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  • From ANON - cocoke5 on July 14, 2007
    who they all most make it and and now yuke save saia and tonya is going to be push i can not wait for the next chapter and see. i will be wait for it . good luck on write it. be wait up date soon.
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  • From ANON - Madd Hatter on July 14, 2007
    *double posts*
    I really think something is going to be done in front of Sakura, but in the back of my mind I know Yue has this sort of respect for Sakura. But, in the back of my mind I don't feel like this story can be complete until Sakura sees Yue raping Toya in front of her. He'd be loving it so much at this point but his pride and dignity would be shot down and WOULD be the worst punishment for him. Especially if Sakura had become part of it. There would have to be lots of force for Toya to put up with this, but I think it would bt the worst punishment. We're not talking about physical pain of lashings, we're talking about Toya's most valuable part of his being. His pride.
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  • From ANON - Madd Hatter on July 14, 2007
    You know, I was okay with the cliffhanger. I was all 'nooo' but I'd survive. Then, silly me, read the author note saying:
    "Can’t say if the next update will be one or two weeks, kids, but I can say that I know exactly what’s going to happen and wow, do I feel sorry for Touya. You think he got punished before? You ain’t seen nuthin yet."

    You're a terrible, terrible person, lol
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  • From EVILinnocence on July 14, 2007
    OMG!!!! FInally! I've been waiting for you to write some more! Please don't let Touya get too beaten up! Angst is good but you should let it be more emotional hurt. DON'T LEAVE ANY MORE CLIFFIES! THEY'RE KILLING ME!

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  • From MistressMizu on July 13, 2007
    oh my god. What a close call! Sakura was definitely right to worry about all this; I just knew Yue would save her, but... I don't want to even imagine what he's going to do to Touya next time. I think I might just end up crying. I mean, he was such a bastard that first time, but now... Of course he wouldn't be happy about Touya attempting escape, but I hope that he doesn't get to close to killing him again.

    Seriously. Have to stop thinking about it.

    I wonder if Sakura and Syaoran still have a chance together.

    Great chapter; I'll wait as long as I have to for the next one. I always do, anyway.
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  • From midnightfox on July 13, 2007
    ^~^ F*cking awesome I didnt' see that coming. Jeeze way to give a girl a heart attack >.
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  • From AnimeHuggler on July 13, 2007
    Hmmmm....reminds of the other saying you used a way long ago. Think Yue'll rape Toya in front of her now?
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  • From ANON - lauren_d on July 13, 2007
    Ooooh boy. ANOTHER cliffhanger ending, I don't think I can handle it! And you had to include that last line in the author's note. What a tease. xD I can't wait until the next chapter, and this one was so excellent! I figured Sakura was going to stop Touya from leaving, because she wants to stay in the castle. But when I read the title of the chapter I was like, oh no! But I loved how you kind of.. explained Touya's thought process and how he was going to miss Yue, but he tried to be mad at him and he couldn't. I figure that should be a sign that you should stay, if someone takes you from your home but you still like them, haha. Sakura falling was really good too, I mean, my eyes were all wide and I really liked the line... 'his life destroyed' [and the stuff before that, I just can't remember. xD] And then Yue saves the day. I figured he would make an appearance there, and I'm so glad he did. xD But I am scared for Touya, and I'm wondering would could be worse than almost killing him with a whipping! ahah.
    ...And I remember a few chapters back you kind of talked about who you think would... admit their love for the other. I think it will be Touya, but not really... on purpose. More like an accident. But you know, after getting punished he's probably not going to be too fond of Yue for a while.

    Anyway I'll wrap this up. Keep up the great work though!
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  • From ANON - CBCC on July 13, 2007
    No no no no no no..... don't punish Touya...
    I can't bare seeing Touya get ripped half apart by Yue...
    :~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    Can't Yue just try talking it out with Touya and leave it at that? :~
    I don't want to see Touya getting hurt again...
    but I want to read the next chapter just as badly...
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 13, 2007
    2 week update?
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  • From thecritic8 on July 10, 2007
    Touya has finally found his way out, now will he take it? Due to his stubborn nature I can see him trying to flee, he's so determined to ignore any and all feelings he may have for Yue. I don't believe Sakura would be willing to leave Syaoran and maybe to some extinct even Yue. It will be very interesting to see how that all plays out.

    The dream sequence with Clow was just wonderful, I absolutely loved Clow and how you've portrayed him. I'm kind of curious though, although I could be reading too much into it. Is Touya the reincarnation of the stag? I only ask because of these few lines: "But Yue has been waiting for you all these years, and when he saw you he was determined to have you.", "You were his slave long before Yue ever laid eyes on you, before you were born.", "You needn't be frightened," Clow told him gently. "It's only a reflection, after all.", Tentatively, not at all sure why, he reached to touch. But Clow was right; his hand only met the cool reflective glass of a mirror.

    In my opinion you have truly written a masterpiece here and I can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From Aureawolf on July 10, 2007
    :::clears throat::: AHHHHHH!! ^_^ Okay, done freaking out now. Wow. What a great chapter! The whole stag thing was just perfect, especially the way it was in the dream sequence. Really really perfect. Hmm...after seeing everyone else's stuff I really want to do some fanart now...muahaha.
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  • From ANON - fairyfae on July 10, 2007
    I usually don't like stories with rape and degredation but I find myself liking your story in spite of that. Its well written and well thought out. It is an interesting case of stockholm syndrome. Of course, now Touya is going to run into problems with Sakura. He will want to take her with him in an attempt to escape. If he tells her, however she will not want to go because of her still secret promise with Li. What pain will Touya feel if she 'betrays' him in this manner. Afterall, he has allowed himself to endure whippings, rape, degradation and humiliation all for her. If she refuses to leave with him or even tells on him... He has to expect that at some point she will display loyalty to him for all his sacrifices. Will he get angry? I can see Sakura claiming as justification Touya's love for Yue. However, if Touya was really angry, he could just throw that back in her face saying that she labels it as love because it makes her feel better about all that has happened. It relieves her guilt. Geez, your story really makes me speculate about the feelings and actions of the characters. You are really doing a great job of revealing things gradually and naturally, something that is frequently lacking in fanfiction. Please, continue to update. (PS. Your allowed more creativity once you make to the higher levels of education. However, I hope your choice leads you to good things in life.)
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  • From ANON - Mel on July 08, 2007
    Oh My God!!!!

    What else is there to say? wow... ... ...
    All that time? It was right there. Wow...
    I can't wait.

    Until next time,
    Your loyal reader
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  • From ANON - Fade on July 08, 2007
    I hope to God that there is more to this story. It would be quite destructive to end it there.
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