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By : Capitalist

From ANON - AY on May 04, 2007
Hi! :waves: Imma new fan of ur ficcie~

Cant believe I missed such great fic. Got in contact with ur fic when I fell face first into it i.e. while reading out few lines while checkin out for TouYuk fic(which is my fav pair of CCS) and so far just love ur fic very much. Collided with ur fic when 30 chap was already completed :sigh: Ya, I know imma late person, cant help it. Im not a good reviewer but just wrote sth. to let u know I am 1 more fan of urs.
Story�s plot is really interesting and exciting. I just don�t seem to get inuff of it n want more. I really love ur writing style too, very clear to picture it. I had not read such interesting story in CCS before n nonetheless of YuexTouya pairing( which I was not much of fan be4 reading ur fic, not that I don�t luv Yue�, really handsome)
Touya�s torture (including prev. chaps) was really painful, cant help but feel like crying. Glad to see Sakura stood up (even though it didn�t make any diff.) Poor Li suffered too XD
N last but not the least YUE� miserable� T^T Really lookin forward to how he is goin to handle the situation now

Will be waiting for ur next update, hopefully soon? ^ ^;v

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From ANON - Chi-chan on May 04, 2007
OMG That's mad crazy!! And I loved it!! But Yue almost killed him!! Thank God for Syaoran and Sakura or he would be dead!! All poor Touya wants is the guys heart... and Yue's not ready to let go so of course he'd be furious. And I knew it!! I just knew he was Clow's former lover, but I never pegged him being a pleasure slave! Crazy plot twist there that I didn't see coming! EXCELLENT CHAPTER!! I cannot wait for the next one! What's miserable!Yue gonna do now?!
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From ANON - Rhian on May 03, 2007
I'm all crying now. That was terribly sad. But I think about Yue's situation too. He seems to be in his own world, and is probably dealing with some pretty strong enotions in his own mind right now. Shown by how quiet he was being and how Li said he looked miserable. But of course I'm sad about Touya too. His curiosity has gotten in the way, but thats okay. A plot needs good times and bad times to be good, it can't always be 'I'm so happy, we love each other and will never ever hurt or fight because that's how ridiculously happy we are' I would hate a story like that. A story needs some angst and drama, at least for people who are trying to make a long and possibly complex story. If you're making short one/two shots and crack fics, no need of the drama and angst.
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From ANON - easthighgrl on May 01, 2007
OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I just want to let you know I totally hate that you're such a FANTASTIC writer and that I LOVE your story to death!!!!!!!!!! My friend and I are just always like "we can't wait for the next chapter!" I'm Totally Not Fangirling (in a sarcastic tone) I think this fic definately needs to be turned into a book or something! I hope you update soon!! I can't wait!
Thank you sooooo much for writing this wonderful story!
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From ANON - Rylie on May 01, 2007
OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I just want to let you know I totally hate that you're such a FANTASTIC writer and that I LOVE your story to death!!!!!!!!!! My friend and I are just always like "we can't wait for the next chapter!" I'm Totally Not Fangirling (in a sarcastic tone) I think this fic definately needs to be turned into a book or something! I hope you update soon!! I can't wait!
Thank you sooooo much for writing this wonderful story!
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From ANON - inuyashanut on April 30, 2007
ow my gad!!!!
poor toya, but it looks like yue is startin 2 regret his actions.
pls pls update again soon, i adore dis story so much.

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From MistressMizu on April 30, 2007
This chapter was definitely heart wrenching. I wonder if Touya could ever forgive him for that... Yue nearly killed him. I get the feeling that Touya is going to remember everything that Syaoran said. I'm not sure if he'll do anything about it though... He might be too beaten to even feel like doing anything. And poor Sakura! I wonder how she is going to feel about Yue now... Then again, he still did nothing to her so at least she isn't afraid of him. I think she's just angry and upset, especially after knowing how Yue feels about Touya. I didn't realize it would get to be this bad though. I hope things heal well.

