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By : Capitalist

From simontheduck on April 17, 2007
"Care about what you write more!!" lol. I imagine this must have been extremely hurtful, but I find hilarity in that review's utter nonsense. I can't imagine it was meant to be taken seriously. If it was, there are more idiots in the world than I thought.

It's really unfortunate that such a talented writer had to get caught up in the whole spam email thing. Yeah, I know it probably doesn't help to joke about it, but if I'd received an email directing me to this story I'd be pretty damn happy. I mean, it's a great bloody story, hands down.

And I'm into yuri, but you have the right to do what you please with your story - I don't know where people get the idea that they are in control of what an author does. If they were paying you it might be a different story. :D I also think it's pretty rude and cold to ignore the beauty of the relationship you're developing for Sakura...and here I thought on the internet people were all about "love surpasses gender", what with reading billions of yaoi readers and all. Apparently not.

I hardly review, I can't remember if I ever have, but it's an excellent fic - the greatest CCS fic of all time at the moment. Your skill in writing is obviously growing and your plot remains interesting. Keep it up!
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From ANON - Mel on April 17, 2007
Damn! I just went back and read those posts that you were talking about and all I can say is damn! Pardon my language but that is really fucked up. I feel for you. I am extremely attatched to this story and if those comments hurts me that much, I can't imagine how it was for you.

I am quite offended and it's not even my story. I send much love and support to you. You are doing perfect, don't let anyone tell you differently.

Mel
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From ANON - Mel on April 17, 2007
Well, I haven't read or reviewed in a while. I didn't know you updated. And imagine my surprise when I find not one chapter but four to read and enjoy. Thank you so much.

As for your outburst, you go! I recently started writing fanfiction and I know that I have never had any reviews like that, but I can imagine it and honestly tell you that it would make me mad as well.

Anyways, I have to admit the suspense is killing me. I think it is clear that Sakura, Touya and Syaoran are all descendants of Clow, just like in the anime. I myself haven't read the manga, but I would imagine it's like that as well. Also I think Clow made Li's family sword (I'm not sure if that is explained in the anime/manga)

I'm really loving the plot line. I don't like to assume too much because anything could happen. I do have some predictions though. I can't wait to see if any of them are right.

Again, thank you for this wonderful story.

Your loyal reader,
Mel
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From ANON - Black Shinigami on April 17, 2007
Btw, I LOVED YUE'S WINGS!! IT MADE ME SO HAPPY INSIDE!! Now I can't stop smiling! And they're sensative too?! Yummy...Just... awesomeness...

~Black Shinigami (aka Chi-chan)
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From ANON - Black Shinigami on April 17, 2007
Well screw THOSE jackasses who dissed this story. Personally, I think it's brilliant! I love the dynamics of the plot, the relationships of the pairings, both platonic and romantic, and I love the dimensions you've given the characters I loved from CCS. Yue and Touya's relationship captured me in it's snare and I don't want to escape. From a pleasure slave to a lover. And yet Yue can get jealous, he keeps secrets... he can FEEL... I love this aspect of him. Touya's love and protectiveness for his sister always make me smile because he's such a wonderful brother and his devotion to care for them both, even now as captives, is inspiring. And it's nice to see the familiar tension between Touya and Syaoran, I was glad you put that in there. Always made me laugh in CCS. As well as Syao/Saku's forbidden love. I'm always anxious and afraid they'll get caught, but it's beautiful that they're willing to risk severe punishment for love. Tomoyo and Meilin's chapter appearances always make me smile and I know Ralen will eventually get his....he's the one thing I hate in your story because naturally, sometimes you're gonna hate the villian, but you've made him an utterly devious villian...he's sneaky & conniving and I love THAT about him. But I have a feeling something big is about to happen. REALLY big. Now that Touya can't help but want to know of Clow... and that ominous presence he can now feel. This is going to be so good. I can't wait!

And don't let those critics get you down. You're writing a magnificent story and they're too much of a bunch of dumbasses to see it! I look foward to your new chapters!
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From ANON - Shea1 on April 17, 2007
Its such a good story, I love every bit of it. Its genuinely better than most published books I have read. Please keep writing and congratulations on finishing your taxes.
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From ANON - BillyTheCad on April 17, 2007
I don't normally look at reviews - I feel that the writing should speak for itself and fangirl/boy splooge on the review page shouldn't influence whether or not a story is good. However, at your latest AN I just had to take a gander and, hooo-boy, do some people need to realize something - This isn't their story, don't complain about how a writer continues some scenes or quits certain parts that are no longer valuable to the story (such as the yuri.) You have created a great piece of work here - In fact, this story is the only reason I still check out AFF (talk about fanboy splooge on your review page ::grin::).

