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By : Capitalist

From ANON - 0ri on May 20, 2007
Man, I'm so eager for you to update after reading this chapter... I keep checking like, every day now. Since you said you liked hearing other people's ideas I think Toya should definitely be taken to a hospital or something, wounds that deep would most certainly need stitching, even with medicine they'd take a really long time to heal, and Toya could need to re-learn how to walk. (aww!) anyway but it's your story and I'm quite happy with what you've done with it so far, so whatever direction you take next I'm sure I'm going to love it. Keep up the great work. (and I TOTALLY predicted what happened. I knew yue was clow's pleasure slave. I KNEW IT. XD)
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From ANON - Fiona Lenet on May 20, 2007
Wonderful story and what not.

My only concerns if it Ralen is going to mean anything more to the story. I hope so. Just so I can read that Li kicked his ass and all that jazz. xD
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From Darkless on May 19, 2007
Wow, that was quite the rant at the end of chapter 30, and I feel for you. Some people don't know when to quit. I heartily agree with you; it's your story, your plot, and it's ultimately your descision how you tell it. I have been following this story for over two years and I still love it immensely. Don't you dare cave to pressure, just follow your path with pride. Although it may take you quite some time between postings, I'll keep checking, because it's worth the wait. You Go Girl!!
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From ANON - Tina RINA on May 17, 2007
I am not angry at Yue. I feel sorry for him. I'm sure we have all done something bad to someone in our lives [hopefully not to the extent of what Yue did to Touya] and I can definitly relate to the feelings of regret Yue must be feeling right now. he probably has a million things on his mind and all of them thoughts are bad. 'Why did i do that? Why didnt I wait to calm down before reacting? Why did I say those things to Touya? I wish I could go back and change what i did. How bad have I hurt him? What will he say when he wakes up? Will he ever want to talk to me? Will he even wake up? I wish i didnt hurt him. I wish I didnt hurt him. I wish I didnt hurt him.' I think they are some of the thoughts going in Yue's head now. We have all had them thoughts before about someone in our life. i am looking forward to chapter 32. Please write soon :) :) :) :)
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From northstar on May 17, 2007
Lol, I don't know whether to be happy that I was right. The bit of fluffy between them was rather nice; but if it'd been nothing but more fluff til the end of the story, I think I might have lost interest. I can't say I'm mad at Yue really, nor am I really that sorry for Touya. He knew he was risking punishment. Actually, I feel sorry for Sakura who was helpless to do anything for her brother except plead with Lee to intervene.
As for predicting what comes next...I wonder if the reason behind Yue's disappearances (besides his new moon weakness) is going to come to light soon...right about the time Yue and Touya just begin to patch things up after this latest fallout. As for Sakura and Lee, I bet the next "major development" might just be their secret being found out. I can guess how Sakura, Lee, and Touya will all react...its Yue that is the wild card in that one. If he dismisses Lee from his service, that leaves Sakura at the bad guy's mercy...
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From ANON - gabaruni on May 16, 2007
Read this story all in one go on a reccommendation. Best Four hours ever spent on a fanfiction. :D _> I know they'll have an understanding one day though. I've got no predictions for this story, trying to predict it will just ruin it for me.

I really like this though, it's terribly hard to find good CCS fanfiction, even harder for things that are well thought out. This has taken 2 years? Wow that's some dedication. I wish the best of luck to you on writing this and hope it doesn't become a chore and keeps being fun to write.
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From ANON - oww on May 15, 2007
this chapter has hit me hard. i can't stop thinking about it. please write the next chapter soon. i was hoping it would be up this week sometime. please. please. please.
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From ANON - akira on May 14, 2007
Love you! your great ! don't change a thing.
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From ANON - Toby on May 11, 2007
Wow. That was wonderful and terrible to read, all at once. Funny thing is, I felt desperately sorry for Yue at the end.
Anyway, I've always loved your story and never commented before but I really felt motivated to after this chapter.
Keep up the awesome work!
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From ANON - CBCC on May 10, 2007
I've never actually written a single review for the tonnes of fanfics that I've read... I'm more of the just read (and for some fics, reread again and again) and do nothing type. But if an extra review adds a 0.01% chance of having you finish your next chapter a day earlier [a motivation factor?], then here it is. Coz I wasted a whole night after reading the latest chapter thinking what's going to happen to Touya and Yue after this [and neglected my work]. And since my imagination sucks (imagining crap that ranges anything from Touya breaksdown with the thought of being just trash to Yue and want to commit suicide, to Touya puking everytime he sees Yue's face...), I'd really really prefer to read your version instead when your next chapter comes out. So please update very, very soon, please. In the meantime, I'll just have to keep rereading your existing chapters... >_< (cos the new novel I spent $$$ buying at the bookshop really suck in comparison with your story...)
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From ANON - hyori on May 09, 2007
I'm shocked.I thought Yue loved Touya too much to ever harm him again.he said a few chapters back that he would never allow anyone to harm Touya again. But now he has hurt Touya himself.I can't fathom how you are going to write the next chapter.The next chapter has become something that my mind can't grasp, Like what is at the end of the universe.It is just beyond me how you are going to continue.Needless to say I am very much looking forward to whatever happens next.Whatever you write next will be beyond anything I could ever think up.Please update soon.
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From ANON - Anon on May 06, 2007
This chapter really adds new dimensions to the title of your story, which at first glance doesn't seem too inspired or brilliant. But "Pleasure Slave" really has so many levels of meaning. The obvious referrent is Touya, but then there's also Sakura, and now last of all, the doubling effect of Yue as Clow's slave. I really love how this story only gains in complexity the further into it you go, and everything ties together so nicely - it shows tremendous thought. Most people get carried away with planning and so their first chapters tend to be plot-heavy, while the rest of the story is mostly resolution. Anyway, please don't get discouraged by the few critics and continue to write this beautiful and fascinating story.
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From ANON - Aureawolf on May 05, 2007
I love coming to this fic and seeing new chapters. Not just one but two this time. ^_^ Have I mentioned that you make the best exam study breaks?

Man, this relationship is amazingly messed up. In a great way of course. Oh what tangled webs we weave?

Of the most recent chapter, the one thing that struck me more than anything else was Yue fleeing after he realized what he had done to Touya. Just the actions and emotions as he ran to Clow's tower was so palpable and intense. Lovely.

I'll be back next time. ^_^ See you then!

PS: sorry you had flamers and stupid people who don't want to read a fantastic story, they want to read what they want to happen, and are ignorant of all else that is well made. I know how one flame can really just upset you and put you in a bad mood, but we're all here for you. ^_^ Keep your chin up.
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From ANON - Outlaw Angel on May 04, 2007
MOREEEE!!!!....I was soo totaly touched by this story...it sooo rocks!!...
can't wait what will happen now...will Touya forgive Yue?...and will Yue tell
Touya about his past with Clow?...aiiaia...and what will happen with Sakura???...
I need to know these things!!...sooo update as soon as you can!!!...you are doin a fabulous job!!

ya ne!
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From ANON - Seraphina on May 04, 2007
Wow...this story is amazingly well written. I applaud your creative ideas...amazing. And the way you have their personalities...wonderful. Never before have I read a story quite like this! You have me on the edge of my seat greedily inhaling all the words in this story. LOL. Can't wait for the next chapter!!! Keep up the amazing work!!!

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