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From ANON - Tadao Yokoshima on May 22, 2007
one more review to sum it to all the rest you have so far... no need for me to tell you that your story rocks, not that i like yaoi but either way the plot always makes me read it, it is brilliant, i though i leaved a comment a while ago... but i guess it got deleted or something... wow... it is great to see so many so many reviews as well as so many people wanting to read what will happend in this story, it seems you could writte a novel or a book out of this fic, but that will be your call, i must say it is very sad that you got pissed about those flames some people posted to you a few chapters back, and that you got pissed, but that�s history, you do writte like a pro, maybe you are, i cannot say what things i like especially of this tale because i like all of them, and i cannot speculate about what�s going to happend later because you are writting the plot, im just a regular reader that doesn�t stand from the rest of reviews or flames, just a reader, that�s all, but a reader that is letting you know that you entretain me and other people with your fic, i am a writter of fics myself, but not as good as you are, i wish my fics got so many reviews like yours, but then i remember in the end we do this just to entretain and have fun...

eh... i just recently readed your chapter 30, althou i know you already expresed your anger to those that flamed you and i know you got over that, and you no longer care, but, i just felt the need to express myself and say... chill out... be cool... keep writting and entretain people.

im no diferent from any comprensive writter and i don�t care if i don�t get or not a honorific mention at the end of one of your chapters, i just want to let you know, that i am one of the people that supports you... that�s all

keep up the good work, and... it would be nice if you ever decide to talk to me, althou i think you already said that you don�t talk to reviewrs or something, but is ok, just as long as you read this review it will be mission acomplish to me.

thanks for an awesome story... bye
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From ANON - CBCC on May 22, 2007
Don't hate Li at all (probably cos I'm way more interested in the development of Yue/Touya at this stage). Hope the 'darkest night' is as dark as it'd go for Yue/Touya... (still feeling rather sad for Touya at the moment...) When will Yue realise why Touya is so hurt and what it is that Touya wants? :~ [secretly yelling at Yue: don't you beat Touya up again!] So I guess I'm a Touya fan...??!?

Please update your fascinating story very very soon! :D Look forward to reading the next chapter.
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From ANON - Fiona Lenet on May 22, 2007
I don't hate Li, so much. I knew it was coming at some point. After the last time they had their moment, I knew it would come this time or the next one. I'm just ashamed that he took it so badly CONSIDERING that even relieved himself same as Ralen does. Sounds like Li had some hypocrisy surging through his hot-blooded male veins. But in the heat of the moment he probably didn't think to check himself like he should have and what not. She may have cheated but other than that she's never been anything but herself and she loved him. I just think he should have at least listened to her reasons a bit better.

Yeah, sure, if you want to say it was all Sakura's fault, I can see that but I definately don't agree with it by any means. Her excuses were the truth but in her raging of emotions she lost her thought enough to find a way to make Syaoran listen as I knew he would if she could but find a way to make it so. But even so, Sakura IS a pleasure slave and knowledgeable in the ways of pleasure. It's an undeniable fact that she can't help due to her naive nature at helping that man some numerous chapters back. Considering that she was all alone, save her brother, Li was all she had, not considering the rare visits from Tomoyo and Meilin, and to suddenly have it all ripped away once more because of her own weaknesses, will probably scar her deeply. It could either hurt her or make her stronger, if she lets it.

I do, though, hope that Tomoyo, being the one that brought it all on, fixes things as they should be. It might not so much be her place but it was because of her own reasons that she failed to find a better way of working around having Ralen permit her visits. Seems like she just liked things as they were.

Back to my indiscretions with Li, she had JUST AS MUCH, IF NOT MORE, to risk by loving him. Why didn't he realize that? What reason would she be doing things with Tomoyo, knowing that it was alright in some manner and yet risk her own life to love Syaoran? He needs to get over himself and realize a few things, same as Sakura. It's no doubt they both have much to realize in learn but with things as they are, it seems unachievable.

I am slightly concerned that, that may have been the thing to tip Sakura's suicide scale in absolute favor of the idea though. o.
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From AnimeHuggler on May 21, 2007
Now Li will come back to her feeling bad.
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From sodapop0006 on May 21, 2007
I hate the situation that Li and Sakura have found themselves in, but I can't honestly say that I hate Li. ... I just don't really like him anymore. Heh. "Darkest Night" is certainly an appropriate title for this chapter and it's hard to imagine how it can be put right again. As much as I have been enjoying the couples, I hope that the reconcilliation doesn't come too soon. It gives Yue a chance to see what he's missing in a relationship without affection and I'm interested in seeing how Li will act after this. Spiteful? Angry? Vindictive? Or just hurt? Quiet? Depressed? I wonder what Meilin will think of all this? Perhaps she will be the one to snap sense into Li. Although he does have a point and maybe Sakura will be too distressed to "perform" with Tomoyo anymore? Ralen would hate that and what Ralen hates makes me relatively happy. A good chapter. Good luck with the continuation. :)
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From ANON - annonymousss on May 21, 2007
I actually really feel bad for both Sakura and Li. I completely understand why he would be upset about that, but she also needed to talk to Tomoyo, and that was really the only way....
I don't know...I definitley don't hate Li though :(
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From ANON - Madd Hatter on May 21, 2007
I think Syaoran will give in. He'll feel bad and come back to her and say a little more harsh words but give in. I was wondering about that the whole chapter while her and Tomoyo were together, thinking "doesn't she realize she's with someone now?" She technically never made it appear to have no experience.I mean, common, she was bought at an auction, so she'd have to be taught some stuff. Or does he just not know how those types of things work?