Now, about the chapter. Heh, I was wondering when Yue's wings were going to come into play! He's just not Yue without his wings, yannow? And his little disappearances... Excuse me while I blather. Well, in the anime/manga Yue draws his strength from Sakura, but because her powers weren't strong enough, he got his strength from Touya. During one of Touya and Yue's conversations in this fic, Yue reveals that he gets *some* of his powers from the moon, but that brings up the question - where else does he get his strength from? Since he's getting strength from neither Touya nor Sakura, that means (to me) that he must be gettign it from someone else. Thinking back to the anime and all who has magical ability, that would leave me with two people - Kaho, and Eriol. While I have an inkling that Kaho might return later in the fic, I don't think she's the person Yue draws strength from. That leaves Eriol.

Of course, he seems tired and weak when he returns... that looses me. I guess I'll have to wait here patiently until you reveal all.

Heh, now I am sort of curious to Touya's reaction if/when he meets Ruby Moon and Spinal Sun and... Hey, what about Kero? Are we ever going to see that cute lil' stuffed animal?

Okay, I'm going to stop now, because I'm probably crossing the line of what those people who ticked you off just did. Take care, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
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From Scorpinac on April 17, 2007
Well, that answers the question of whether he still has wings or not. I'd wondered about that at first myself when he first entered the tale, but then just sort of gave it nor more thought - wasn't really relevant, after all. And, oh yeah, Syoaran's turning of Sakura's collar to black is so imminent! It's just a matter of time before he breaks - that, or he and/or Sakura actually asks Yue permission to have a full relationship(hopefully without Touya present, as i imagine he'd probably throw a pitch fit!). And boy, quite the chewing out at the end there from the author - not that Capitalist didn't have a good reason. Hopefully the braindead morons out there will have gotten the message. Well, I can't think of anything else to say at the moment, so, laters.
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From ANON - mischief on April 17, 2007
wow your really mad...i guess the more known your story the more people is attracted the good and the bad kind. as always of course loved the latest chapter the wings, i totally forgot he had them.
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From ANON - Xen on April 17, 2007
I am surprised that you have had any issues with this story its so awsome I don't understand why people would bitch. I love this story please don't stop updating, I egearly await the next chapter. (Hurry up with the next chapter! lol)

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From ANON - elysian on April 16, 2007
Beautiful latest chapter, I love the reaction Touya has when I finds out that Yue has wings, it is very, for current lack of a better word; cute. I check back here all the time to see when you have updated and love the results of when you do. Thank you.
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From northstar on April 16, 2007
LOVED THE WINGS! (being rude maybe but you get the excitement here ^^) Winged Yue *drool*
First of all, I desperately hope that the writing has not lost its enjoyment for you. Dabbling a bit in ff writing myself, I understand the anger behind that last AN note. Great rant, btw. It's hard to understand why, if they don't like the story, why they bother to keep reading. No one's forcing them to; its not like you'd miss their reviews; you've marked everything clearly; so people should learn to DEAL! Your writing, your story. If there's something they want to see happen in ff, then they should go write it themselves! Anyone and everyone can write ff. Except, of course, most do not write it with half the talent and honed writing skills you do. Since they realize that, they want to dictate what you do with your writing to satisfy themselves but too bad so sad cause it doesn't work like that.
I'm grateful every new chapter that this story goes on. Really, it makes my day when I check back and there's an update waiting for me. I love this story and have alot of respect for you writing a multichapter fic this long.
As to the latest chapters...the beginning "dark" tones of the story have lightened considerably. The latest chapter, if taken out of context, would almost qualify as "waffy." I can't help but wonder if this is the "calm before the storm" where we see Yue's and Touya's bond strengthening before it's inevitably "tested."
Interesting twist with the magic talents of both of them. I didn't even see that coming.
As always, GOOD JOB and hope to read more from you!
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From ANON - DA on April 16, 2007
Whatever other people's reviews, I'm completely loving this story so far. Not only is it well-written, but the fact that you have taken the time to flesh out a plot while still keeping each chapter active with some sort of action is very appealing and satisfying. I can't wait for your next update!
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From AnimeHuggler on April 16, 2007
Still good
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From ANON - jj on April 16, 2007
I haven't reviewed the story before despite the fact i have been reading it since the start, It was horribly remiss of me >.> sorry. It truly is one of my favorite stories on Aff. The responses in your last chapter made me do a double look. Fans can be .. cruel especially about pairings. I always thought you labeled the story honestly for what it is making sure to warn everyone about the different things that popped up and I for one was appreciative. Everything else .. major props to you. It is your story and readers who read it then complain about you not doing it their way need to get off their lazy bottoms and write their own stories. They don't boy books in the store then write long letters to the authors to complain about how each chapter should have been written according to them. Of course not because thats a waste of time and utterly stupid. A reader reads a story so they can be given a slight glimpse into another world crafted by the author. It is not up to the reader to craft the world .. we are all along just for the ride. And I have to say it has been an amazing ride so far .. this story will remain in my top picks and suggestions to my friends because of that. Well thought out, well crafted and a truly different world then any other AU i have ever read. Thank you for sharing it with me.
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