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From midnightfox on June 01, 2007
*spazzes out and foam comes out of mouth* X_X Yukito's here too? Meilin beat up Li? Li asked Sakura to marry him? Touya now knows a part of Yue's past? WTF?! O0O omg!
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From ANON - Chi-chan on June 01, 2007
HOEEEEEEEEEEEE!!! Syaoran PROPOSED?!?! And Sakura ACCEPTED!! OMFG!! I was in as much shock as her when it happened!! But yay!! That was excellent!!
Yay for the Yuki cameo!! XD
And then poor Yue finally let it all out to Touya... and I'm glad Touya listened cuz it really was a burden... and Yue's pain was just too much... I'm so happy Touya comforted him when he broke down cuz the worst thing he could've done was give Yue the cold shoulder AGAIN!! So maybe they're finally on the way to patching things up! Yatta!!

And Meilin... she totally pwned Syaoran's ASS in that fight!! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA *cough cough* Damn evil laugh... oh well, she totally just went up another notch in my book!! I defended Syaoran for how he was feeling, but I still think that he got what he deserved when his cousin bust his ass up, down and all around!! BRAVO!!

And I hope Ralen catches something... he's just ASKING to get VD... the pervie BASTARD!! I'd like to drop kick him... even though I can't drop kick to save my life and he's not real.... *le sigh and le shrug* Oh well... he'll get it eventually... and hopefully it'll hurt like a bitch!! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! *COUGH COUGH* Damn it all!!!

Can't wait for the next chapter!!
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From ANON - i love converse on June 01, 2007
i love fluff, fluff is good.

good chapter, cant wait for the next
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From ANON - Outlaw Angel on June 01, 2007
oooooo my gooodness...i love it....oooh...aaaah...i can't stop reading this story
please...you need to put more stories...cuz i wanna know what will happen in the morining...
will toya make love with yue???....the suspense is killing me!!!
update as soon as possble...

ya ne!!!
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From ANON - JenJen on June 01, 2007
>.> I pressed review too soon.
I also think .. maybe Yue might like Touya for himself a bit. But I wonder how much of that like is mixed up on his confused and mixed feelings responding on the parts of Touya that remind him of Clow. Or even the routines that they go through that so mimic Clow's routine with Yue. Hell I even wonder if perhaps its not just Touya but any fierce and strong person who had come to the castle and would have made a suitable replacement master would have been a shoe-in. If Yue was created to be a slave then in time he would need and search for a master to take over the role he was thrust into and return him to a role he was born for and happy to fulfill.
In which case Touya is really getting the short end of the stick. Kinda sucks to be him.
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From ANON - JenJen on June 01, 2007
Am I the only one who thinks Sakura's acceptance of the marriage proposal might have been overheard? Or Yue's sleeping with her might have been misconstrued? Maybe I just see angst everywhere .> ...

I also find myself disappointed with Touya's acceptance of Yue's reasoning. He knows Yue may care for him and even love him but ... doesn't he miss his home? Regret staying tied to a person whose heart is already elsewhere? Maybe want to hit it up with Yukito in the kitchens? That is if Yuki isn't a disguise Yue was wearing ... imagine the bloodshed then..

*Yue walks in*
"Ah!! Ah To-ya! Harder!"
*muffled thumps and squishes and other various sex sounds*
*Yue sees red*
*much blood follows*

>.> yes I have far to much time on my hands contemplating and worshiping your story.
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From lilian on June 01, 2007
I practically swooned at the proposal, for real, it was so romantic. I loved that, it was so sweet. And I was really engrossed in the castle's backstory and the relationship between Yue and Clow! And yeah, Yue is showing a more vulnerable side now...I LOVED the Yukito scene hahaha, it was hilarious at the end. Anyway, I wonder if Touya might ever be seme now that their relationship has changed so much, and how he's going to react if/when he finds out that Syaoran is planning to marry his sister and buy her freedom too. (And also that his sister wants him to!)

Thanks for the chapter! It came out pretty quickly, I was really happy!

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From Scorpinac on June 01, 2007
Well, one reconciliation down, one half-way there(I don't think Yue and Touya are all the way there just yet.). And something tells me it'll be easier for Syaoran than he thinks it will. The only real problem is that bastard Ralen. Though I must say Sakura's commentary comparing him to the guy who kidnapped and sold her was interesting. Can't wait for #34! Laters!
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From ANON - jhenny87 on June 01, 2007
Good afternoon... Oh well... its 5:24 PM right now...

I think I�ve been successfully reading your fanfic for a year and half or two. Just want to apologize for not commenting and reviewing your fic. I�m actually not that type (of not giving reviews�)� hehehe... *pout*�Call me a parasite... *wink*

I find your story rather profound and delicate. I can see consistency in the story line although there is no parallelism in your grammar. I always find consistency in the way you relate the conversation of Yue and Sakura. The part of no parallelism is not that of a large portion yet sometimes I am confused with the �he� in some paragraphs.

The detailing of characters is good and knowing the anime itself is quite helpful since the readers won�t be having enough trouble of imagining it. On the contrary, knowing this full well, you still describe some of the obvious but giving it a variation according to your sense of taste and plot.