By the way, something I've been wondering: are you a male or female? The name Capitalist doesn't give much away, and I don't remember anything from author's notes, or your profile... From your writing I would assume that you're a female but one never wants to assume anything. D:
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From ANON - Kiwi on April 30, 2007
Okay, so, I've finally decided to make a review. Now, I've been following this story since about a day after you posted the first chapter. And I have to say, you are amazing! The way you have kept so many people captivated to you story for so long and the way you write is truly amazing! I do hope this story has a happy ending though. And like, how did Yue get so powerful if hewas a pleasure slave to begin with? Or was he always that powerful? Or did Clow give him those powers?
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From ANON - chrono_ofdarkness on April 29, 2007
OMG! I was waiting for this! I can't wait to see how you patch them up. But now that the cat's out of the bag, they can reach a new level in their relationship. Poor Sakura though. To see her brother in such a condition has to be so horrible for her. And Li's inability to help at the moment is just heart-wrenching. I'm so excited about the next chapter.
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From acaciac123 on April 29, 2007
XD I burst out laughing when I read "I kiss her everyday". Ah that was great.

And I don't hate Yue. ; ; If anything I love him more - the poor babes. So the musty smell was from Clow's bedroom? And the title really does refer to Yue? lol *go me I got some of it right* You mentioned something about an empty promise and the way it was worded made me wonder if Clow hadn't promised Yue that he'd come back to him somehow? Is Touya Clow's reincarnation in this version? o.o Or just simply a descendant of the reincarnation as he was in canon?

Other than that just . . .guh . . . this chapter was filled with ten types of awesome that I'm currently lacking the words to describe. When you described Clow's empty bed chamber my heart *ached* for poor Yue. Flashbacks plz! I'd so very much love to see a young Yue in a cage. Slave! Yue is a surprisingly sexy image. I can't tell you how thrilled I am that we're not half way finished like you said in earlier chapters. This story just makes me day every time you update.

Ok I'm babbling.

I'll review again later when I've reread it and can say something worth while other than just how wonderful and imaginative you are.
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From ANON - Someone (No One) on April 29, 2007
Hello

I've been reading since chapter 14, and i must say this is the best Written Fanfic I�ve ever read.
Poor Touya! Yue's REALLY good at Doing stupid things and quickly Regretting them.
Predictions? Just one. I think the castle is going to be attacked. Maybe because of aya?... Maybe not, Who knows...
I'm kinda worried about That little hating Li Comment...
I think your making Review History, With 734-ish Right now, you're Approaching 1000 Rapidly (50-ish Reviews last chapter).
I shall impatiently Await The next Chapter.

P.s. I Was just noticing How wide spread The reviewers Are. Someone's In Hawaii, I'm in Maine. Cool.

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From midnightfox on April 29, 2007
That had me on the edge of my seat and I thought I was going to have a heart attack. ^~^ Its good to know Yue's past on who he really was and now he was treated. I hope Touya makes it out of this.
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From ANON - Anon on April 29, 2007
Another great chapter. You're really talented at writing. I had a feeling something bad might happen when he went into that room. what an idiot. Well Please update again soon. I really can't wait to see what happens next, though I'm surprised its not halfway over yet. I feel kinda sorry for Touya and Yue. Hope things work out. Probably will be really awkward after that.
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From sodapop0006 on April 29, 2007
Wow, I really don't know whether I'm disgusted with Yue or if I just feel really bad for him. He completely lost control and the explosion was amazing. Times like this, I kinda feel like laughing at him, because it's just so obvious that Touya is NOT a slave and Yue keeps insisting on it. Poor Touya, though... I don't even know how he'll react to this. It doesn't seem like he's waking up yet, though, and that might lead to some interesting situations. I can't imagine that Sakura will be able to keep away when she knows that her onii-chan is in such bad shape. It would be interesting to see if her powers actually come to light while Touya's unconscious and she might actually connect with him that way. Oo, that would make Syaoran soo jealous! ^_^ Your comment about hating Li was such a teaser! Now I keep thinking about something that would make me hate him, but I can't think of anything that would keep him in character. I suppose the worst that I can imagine is him hurting Touya while he's down, but that doesn't really seem to hold to his honor, so unless something gets him really really mad... hmm... Well, all musing aside, this was a fabulous chapter, very intense and I couldn't help but read it over and over! Amazing. I'm looking forward to the next installment.
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From ANON - Trish on April 29, 2007
Hah- I love how Syaoran brags to Touya about being with Sakura everyday. Keep it up chica!
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