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  • From ANON - Sharae on July 01, 2007
    am LOVING the story and am happy to go for the ride instead of trying to predict the future of it. i'll wait with baited breath for the net installment.
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  • From ANON - Raven on June 30, 2007
    You've got to update this story!!!!! You are one of the only writers I know of that's done the characterization of Yue/Touya so well that the little quirks that you've created for them, especially for Yue, that it's very true to both of them. You're writing is amazing.Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Neon Tokyo on June 30, 2007
    Sudden angst!!!!!! ^.^ Awesome chapter
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  • From ANON - Ao on June 30, 2007
    HOLY..CRAP..
    Touya is leaving!? LEAVING!? OMG! D<
    I'm just..shocked? I started to get uneasy when Touya was going back to Clow's room..I didn't expect this! I sorta expected Touya to give Syaoran's knife back then go to bed but your version of events are better!! To give Touya the chance to run away. I hope he isn't thwarted. I want him to make it all the way back to his town and make Yue come and get him!
    I guess Touya could use this to his advantage, nothin is in the way anymore, and we got a distraught Yue.. :P at least I'd think Yue would be affected by Touya's sudden disappearance. he still held affection for him so I hope he gets sad and not angry. Though angry Yue can be good, actually seeing a death, Ralen's hopefully, probably would be good..)
    This was worth the wait! Update soon. I guess I gotta respect the fact you have life! ;)
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  • From ANON - chibirisuchan on June 30, 2007
    I've been reading through this in absolute fascination, and I've really been enjoying your writing up to this chapter -- you've done what almost no fanfic writer ever does; you've created a realistic complication between the 'destined lovers' and 'the situation they are in' [master/slave situation] that HASN'T made 'the situation' a flat two-dimensional stereotype that we always see in fanfics.
    I obviously feel bad for the conflicted hero, Touya. He was a decent human being thrust into this terrible world and he is trying to make the most of his dire situation. It is also good to see that this isn't a chiched love story -- and Yue isn't 'the perfect lover'. I've been really looking forward to seeing how you *will* manage to resolve the genuine conflict between the two characters of Yue and Touya. Touya is such a reasonable and compassionate person [before he was captured] that there really wasn't a clear-cut 'right' and 'wrong' choice for him in the story itself, despite what Kaho said in those first few chapters.
    I've never seen a fanfic author handle this kind of story as well as you have, with as much complexity in the relationship and as much honesty in the interactions.

    And it has all built-up to this moment, has it not? The moment where Touya has the chance to finally escape from this dreadful castle -- He can have his freedom back. Surely he won't throw it all away because Sakura might not want to leave too? It's horribly, horribly thrilling, and I really expect him to at least attempt to run free, despite his growing affecion for Yue.

    I feel satisfied as a reader who has been so much looking forward to seeing Touya escape the castle, and maybe put Yue's ego in it's place. Having that promise of escape in the horizon has always been a thrill, but now that it's here I can barely wait for the next chapter to come!
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  • From ANON - lauren on June 30, 2007
    WHAAAAAT.

    Wow I hope you get the next chapter up soon! That was amazing.
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  • From AnimeHuggler on June 30, 2007
    Oh but it is too late!!! Sakura won't want to leave!...and if she dosn't leave, enither can Touya cause then Yue will have Sakura, the thing that got him into this in the first place. Oh poor boy, he just can't win can he.
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  • From ANON - ayachan on June 29, 2007
    wow, this is going to sound very oxymoronic since everyone hates cliffhangers, but dammmn, that was a good cliffhanger! Wow, a way to escape! Hmm.. I don't think he's going to.. but it would be interesting to see Yue's reaction if he actually really does.

    "Upset to discover, after fearing he was a replacement for Clow, that he was only a replacement for a giant deer."- I'm sorry, I understand why Touya is so upset, but this line by itself seem just so absurd that it's hilarious! I think it's the giant deer that did it.

    Anyway, great chapter and I can't wait til the next one! good luck!
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  • From ANON - silverwolfe on June 29, 2007
    OH MY FUCKING GOD!! Clow DID something! It's a freaking miracle XD. Now Touya can go home....but for how long until Yue finds him, or he wants to go back? And what will he do with Sakura?? WE HAVE TO KNOW!! WRITE MORE!! XD
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  • From kagome1303 on June 29, 2007
    Wow. Somehow, I feel even he he tries to escape, he's going to be caught by someone like Yue, Ralen, or some other person... Also, he's going to want Sakura to escape with him, but she might not be as set on leaving because of Syaoran, and there's no way she'll just go to her brother and say that she doesn't feel like leaving because she loves syaoran and that he proposed to her and that he's saving money to buy her from yue. Something really bad is going to happen in the future if he tries getting out of the castle...
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  • From midnightfox on June 29, 2007
    *freaks out* O.o Now he's got a way to escape the castle with his sister?! Oh this is killing me ^~^ lol Clow sure does have an odd sense of humor @_@ and is a bit creepy *shivers* Awesome yet evil way to end the chapter. I can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Madd Hatter on June 29, 2007
    This phrase here, had me laughing:
    Upset to discover, after fearing he was a replacement for Clow, that he was only a replacement for a giant deer.
    It was great.

    This chapter opened up a lot of trails for it to lead to. Most likely Touya will go to his sister about this, at least I think so. I don't think he'll waste a lot of time thinking about this, and after going to Sakura, she'll feel compelled to stay due to the fact. a) she's in love and b) he's in love
    But, I have a feeling she won't be so matter'o'factly about it. I have a feeling her mind will race about her own lover, and I think Touya will notice some thing's wrong, and will get offended she wants to stay here instead of going home, but I think if he broods over it he'll realize he doesn't want to go home either.
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  • From ANON - Mooglepies on June 29, 2007
    Intruiging.

    I do love it when plots progress.

    I'm also happy to see that although you're churning out quite large chapters each week, they never seem rushed; But then maybe I should have expected that.

    I find Touya's reaction to Clow... interesting. It's not what I expected, (but then I didn't expect Clow to show up) which made it all the more pleasurable to read.

    No Syaroan/Sakura here also, which makes me a slightly happier panda.

    Please, continue at your own pace. I'd hate for you to rush.
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  • From sodapop0006 on June 29, 2007
    Wow... just wow. Opportunity is the most amazing thing. I sincerely hope that Touya's going to try to escape with Sakura, even if she won't like it. Great turn!
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  • From DesertRoseTemari on June 29, 2007
    Ohmigod. I decided to re-read the story yesterday, and I got about half-way, noted the chapter, and started again today. I clicked the little arrow thingeh on the chapters, saw that there was one more than I remembered, and commenced to freak out in excitement.

    I read it, whined about how Clow was such a bitch and about the stag, and then squealed out loud when Touya found his escape! The first thing I thought about was Sakura and Li, though. If her brother grabbed her and tried to sneak her out, she wouldn't want to leave Li without him knowing where she was going, but if her brother tipped her off, Sakura would tell Li, and as much as he loves her, her escape contradicts with his job and, well, his decision to pay her off and marry her. D; I think now he wouldn't stop her because he loves her, but he'd do *something* so that he can stay with her. Aaah! You have to write and post the next chapter soon, I'm actually shivering in anticipation. Grr! This is why I should read finished stories only, I'm so demanding.

    -Sets up a tent and camps out waiting for next chapter.- *_*
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