The introduction is very well written that you let me think and ask of what the story really is. A factor is that I am already hooked and didn�t care if I am more than fifteen chapters behind. I caught up (I really can�t remember where�) for only a night I think. Just got so curious what will happen next, I think.

I hope you still continue writing and enjoying very well your story.

I really have one question. Do you plan to bring Clow back? *smirk*

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From acaciac123 on June 01, 2007
Why yes that shoddy little piece of MS Paint art was drawn by me. :D

It was actually a last minute cheap cop out of one I'd done earlier to illustrate my point in a debate that Yue's fixation on Clow is a natural and beautiful thing :

http://i167.photobucket.com/albums/u135/radish_baby/clow.jpg

>.>

Oh this chapter!

Ahhhhhhh! Every time you give us a peek of the Clow/Yue (Yue/Clow? :x) I feel like a druggie that's just gotten a fix of the good stuff. Oh and you write for them so beautifully - maybe not a lot but still enough to make me shudder in anticipation. This was just - guh! And when Yue thinks he can still feel Clow's hands on him.

Oh Super Fic how do I adore thee? Let me count the ways.
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From RAW19 on June 01, 2007
sad, happy, beautiful, mad, passion, hatred, secrets, glad.

now it sounds like i'm chanting. but, these are all the emotions i felt from this chapter. a worthy update, that is truly awe-inspiring!
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From cocoke5 on June 01, 2007
that chapter was good and i was glad that tonya made yui talk about crow and i glad that syan talk to tonya sister and ask her to marry her. up date soon .
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From ANON - Alleran on May 31, 2007
Interesting chapter. I'm glad to see everyone is starting to get back together.

But honestly I didn't expect the confrontation between Meilin and Syaoran to go the way it did. Maybe I'm placing too much stock in Meilin's personality from the actual CSS series but I really didn't expect her to be 100% on Sakura's side in this. Once you brought her into chapter 33 I was expecting her to try and get them back together..just not that way.

Can I ask a question? If not just ignore this. ^_^ In the previous chapter you asked us if we hated Syaoran for what happened. I'd like to ask you the same thing. Do you hate him for what happened? Do you blame him entirely for the fight between him and Sakura? Reason I ask is because in your AN you were glad that several people said they didn't hate Li for what happened, but you still ended up sticking him with all the blame in the latest chapter.

Why is Meilin so strongly on Sakura's side? Yes she is friend's with Sakura, but Syaoran is family. She may be grateful for the changes Sakura has been able to make in Syaran but still her reaction to Syaoran during their confrontation just seems to be a little OOC.

Syaoran may have been wrong in his actions to Sakura but that doesn't change the fact that Sakura's actions were wrong as well. Just because she's naive and doesn't realize what she's doing is wrong doesn't change the fact that her actions are wrong.

Was Meilin's reaction so strong because she met Sakura first and only got her side of the story and saw how unhappy she was? That could explain some of the way she acted when she went to pound on Li. But I still can't see why Meilin doesn't seem to see anyone of it from Syaoran's side of it. I can see her trying to beet some sense into Syaoran. Not becuase he is entirely to blame for the situation, but because she has seen the changes Sakura has made in Li and she doesn't want to him lose her over something that in the long run is something pretty minor.

I just am having a hard time with the way Meilin acts I guess. Thinking back, some of this maybe because we don't see her reaction to what Sakura tells her before she leaves to confront Syaoran. Maybe if the scene between Meilin and Sakura was a little longer? I mean, no one has explained to Sakura why Syaoran acted and said what he did. Meilin may not agree with how syaoran acted or handled the situation but she should at least be able to know and explain to Sakura why he acted the way he did. I just got the feeling with this chapter that Sakura can do no wrong and Syaoran is the Big Bad Wolf for daring to hurt and make Sakura cry regardless that he is hurting just as bad from her actions.

Meilin uses the argument that Sakura is a pleasure slave so she can't be blamed for what she has to do and who she has to be with. There is one thing wrong with this though, Yue is her master not Ralen. If it was done on Yue's orders, it would be one thing, but doing what Ralen wants so she can see her friend is her choice, it's not an order. Sakura may not have realized that Syaoran might have objections to the way she got her meetings with Toyomo, so while it may not be her fault, she isn't enitrely blameless, again I say Toyomo is more to blame than anyone else in this and I still think she feels more than just friendship for Sakura, since she is not naive like Sakura, she has to have some idea of what Syaoran's feelings would be, I mean she could just as easily come during Sakura's walks outside as in the mornings. ^_^

What will be interesting to see is the next meeting between Toyomo and Sakura, now that Sakura knows how Syaoran feels about the situation. Will she continue to do the same things to see her, or will she tell her not to come again or maybe break down and tell her about the problem? I also can't wait to see toyomo's reaction to this. Does Sakura really love Syaoran? Enough to give up Toyomo? Does Syaoran love Sakura enough that if no other way can be found would he agree to let Toyomo and Sakura meet the same way they do now?

All in all I liked the chapter and I am glad everyone seems to have gotten back together.

It will be interesting to see what the future holds. ^_^
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From ANON - Changa on May 31, 2007
After having quite the shitty week....coming home and finding you posted a new chapter was such a pleasant surprise! It makes the shitty week seem just a little better ^_^
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From ANON - princess cora on May 31, 2007
this story is ssssooo good! can we have a new chapter on the wekend if you have time?
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