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From ANON - Rhian on May 28, 2007
Nice. I love all the drama, it makes things so much more interesting. Hopefully Li will be able to listen to Sakura's words in the future and will stop his fight with her, but I guess I understand how he feels, if I were a guy and I caught my lover with another like that, I would be pretty pissed and probably wouldn't even listen to what their side of the story is. But I actually like the Yue and Touya drama, because it's showing just how dependent Yue is on Touya, it seems like that to me, especially with an ending like that to this chapter. I'll be sure to read the next one when it's out. Good job with the story.
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From ANON - dougy on May 28, 2007
weekly updates wuld b cool !!!! this story is good. feel sad 4 touya tho. but its good hes getting back at yue !!!!
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From ANON - dormantevil on May 27, 2007
Well... It was one strong action>_< Syaoran got mad, Toya got mad, Yue and Sakura got dumped-___- But strangeli I think that Toya's an ass here. Sure, whipping was a little too much, but he WAS told to stay away from that room, wasn't he? And he went there like a stupid kid and then even asked the most stupid questions. If he was smart, he would know how Yue reacts to rudeness... I understand that his situation is difficuld, but it looks like he's trying to piss Yue off on purpose sometimes.

I'm all for whipping himXD *cruel, cruel woman i amXD*

Syaoran is just his usual hothead self. He will get some time to think and I guess he'll see that he was to fast to judge. Sakura is just her timid and not so fast self and I hope that someday she'll get enough courage to kich some sense into her boyfriend^^

I'm sitting tight and waiting for the next chapter with hope that Toya will finally get some sense beaten into his head and Yue will stop going all emo on himXD
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From ANON - DingDongTheWitchIsDead on May 27, 2007
I can't imagine the pain Yue is going through. You are right in your Authors Note: Everyone has been in A similar situation at some point in time where they wish they could turn back time and erase a bad mistake. I can only feel sorrry for Yue because I understand where he was coming from and that it is only his nature to act like that and do cruel things. Yue can't help it and Touya should be happy that Yue is showing any remorse and sorrow at his actions because I don't think Yue would have had those feelings for any of his other slaves. After a nightmare like that is Yue going to wake up distressed or even crying? Would that alarm Touya into fogiving Yue? I wonder what Touya is thinking through all this? Maybe the next chapter should focus on Touya's thoughts since this chapter focused on Li's and Yue's thoughts. You have stumped me with these new chapters. I couldn't possibly predict what will happen next because I can't even begin to imagine what the characters are planning to do next. I check this story every day for a new chapter and I hope you can get away from the kiddies long enough to write the next chapter hopefully sometime this week. That would be nice.
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From acaciac123 on May 27, 2007
Meh! Upon further thought I've come to the conclusion hat they are BOTH justified. Ok maybe not in death by whipping but I just went back and reread all those chapters and you have to admit Touya is equally guilty in the stupid department on this one. Impudent or not if I slept in the same bed as a god only knows how old, winged whitey man who had awesome god powers and they tld me not to pick at certain things I would listen.

It just goes to show the depths of his interest in Yue that he wouldn't leave this particular topic. Total Yue stalking. http://i167.photobucket.com/albums/u135/radish_baby/yuestalking.jpg But then again I don't blame anyone for wanting to know more about a mystery man.

Still this will be interesting to see how it plays out.
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From acaciac123 on May 27, 2007
I've been rereading this for awhile now mulling things over and if I mull any longer I'm never going to review. Lazy pants is laaaaaazzzzyyyyy.

I can't decide what must be bothering Touya more - the fact that he thinks Yue loves Clow more (up to debate) or the fact that he found out/thinks he found out that Yue was also a slave. I know I'd be pissed at that too - that's a hell of a leap to make from sharing some cuddly cute love love thing as your master's slave to becoming a cold hearted bastard living on the top of the mountain going through your own pleasure slaves like tissues.

The Sakura Li thing . . . well . . . meh, it'll work out. Eventually. Li's not a jack ass at heart, Sakura isn't a flimsy bimbo - sooner or later they'll see this. *throws flowers* Open your heart!

Oh ho ho ho ho - your dream sequences are fantastic. Just the amount of imagery in this one - just guh ajsdhasjhd! Please update soon!
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From ANON - Tina RINA on May 26, 2007
I am glad I made you laugh. i didnt expect to get praise for my review. Thankyou. :) :) :) This chapter was intense. i could almost feel the tension in the castle. Nothing is going right for anyone in the castle which is sad for them. but gives us great reading! I couldnt help but notice you mentioned Yue being alone a few times. Has something happened to him in the past that has given him a fear of being alone? i got the vibe that you were emphasising that. the last line in the chapter said 'poor sad lonely Yue' like it was the last thing that is meant to get stuck in our heads when we read it.
i had a dream about this story the other night. it was weird. Touya was on the balcony and still hasnt spoke to Yue. somehow he knew about Sakura and Li being together. and he finally spoke to Yue and said simply 'I want to leave'. Then he and Sakura left the castle while Yue got into a deeper spiral of regret and depression. it was such a vivid dream. I can still see the image of Touya and Sakura walking towards the city holding hands as they leave the castle while Yue watches them from the balcony but he cant stop them. I had to check the story to confirm if it really didnt happen.lol. scary!

i am looking forward to chapter 33. Please write soon. a one week update would be cool :) :) :)

