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  • From ANON - Chi-chan on June 23, 2007
    YATTA!! Kero cameo ftw!!I was sso excited to see him! I loved his interactions with everyonw so much!! And I really wanted to see him scare the Clow Staff right outta Ralen's bitch ass!! Damn... will you consider doing that eventually? It's your story so I have no right to ask really, but I'd love to see Ralen get put in his place again... it doesn't happen nearly enough for his punk ass, XD

    I loved this chapter!! "I'M CHOPPING WOOD!!...BITCHES!!" Lmao...

    Can't wait for the next chapter...and I really can't wait to find out what those things are that the sexy, celestial brothers (cuz yes, even Keroberos deserves to be called sexy!)are hunting down! Because, if anything... Yue seems way more worried they'll get to Touya than him...
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  • From ANON - Cherry833 on June 22, 2007
    please do not award anything to this review..

    I love your entire story, but i do believe that you should also have kero in his teddy bearish form. Either way, maybe you could let there be a day for which sakura and touya are allowed to go back to their home town. It seems sad that they cant go back even though it may get the plot a bit twisted. Nomatter what i love your story and keep up the good work. Even thuogh you only got ten reviews for the chapter before, trust me your not losing your touch. ^.^
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  • From vix111 on June 22, 2007
    KERO!!!!
    ermm, well, now that thas out of my system...I love how frustrated Touya ended up chopping wood, and his ramblings. Hopefully, Keroberos' part won't stay small for long XD
    Like some said before, Sakura will help Touya realize his feelings; but it would be soo cool if Kero did the same for Yue. "You looove him!! admit it so I can be right!" "Dammit Keroberos, leave me alone!!" "Not until you admit it! Ja!"
    I don't want to say that the things they are capturing are the clow cards, nor that sakura will become the cardcaptor, but it sure feels like they are, I feel like those things will eventually storm the castle, making good on Yue's advice of taking care of it.
    Keep going, the plot is getting really good!! ^_^
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  • From MistressMizu on June 22, 2007
    Hmmmm. Does this mean that the Clow Cards are attacking? Perhaps that's what they're supposed to be watching for, to turn them back and keep them from harming others. It was nice to meet Kero though. You're right about the comic relief. For Sakura's sake I wish he'd come back. XD It's obvious they get along really well.

    Only 10 reviews? I hope it's just that people haven't checked/noticed updates.

    Can't wait for more! It's so good. :3 Hmmm.... I think with the help of Sakura, Touya will probably crack first. He may be more stubborn, but he's realized more of his feelings than Yue has. Or at least Yue seems way more reluctant to admit than Touya. But...then again, if Sakura talked to Yue about it again, he might just confess first.... Except he can't seem to get over Clow. >_____> Update update update!
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  • From ANON - sisd on June 22, 2007
    I must say, this is one of my favorite chapters. I love how you have Kero in it now. And the description of the ring sounded perfect for her. :) Very nice. Question. Are you going to have the other characters in here as well?
    I adore how there's a whole other part to Yue and what he does when he leaves. In all honesty, as much as I love S/S, I think I'm beginning to read this fanfic more for T/Y and the back story you have planned for Yue. You have my full attention. Though...I must also admit, the way Sakura is portrayed, as this really, really innocent girl can be a little bit too much for me. But I love it nonetheless. :)

    Reading this chapter today just made my day. Thank you for writing. :)
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  • From ANON - i love converse on June 22, 2007
    Nice Kero! Good idea bringing him in, you think he'll turn up again?

    Can't wait for the next chap!
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  • From ANON - Silverwolfe on June 22, 2007
    OMG!! I love kero! He's so funny!!! He made me chuckle...him and Yue fighting....oh Jeez..I would love to see him with that emo Ralen!

    "Hello, there Ralen-baby! You gonna scream again?"

    Ralen*Lets out a girly shriek and runs to his bedroom, hiding under the covers*

    Thanks for adding Kero when things were getting down!
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  • From Jennieve01 on June 22, 2007
    .... that last sentence gave me a shiver .. is Yue going to die?
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  • From ANON - skrcha on June 22, 2007
    I've been reading this story from the very beginning, ever since it was only 2 or 3 chapters long. I wish I reviewed before now, but I'm a little shy :D

    But once this chapter rolled along I had to say something!! Ohmigosh, KEEEEEROOOOOO!! I hope Kero goes Chibi and sticks with Sakura at night to protect her from Ralen! :D At first I thought he was just a jerk, but now I think Ralen is a first-class bastard. At least Touya freaked him out today, huh?

    I love this story, thank you for writing it.
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  • From Scorpinac on June 22, 2007
    So much for my vision of "plushie Kero" popping up in Sakura's cage one morning. This works just as well, though, loved Syaoran's reaction after Sakura came bolting out of the kitchen in terror. If I had any regrets, it's that we didn't get to see Ralen run into him, that could have been gold! ("Slave, where are you this...Ahh! Not you again!" "Hello, putz.") So, the two have been "searching" for something? Wouldn't happen to have the last name "cards" would they? Also liked Touya's "introduction" to Kero, very nice. I rather hope he does come back now and then, if only for a quick snack and to see Sakura. Well, I'm out of things to say for the moment. Laters.
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  • From ANON - Amy on June 22, 2007
    OMG i am so happy that kero was in this chapter. i think you should have him around alittle more for sakura.
    i was sad when i found out that i couldnt review before but now its all ok :D

    well keep going with your very good work and i cant wait for the next chapter.

    byebye :D
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  • From AnimeHuggler on June 22, 2007
    Aha, and now it allllll falls into place. The cards are out and about, somewhere along the plot Touya will get hurt by one of them, thus making Sakura somehow the captour cause she's speacil, something magical will happen sooner or later that in the end all the characters re-start into their 'proper' CCS roles. Wow...mind trippy when you re-read the story from the begging.
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  • From ANON - ayachan on June 22, 2007
    oh yes! I can review again!! That's good. When aff made people get an account, I stopped reviewing- nothing to do with you- I just think it's useless to get an account if you aren't a writer. Love the story as always, and Kero was just so amusing! I'm glad that he popped in- hopefully he'll pop in again (even though you said that he's playing a small part, I just love him too much for him to only show up once!). Good luck with the story and please keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - KarenElhyam on June 22, 2007
    I had basically resigned myself to the idea that you weren't gonna bring my favorite big mouthed Osakan cutie into the story, but when he was introduced, I just couldn't stop grinning. Good idea, too, bringing him into a chapter that was really just serving as a transition and lead into whatever bad stuff is going down soon.

    Love, love, LOVE the story so far. You keep surprising me, and always for the better. I can't wait for you to finish, even if I will miss awaiting each chapter eagerly. ^^
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  • From kagome1303 on June 21, 2007
    Well, the story is certainly getting interesting. I wonder what task Clow told Yue and Kero to do, and what about when Kero was saying something is it being a close call or whtever he was saying. It's ture what you said, small role, big mouth. It's nice to finally have him in the story.
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