Anyway thanks for the chapter, really really hope the next one comes soon!!

-lili
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From vix111 on July 15, 2007
That boy is in such a denial state, that its physically hurting him. Poor, poor Touya. Maybe Yue can hire a psychologist for him to deal with his issues...after the whipping XD
Now, the cliffhanger wasn't really that bad as the one when he found the escape route. *That* one was bad; however I had the feeling you would be updating on friday. Why yesterday? well, you know you have reached a high level of fandom when you remember a fictional character's birthday. Syaoran's birthday was July 13, and I kinda hoped more syaoran scenes in this update, besides it was friday the 13th, just plain unlucky. But never mind that, the chapter was great. I laughed out loud while reading the scene where Yue is *busy* with Touya, and is very loving, and Touya can only think about escaping. I had the feeling when he was saying goodbye though, that he was about to say "I love you"

�Toya?�
�I � wait, I -�
�Toya, I must go.�

hehe. I yelled with Touya when sakura fell, but not because of that, but I kept on reading and saw the yue blur and instead of thinking "poor sakura" I was like "nooo, you are now getting whipped!" I wouldnt like if Yue rapes him in front of Sakura, he must have some sense of decorum. But I guess he could slap him in front of her. Oh, and Touya definitely deserves a whipping, but maybe we could have some angsty fight *before* the whipping, I have a feeling he wont be up for it afterwards XD

And Ralen MUST pay for being soo easily tricked! I mean, he was the one that got his keys stolen.
And lastly, I loved this line

"his life destroyed"

because there's a very similar phrase in spanish used for this kind of situations, "se desgracio la vida" which actually sounds very cool. Keep it up, and I'll see you then in a couple of weeks ^_^

PS-I found this really nifty thing on Inet about free mailing lists, so you can send them out and people sign it out on their own, if you are interested
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From ANON - Haruya on July 15, 2007
Leaving the chapter at this point has intrigued me and many reviewers have come to the same conclusion that I have: Yue will humiliate or rape Touya as Sakura watches. You mentioned Yue's control slowly slipping so will this be the moment he 'snaps' and harms Touya. Even though Yue would kill for Touya it also looks like he thinks it is ok to harm Touya himself to 'teach' him so I'm thinking that will be the punishment.
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From ANON - omg!!!! on July 15, 2007
omg!!!! they escapped!!! im shocked they didnt get very far.

yue must rape touya infront of sakura!!!!! worst punishment ever!!
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From ANON - Chi-chan on July 15, 2007
OMG NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOES!!! YOU CAN'T LEAVE!! Not NOW! If you do, I'll... I'LL... I'll cry!! And writhe in complete and utterly depressing agony waiting for the next chapter. I NEED MY P.S. it's like crack to me!! I'm soooo addicted!! Why you do dis to me, eh?! WHY?! Do you LIKE to hurt me?

I honestly thought I'd had the heart attack in Sakura and Touya's place... she was like "AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!" and he was like "SAKURAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!" and I was like "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!" Omfg, that was just fuckin intense... and when Yue saved her I was like "HOLY SHIT!! YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYS!!"

But YOU!! How could you?! You can't just have YUE save her and leave us hangin when we all know Yue's gonna be two steps away from blasting Touya's ass to death in anger of him trying to escape.... that's so cruel of you... you are so... T__T ToT I'm starvin for it!!
So... post as soon as you can possibly can please? I'M BEGGIN YA!! On my hands and knees!!

Btw, Touya fuckin over Ralen like that was like a whole damn crate of Lucky Charms... just all kinds of magically delicious... XD
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From MistressMizu on July 14, 2007
Ohhh man! Ta Boo mentioned a really funny similarity, and hahaha it's so true! Wow, actually after reading everyone else's idea... I kind of have to disagree with the theories of Yue doing something to Sakura, because you know, Capitalist didn't say anything about her--just Touya. Which means he's going to get the brunt of whatever punishment is in store.

I really don't want to think about that though. Obviously I think the two will go into lockdown after this, no matter what. No leaving the castle. I hope Sakura still gets her afternoon walks...but somehow I doubt it...
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From ANON - Sharae on July 14, 2007
*cringes in sympethy for Toya* Gotta feel sorry for him!!!! if what happened before was nothing then the next lot HAS to be bad...can't wait to read it. Thankyou!
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From ANON - amy on July 14, 2007
that last chapter was great but how could you leave it with that cliff hanger???

i cant wait for the next chapter so please hurry and complete the next chapter!

thanks
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From Scorpinac on July 14, 2007
Actually, the way I figure it, either Ralen or Syaoran noticed they were gone earlier than planned and called Yue on those walkie-talkie things, or the "Spirit of the Canyon", Dark, mentally summoned him when she/it noticed them escaping along the canyon wall. Would I be right, or great and glamorous Capitalist?!
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From Scorpinac on July 14, 2007
Oh, yeah, he's really in for it now. In hindsight, I probably would have done a private dry run of that path on my own just to make [b]absolutely[/b] sure it went where I thought it did, and upon discovery of the rickety old bridge, I'd have postponed my escape long enough to create a new bridge from fresh wood and rope, this time with posts and rope handrails! Ok, so that would probably be tricky to hide, but I'd still try that then try to take two people across a bridge that could be who knows how old!

"Not dark like that."

When that was said I immediately thought of only one thing, and an image of that particular card/spirit jumping out of the canyon and possessing Sakura(as it obviously had no interest in Touya) sprang to mind. Alas, we again think differently on things. Oh, well, either way, we all know what's down there! And I really can't wait for #39! Laters!!
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From ANON - ayachan on July 14, 2007
gah, dammit, everyone is talking about what I was thinking anyway :P Actually, I agree with you Mad Hatter. Except I think Yue's going to punish Sakura somehow instead of Touya (bleh, either Yue's going to do something really bad or else he's giving her over to Ralen- gross!), because to me, that's the ultimate punishment for Touya. Except, yeah, Yue actually has some respect for Sakura now, and if he did do anything bad to her, Touya would NEVER forgive him. Ugh, I'm going to be optimistic and hope that it's just another beating of doom or something like that.
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From ANON - ayachan on July 14, 2007
one week please! lol.. I hope you like your new home!

Anyway.. hmm.. I imagined them escaping farther before they got caught. They were barely outside the castle, in my opinion! I expected them to actually make it back to their village, settle down again (and have Touya secretly missing Yue all the while :P) for about a week or so, before Yue magically pops up.

Oh god.. nooo.. I think flogging Touya to unconsciousness is bad enough.. ohh, i still shudder thinking about it. I can think of some pretty bad stuff, but I'm not going to say anything for fear of giving you evil ideas, lol

So can we get Yue's pov on this escape? Was he just flying back when he saw them escaping, or did he return back to the castle to find them missing and then go searching? I keeping thinking that Yue comes back to find Touya gone and starts panicking, which is nice in the fact that Yue obviously cares for Touya

Anyhoo, good luck on the next chapter and moving in!
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