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From midnightfox on May 25, 2007
I have to admit I can't hate Li even when he called her a, "whore". @_@ So is Touya 'broken' now? T.T Yue is feeling pretty sh!tty right about now. I was shocked when Li found out Sakura was doing those kinds of things while Ralen was watching. T^T Please update soon *grabs a tissue*
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From ANON - kimbra_fire on May 25, 2007
I can see Li's reasoning alot better than Sakura. She's naive but her saying that she had to was just plain stupid on her part. I mean she's what 12 in this story maybe 14? (Sorry I forgot if you mentioned her age when her birthday passed.) She wanted to forget I can give you that, but to go into Tomoyo's arms, not caring that Ralen was there, and practically beg for it just to forget and say that she didn't want it when she obviously did. That is sad, even for her. She must've had a REALLY sheltered life if she doesn't even know what the word whore means but her brother does. Hell, he's been protecting her this whole time and she calls him ignorant? Sorry, but sometimes I just wanna smack her one and tell her exactly what's been going on with her brother and what he's done for her to live as happily as she could. Jeez, if she told Touya in the beginning about Ralen I'm sure he would've told Yue to do something about it, but noooo she's too stubborn and yet she expects him to tell her what happened? No, sorry Sakura but not everything will fall at your feet. If you had even told Li he would've done something too but instead you buried your own grave not lie in it. And Yue seriously needs to realize this too, not everything will go the way he wants it; therefore, he needs to tell Touya that he's sorry and he needs to do some serious making up to do.... He can start by killing Ralen, hehehe. Out of all of your character developments, I like Touya and Li the best b/c they both try to do what they can in what they believe for themselves and both caring for Sakura even if she is waaayyy too innocent for her own good that she needs a reality check. Too bad that they don't get along though... YuexTouya rocks!!! =^-^=
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From zyid on May 25, 2007
To the contrary I think that Li was completely justified. After risking everything, after being so loyal and doing so much for Sakura all he ever expected in return was that his loyalty would be returned. He was unfortunately dissapointed - honor is so obviously important to him that this sort of a betrayal is unforgivable. Sure, she didn't really understand what she was doing, but that doesn't change the fact that she effectively stabbed him in the back.
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From Tutso on May 24, 2007
Thank the stars, i'm finally able to review this story. Once they took away the review function, i was lost without being able to tell you all the wonderful things in your story that have me drooling over the next update. Cause yeah, i'm that big of a nerd. You have no idea how much i've enjoyed reading this, as, hell, one of my favorite couples EVER and no one has bothered to write anything about them. Maybe I will one day, but, lazy. Anyway, enough about my internal writers dilema, we're here to talk about you, and this amazing story. Since it would stretch on forever if i started reviewing my favorite parts thus far, so lets just concentrate on the last chapter. And let me say, angst is my mistress, and you wield her well. Though i'm yearning for those two to just fully shack up and enjoy each others lovings, we know that wouldn't make for a fun read. And hey, Touya is just too perfect at coming up with ways to wound Yue, injuring him consiously and unconsiously. I only hope his wounds don't scar too badly. If I were Yue though, i tihnk my temper would flare up a lot quicker than that never ending patience. Besides, Touya has reacted much more animatedly towards threats and problems from Yue then these soft words and touches. Maybe they just have to have a good old fashion scream fest. Hopefully more productive than Lee (cannot spell proper name for the life of me) and Sakura. It's just not fair for him and Yue to gang up on their lovers and storm off while the other is chained/caged. That just isn't going to make a good relationship. Besides, Lee's naivety is kinda pathetic- what did he tihnk he was getting when he fell in love with a pleasure slave?

Okay, i'm going to wrap this up before i ramble forever, but still, just to make sure you understand my love for your story and giving myself a big ol fangirl stamp, OMG I lik, ttly Luv U!!!11!
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From ANON - Chi-chan on May 24, 2007
Wow... Yue must feel like he's being repeatedly slapped in the face while his heart is being constantly stepped on... it's like Tartarus or something. Forced to endure the same agony forever in hell... man, Touya's cutting him off completely! Downright refusing to acknowledge him, that's some serious shit! Poor boy was seriously falling hard for Yue and not only did seeing Clow's stuff make him feel like second place in Yue's heart... but he got the ULTIMATE whuppin from HELL because of it... so yea, he deserves the right to be pissed to high heaven!

And to tell the truth, I pity poor Sakura... but I don't hate Syaoran... that "Whore" comment was VERY harsh and I didn't appreciate him calling her that... but it was necessary to convey in that scene and I respect your writing. But he's hurt too! Not to mention he's also angry at himself for getting aroused at the situation, that coupled with the jealousy didn't make for a good mix when talking to Sakura. He's really in love with her... she's his first love and you can tell he would've jumped at the chance to marry her. So to find out she's been doing all that with Tomoyo (even though she was forced, the one time he saw her... she didn't seem like it was BEING forced upon her) in front of his most hated enemy (that perverted evil BASTARD!!)... I can see how he felt betrayed...

GODDAMN DO I LOVE ALL THIS DRAMA!! YOU ROCK MY FACE OFF!! XD
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From MistressMizu on May 23, 2007
Whaaa! You had it planned for us to hate Li like this, didn't you. T___T I remember that little hint... I didn't want to believe it. But yeah. I think I do now, and I really don't want to but...that was so cruel.

Great update, no matter how sad.
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From RAW19 on May 23, 2007
Li? he has some issues to work out. everyone does, actually. excellent update.
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From ANON - bolognastealer101 on May 22, 2007
YAY!!
No I don't hate Li, he just made the story more coplicated, and emo. (YAY)
Now perhaps Touya will see Sakura's swollen face, and ask her about it, and Sakura will spill the beans, Touya will get Tr�s Angry, ask Yue about it, Yue will be like ?????? Then all grr. Li will come back to Sakura but Touya will be there and then there will be a fight, and then Yue will come in and put Li in prison, but Sakura still loves him. Yue lets her go from slavery, and Touya falls into love with Yue again.

The rest of the story in a nutshell. (Maybe)
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