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By : Capitalist
  • From AnimeHuggler on April 29, 2007
    Dude! So I'm guessing Yue's going to have to put the chains back on. No more freedom for poor half dead Touya. And poor Sakura! They have to get out soon now, before they both get killed somehow. Sad!
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  • From lilian on April 29, 2007
    !!!!! This is like a turning point for me. I wonder how Touya is going to react when he wakes up. (Badly, I hope... I'm one of those people who want the suffering unhappy couple to get some closure, but when the happy bunny closure does come, I'm never satisfied. Might as well go back to the suffering and unhappy. lol)

    And I also wonder what Yue's real role was with Clow; whether Touya was right and he was a pleasure slave that Clow acquired, or whether Clow made him and just had him as a lover. While reading I also thought that maybe Yue is bound to the castle and that he can't leave! (that line where he wants to fly away and never return...like the hyenas tell Simba in the Lion King, haha)

    I loved the part where Touya steals Li's knife. And I thought the scenes where Li intervened with the punishment and when he tells the unconscious Touya that he and Sakura were together were great. I thought Li's pure hatred/dislike for Touya in one part was a little unfounded though; the part where he's like, "I wouldn't have minded if you had died down there". I thought that was kind of cold. I think that if I had just seen even my proudest, most stubborn, hotshot but fairly sort of harmless enemy nearly beaten to death, I would have a bit more sympathy. I think that it didn't fit in with all of Li's other actions and words, which were more sympathetic, so that was the only OOC thing for me I guess.

    Oh, and the part where Li calls Sakura his "hysterical girlfriend" was hilarious. I love that aspect of Li.

    Things I look forward to:

    Touya POSSIBLY being sort of awake and hearing that Li and his sister were together, that not happening but having the shit still hit the fan, renewed attempts at escape, Touya going crazy trying to figure out Clow, Yue going crazy trying to figure out his feelings and how to deal, Li macking Sakura, Touya being macked by Yue again ("DONT TOUCH ME"), YUKITOOOOO (hey maybe Yue feels so unable to meet his slave face to face that he shapechanges into an innocent boy who likes to eat a lot and who Touya of falls in love with, not gonna happen I know), and Touya macking Ralen. (haha just kidding.)

    Anyway thanks for the chapter! One of my favorites!
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  • From Scorpinac on April 29, 2007
    Well, at least now we know what was in that room. And as to that dungeon scene, ouch...(wince) And I thought I was being nasty when I had Chibiusa/Rini get whipped in my Sailor Moon fic, "Roman Legends"! In hindsight, I actually went pretty easy on her... And Sakura forgets her fear of Yue! And I couldn't help but notice that no one commented on his wings. Or were they just too distracted to notice? Wouldn't blame them...

    More than forty chapters? Seriously?! Whoa.... Laters.

    [I hate it when reviews malfunction like that...]
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  • From ANON - Scorpinac on April 29, 2007
    Well, at least now we know what was in that room. And as to that dungeon scene, ouch...(>.
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  • From ANON - Lauren on April 29, 2007
    I'm sorry, I'm not one for really thinking things out. I don't really have any thoughts on where you might be going with the plot. I don't think like that. I just anticipate and look forward to things. And I look forward to a new chapter every week. xD But I don't have any speculations for you. :/ This is just.. an awesome fic. Usually I'm not one for AU things, but you have made these characters I really like [especially Yue, he is my favorite] and made them your own. But I'm fairly sure that I'd be able to tell who they were, even in this strange world. And... your writing style is excellent and exciting, keep it up!! I'm glad it's not going to be done in only nine chapters, I'm glad to look forward to lots of new installments of this story. :]
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  • From ANON - Lady M on April 29, 2007
    absolutely amazing. and you are updating rather quickly, which is AWESOME!! I totally think the castle is going to be attacked, and I cant wait. Hopefully Sakura and her brother get to use some awesome mojo and li and sakura get to have some hot sex. And then use LOTS of whiteout on her collar to hide their crime. Bleach could work too...
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  • From ANON - Sana_chan on April 29, 2007
    Omg....Touya...the next chapter....please hurry
    your writing is as beautiful as Yue T-T
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  • From ANON - Silverwolfe on April 29, 2007
    Ok....That chapter was AMAZING!!! I really liked the ending with Li and Sakura, it was so cute >_
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  • From cocoke5 on April 28, 2007
    i think that the story is real good and i can not wait for the next chapter of the story and see if they powers come to them . in the last chapters you have saka and tonya have powers i hope that they come out and help them . and i love the way that you have yue get mad at tonya and that clowed is come back to him. up date soon the story is real good my mom is read it too. and she said that your write skill are real good. so up date soon.
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  • From ANON - Madd Hatter on April 28, 2007
    Well done - very suspenseful.
    I can't say I hate Yue with the misery he's going through.
    I looved how you tied little things in with Yue's past.

    I never put two and two together - the bird cage and his wings. I just thought it was sexy to have a very innocent girl in a birdcage for show.

    I'm hoping for the next chapter for Toya to wake up and hopefully Yue break down and tell Toya everything. That'll be interesting. I'll be watching for the next chapter - impatiently.
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  • From ANON - Rhian on April 28, 2007
    Love the story so far. Keep up the great work :)
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  • From ANON - heeeey on April 27, 2007
    wow. you sound angry >_
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  • From ANON - Damien on April 24, 2007
    I loved your list. Yes, there are some thing I myself would personally change, but, hey, it's your story,and if I have such a huge issue with it, I should go work on one of my own stories. Which, sadly, I will have to do while waiting for your next chapter. Keep writing! It is beautiful! You fill my heart with joy! Ha, ha... Oh, and how old are you? Just wondering, ya know, from the writing techniques.
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  • From ANON - Damien on April 24, 2007
    I LOVE THIS!!! Okay, I read 20 chapters until two in the morning, and now I'm sad I'm going to finish it today....
    It reminds me a bit of Ai No Kusabi, but much more detailed and different.
    Loves it. I only got into yaoi this year, and I'm very, ah, dedicated. Yep. Yep...
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  • From acaciac123 on April 23, 2007
    Sorry that last review was by me. U__U

    @ Ta Boo

    Yay someone else was thinking that too! I was thinking the tiredness might have come just naturally because of the moon and he has to be near his corpse to absorb some power or something. Or maybe when there's no moon its the best time to try and bring Clow back to life or he's trying to find something. Remember he said the second time when he came back that things hadn't gone as he had planned.
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