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By : Capitalist

From ANON - Anon on April 23, 2007
Eeps sorry for two reviews in one chapter. >.>

But I was rereading this again today and came across : "Some of them say, though, that one of our ancestors was an incredibly powerful sorcerer who made this sword and several other artifacts too. If it�s true, he would have been one of the strongest magicians that ever lived.�

Clow? o.o
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From ANON - not telling on April 23, 2007
I have been following this story for a long time but this is the first time I am reviewing it. I can't speeek for everyone but I really like your story and its direction and I love the parings you have chossen for it. Keep up the great writeing and don;t let yourself get lost by lisening to what others say.
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From ANON - WitchingMoon on April 22, 2007
LofuckingL You go, girl! That's all I have to say about what you stated at the end of your chapter. I think it was nicely put and I had quite a laugh when reading it. As for your fic, I adore every moment of my reading it except for the rare moments when someone bugs me when trying to read it. *smiles* You're doing wonderful and I can hardly believe some of the things people are trying to say to you. I've heard that kind of thing before and that's what has made me not post my work. I'm glad to see some of us can take the heat and fire it right back. *grins* Lovely work in every way, shape and form and I can't wait for the next chapter.
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From RAW19 on April 21, 2007
i for one have no problems with this story whatsoever. the plot is great, the romance digs ever deeper, and the humor and action are most excellent. rest assured that while there will always be hecklers, there will also be devoted fans who will wait any number of days for the next chapter of an excellent saga.
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From ANON - Rayna on April 20, 2007
So I'm curious. You've implied that Syoaron is a decendent of Clow Reed in earlier chapters. And now Sakura and Touya have magic. That leads me to wonder if you are following the simlier line from CCS:Master of the Clow with Fujitaka being the other half of Clow Reed's reincarnation thus making that the source of their magic.
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From ANON - Rayna on April 20, 2007
Love the Story first time I've reviewed. Sorry :) Just wanted to say this is the best CCS story I have ever read. So thanks, keep it up and I can't wait for the next part.
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From Ficfan3484 on April 20, 2007
Wow......just Wow. I love this story. I really wish it was a book, it would probably be a best seller. I can't wait till you put up the next chapter. Please continue writing such wonderful chapters.
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From ANON - Anon on April 19, 2007
I love your story. It took me two days to read it but it was worth it. Its so good. You're a fantastic writer. I can't wait till you update again...which probably won't be for awhile.. but oh well I can wait. Anyways I read every word of it and you must work really hard cause every chapter is so long. I couldn't stand writing a fanfic with such long chapters. It would take forever...I just can't help but wonder how you do it XD
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From midnightfox on April 19, 2007
^_~ Awesome writing and this is the best fanfiction story I've ever read. Your story is perfect the way it is and I can't wait for more.

~Alexa~
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From ANON - changa on April 19, 2007
well i'm not quite sure about uh....all the angry reviewers out there but I know I like this story quite a bit myself and am always looking forward to a new chapter! I luv the pairings, and how much of a badass Touya is ^_^ something about the rebel that does it for me he he ^_^ I say keep up the good work and I can't wait till I can read a new chapter.....I'm eager to see if Sayoran will make his move wit Sakura and if they'll get caught......oh....I can't take the suspense!
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From ANON - inuyashanut on April 18, 2007
me love dis
pls pls pls update very soon
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From ANON - morwen re on April 18, 2007
i'm sorry you got such bad reviews lately, i know the feeling... but please, don't let it stop you from writing! you've done a wonderful job writing this fic and i could see it as an original if you changed the characters' names, so don't worry about what other people say.
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From acaciac123 on April 18, 2007
Wow.

Ok first because I know we read each others reviews :

First off you can't throw a bitch fit every time someone gives you a negative review. That being said some of these reviews are bitch fit worthy. I've expressed my own negative review in the past about something that I didn't like but it wasn't out of pure distaste for this story so I obviously believe in giving an honest opinion rather than blind and empty praise. However . . . Pushing an author to write a pairing in their own story is the most pig headedest thing ever. There are plenty of other fics out their that cater to every taste and the one being bitched about in particular is not one of the more obscure ones that some of us have to hassle with.

The truth of the matter is plain and simple - if something is no longer to your taste simply stop reading. No one is holding you at gun point to the screen and saying "read this". And for that matter no one made you lord god of reviews where you are fit to tell others what to do in their witting. You can give your opinion of devices used or not used, you can give constructive criticism or express your reaction to something - either negative or positive - no one ever said reviews have to be all sugar and glowing praise. But what I've seen here goes beyond good taste. I'll admit I don't enjoy everything about this fic but its still more than pleasurable to read and you're wasting precious time you could be using for something else I'm sure you'd enjoy much more by sitting around here complaining.

And while we're on the subject : 7 parts of an inch people. That's how far it is between the "a" key and the CAPS and that's all that you need to have your pinky cross to keep from sounding like you're mentally challenged. Giving a review in caps does not get any point across other than the fact that you lack the cohesive abilities to express yourself in a becoming manner.

That being said . . .

Oh god I've been thinking about that door forever and a day now. >:E When the heck is it going to open - ever since the Clow-ness was confirmed I've been biting my nails down to the quick to finally figure out what happens. The thing in the air really has me perplexed. Is it one of the cards? Does it have something to do about Cerberus?

I don't know if I've pondered this before in a review but is the smell on Yue the scent of the grave? I'm assuming Clow is long gone but does he have his body propped up somewhere that he goes to when he's running low on energy to snuggle up with or try and bring back to life? At first I thought it might be an after sex smell since you described it as musky but Touya always says its unpleasant so I've been trying to think of something else that would leave a strong smell. :/ I always thought the title referred to Touya and Sakura but now I'm not so sure. 9__9

As always I look foreword to the next chapter and thank you for continuing to take time out of your busy schedule to write for us.
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From ANON - CT on April 17, 2007
I have never reviewed any of the thousands of fanfictions I have read during my life, but I want you to know that I genuinely (hope that's spelled right!) enjoy yours. I can really tell that this fiction means a lot to you, and it really saddens me that you get so many negative responses to your gift. I look forward to a new chapter, no matter how long it takes for an update. I also love that you make long chapters that remind you of what you love about the story, and seduce you into wanting more.

Many times I have read fanfictions that inspire me to 'add-on' or completely change the flow of the story (in my mind and on paper, of course). When I read Pleasure Slave I don't feel the desire to do that. There is no other way that I can see your vision going. All I can do is wait for your vision to present itself. I know that you must feel very frustrated and unappreciated when you have demanding and/or insincere replies to your 'baby'.

I do not have much time anymore to read, but whenever I get the chance I look forward to checking up on your progress. Your gift is a treasure to me!

(This must sound so weird to you!)

With Sincere Thanks,

CT
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From ANON - Kitt on April 17, 2007
I don't know why someone would complain about your story. I have enjoyed reading your building of the characters and cannot wait to see where the storyline goes. Keep going and I'll continue to read it.
Many hugs and purrs, Kitt
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