I'm at a loss for Toya and Yue though now, I have noo idea what's happening in that area. You kind've made the story seem like it's coming to a closure, and then broadened it again with mystery. Which is nice for me, because that means more chapters to read. Thanks for the update
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From ANON - ruru on May 21, 2007
No I don't hate li. He does have the right to be mad. Hopefully he calms down and actually listens to Sakura, than again that relationship was illfated from the momment they met wasn't it?
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From ANON - JenJen on May 21, 2007
Is it weird to say I don't hate Li? I can understand exactly where he's coming from. Using words to lash out in the only way he can hurt Sakura as badly as she hurt him. I also can't wait to see Touya's next move ..
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From ANON - Alleran on May 21, 2007
Great story. Just finished reading up to the current chapter, and I must say I love what I have read so far.

As far as you comment at the end of chapter 32, why would anyone hate Li for his reaction. If anything I feel pity for him for falling for Sakura. However anyone wants to try and spin it Li caught her having sex with someone else. Not only that but he finds out she was doing it before and after she started her relationship with Li, and never told him about it. Also did she even once seem to regret what she chose to do with Toyomo? All she tried to do was justify and make excuses for her choice, and her comment on how he was the only male she has ever kissed was suppose make it better? While it's sad to see this happen to her, hopefully that will make he grow up a little and be a little less niave.

No, I don't hate Li.

Also,I have no sympathy for Yue, for his actions both in this chapters and previous ones he is getting what he deserves, maybe this will eventually make him remember what it was like to be on Touya side of the equation, probably not in time to save any sort of relationship with Touya, for I can't see Yue finding any way to get Touya's forgiveness except maybe to free Sakura.

If anyone in the story deserves the readers anger/hate, I would say it would have to be Toyomo. I mean with as long Toyomo has been coming to see Sakura she hasn't been able to figure out a way around Ralen's demands? Especially after Sakura confessed to her that she likes Li? She had to know something like this would happen if Li, found out about them, she is no where near as naive or innocent as Sakura is. It's not like after the first time could realy stop them from seeing each other. Ralen comes off would protect his own hide and job first above all else. All if would most likely take is a offhand comment by Toyomo about what Yue would think of his actions to his pleasure slave. Ralen would then have no choice but to back off for now till he could think of something else to blackmail Sakura with. Then again I think Toyomo is honestly happy with the excuse preform those act with Sakura and that is why she has done nothing to stop them.

What I would love to see in the near future is Toyomo come back in the next few days concerned for Sakura, find out Li dumped her, and storm off to give Li a piece of her mind only to have Li turn it around on her. And then we could sit back and watch the sparks fly. ^_^

Couple things I am curious about in this story.

First what principles govern the color of the collar? I mean for something that is used to bring so much more money in the sale of a slave I would have thought it would have less easily circumvented. Would buyers still be willing to pay so much basis of the collar be white if it doesn't denote the complete purity/virginity of slave? I mean it's been proven that you can have oral sex with the collar still staying white. What about Anal sex? Would buyers feel cheated if this took place or were the loopholes built into the collars on purpose to allow for slave training?

Second since you have introduced magic and Clow Reed do the clow cards exist and will Sakura be getting ahold of them?

Hope I haven't offended anyone with my opinions or questions. All in all I am really enjoying this story.

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From Scorpinac on May 21, 2007
Whoo, boy. First Touya and Yue fall apart, and now this. Though all things considered, Sakura might have an easier time making up with Syaoran than Yue will with Touya. Somehow, though, I'd gotten the impression that Sakura had already told him about having to have extra training sessions with Tomoyo in order to be allowed time with her by Ralen....oh, well, my bad. Here's hoping the little monsters don't kill you too much before you can get out number 33, kay?! Laters!
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From lilian on May 21, 2007
Li, that titchy dumbass! Poor Sakura. I feel kind of bad for Yue too. I'm really curious to know what's going to happen next. Thanks for the chapter!
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From ANON - Outlaw Angel on May 21, 2007
oooh...I love this chapter..ur story is gettingbetter an dbetter...soo marvelous...
I can't wait who will actually apoligize...will it be Yue ora Touya?...and ugh..that
thickheaded Li...why can't he just go and talk with Tomoyo...but nooo...he had to end
thing with Sakura...keep up the good work...update as soon as you can..

ya ne!!
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From cocoke5 on May 21, 2007
he is mad right now and her .. but i think that he still love her. and for yue and tonya i hope that they get thing right and back to they love . i cn not wait for the next chapter of the story and i fell for yu and teach little ones . i bet it is hard and good luck and be wait for more of the story. up date soon.
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From ANON - Two Things on May 20, 2007
Two things stuck out at me in this chappy; 1. When Sakura yelled at Yue and said something like "you said you liked him". That would have really hurt Yue I think. and it would have gave both Li and Ralen a big shock too!
2. Touya thinking about using the picture as a way to get out the castle. I didn't realise he still wnated to escape. I guess Touya thinks that Yue is only reliving what he did with Clow because he still loves Clow and that nothing Touya and Yue have done together is "real" and that it's all just memories of Clow. Or whatever.

Please write the next chapter soon. It's been 3 weeks already. That's longer than we've had to wait for a long time!!
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