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From ANON - onewingdtenshi07 on April 16, 2007
=D I loved how this chapter came out! You're so awesome, please keep up the excellent work!
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From sodapop0006 on April 16, 2007
This chapter was wonderful. ^_^ I've really fallen in love with the Syaoran/Sakura relationship in your story and its overwhelming cuteness. I laughed when I read about Li's reaction to his sword-handling being called "pretty". It just encompassed his personality entirely, though I was concerned that someone would see them "dancing" together... made a lovely chill go up my spine, but I'm glad that you're drawing it out. Anticipation and jealousy are two of my favorite things to feel when reading fiction like this and you do it so well! The magic element was a nice surprise as well. I was wondering about it when I first started reading but then it slipped to the back of my mind and I figured that it was just a part of the AU factor. Clumsy reading on my part, haha.

As for everything else, with the reviews and the spam mail and all, I'm terribly sorry to hear about all of the trouble. I was surprised when I went back to read over the reviews, which I don't normally do but was curious, and the comments were really rather harsh. Fanfiction stories are a personal thing and you should be allowed to take any direction that you like with your plot. Also spam mail is just that, spam, and it hardly ever originates from the person it is targeting. You're as much a victim as anyone else and I hope that administration was able to take care of it. It was nice to read the more recent reviews and see that you have many supporters out there as well. I would just like to say that I think this is a marvelous fic and that your writing is absolutely amazing. I wish you the best of luck.
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From EVILinnocence on April 16, 2007
I am sorry that you are recieving shitty reviews. I on the other hand LOVE your story. It is one of the very few that I have found of aff that actually uses correct punuation and grammer not to mention your writing style is very distinct. I donot think that it is sinful. Infact all of your sex scenes are very tastefull. I run a erotic writing circle here at University of Hawaii at Manoa and my co-president loves your work. Please write more. I would never tell you what to write but I would make suggestions. I'm dieing of suspense with clow over here and I am wondering if he will present an interest in Sakura like he did in the manga (albeit a platonic one). I would like to see more tomoyo sex scenes with sakura. The teacher student aspect is very alluring.
Sincerly,
D. Kubota aka EVILinnocence
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From ANON - Spaz on April 16, 2007
I really liked this chapter. it really left me wanting more!
Sorry, I was one of the people who commented on your title. I didn't mean it meanly and I'm sure you didn't take it that way >.< Don't stress too much on making chapters, ok? They're great, don't get me wrong, I love your story. Just don't get too stressed out over it, we can wait. And if you're curious at all, I found out about this story through a group in MySpace. I will always be thankful for that.

Good luck with everything! ^_^

(sorry if I sound a bit mixed up, I'm really tired right now...nite!)
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From ANON - Shadow light on April 16, 2007
Well, I'm happy to say that you are one of my favorite fanfiction authors, right their with Post, who I still think is the best alive. I thank you for this new chapter and apologize for anyone posting stupid remarks in their reviews. Please don't stop writing, I love this story to much! Best of luck! ^__^
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From AnimeHuggler on April 16, 2007
Juilan ate all the time in CCS! I love that little twist you put in! Can't wait for the next chapter! You're getting quick at the updates.
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From ZiggyOtaku on April 16, 2007
Wow, I never read your reviews throughly enough to see the flames.
Sorry to hear about the problems - and also, it seems like this chapter was kind've effected by that.
It was a good chapter that moved the plot on, and was very well done - but something was off.

Hopefully you'll get some peace now, because I for one enjoy your story very much.
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From cocoke5 on April 15, 2007
i love the story and i think tht you are doing a real good job and i love the way think are going and can not wait for more of the story and see were you are going with the story and i love the way that you and yue and tom and sara and sys. when is yue going let li have sara n.. up date soon. and do not let people tell you that your story not good when it is. good luck . up date soon because i love the story and can not wait for more.
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From ANON - Azucena on April 15, 2007
I have been with this story for a while now, but have never actually reviewed before. I just want you to know that I ADORE this story, and am absolutely shocked that people have actually flamed/criticized this. I think that your writing style is wonderful and easy to read, and that the plot is creative and is always leaving me wanting more. I think that anyone else who believes something contrary to that, should just simply press the back button. No one is forcing them to read this, after all.

Please, do not let some stupid reviews discourage you (even though I don't think they will). I love this story, and eagerly await each update. It's always fills me up with emotions and the romantic scenes leave me with fuzzy feelings that only well-written stories can do.

There is a reason as to why your story is the most popular CCS one: It kicks ass.
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From Snapelicious on April 15, 2007
Sweet Crispy Jebus, but that's some anger in the AN. And upon checking the reviews myself huuu, is it warranted. Did someone yell at you for writing a romantic kissing scene?! Ridiculous! Personally, I think your writing's spectacular, as does my good friend Dea-chan (who unfortunately doesn't trust the new AFF age contract thing and hasn't read since it went up), and we're kinda snobbish when it comes to that sort of thing. Especially her, since it had the two "Y" words in the warnings, and she's pretty much a het girl all the way.

Okay, enough general support, onto the review. This was a fairly WAFFy chapter, like HOMG. With a title like "Pleasure Slave" it still comes as a shock when it's not bondage all the way. ^^ Teehee, Sakura thinks Syaoran's sword is cute. If those thoughts continue, her collar won't be white much longer (bow chicka bow wow). I was wondering if Yue's wings were going to come into play when he started complaining about his shoulders being sensitive, and of course you didn't disappoint. ::drools at winged Yue:: I'm really eager to see where this story goes next (What's behind the mysterious door, why does an evil shadow pass through the room whenever Yue must leave, how exactly does Clow fit in...) and for all I love explicit yaoi, the Superman-esque love scene was sweet too.

And to that prat "Undisclosed", I don't know about a lot of people, but it was the promise of motherluvin' Yaoi that drew me, the yuri being a distasteful side note (however, it was well enough written that I even found myself enjoying the yuri, a rare occurrence indeed). The story was never promised to be yuri, and I'm frankly surprised Tomoyo plays as much of a recurring role as she does. In essence, take the tampax out of your ass, slap yourself in the face and stop bitching about an excellent story. Are you undisclosed because you're too ashamed to show us what you write?
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From MistressMizu on April 15, 2007
This was a beautiful chapter. I don't think I've ever enjoyed one more. It was soft and sensuous without being too sexual. I think Touya is getting closer to finding out Yue's secrets than before.

>_> If only it were easier to ignore negative reviews. I didn't agree with them either though. In fact everything I hoped you would comment on, you did.

So... Does it mean that someone or something is calling to Yue on those new moons?

Also, I know this has nothing to do with this chapter, but Touya really does play the piano in the anime. Very well, in fact. I'm not sure if you were aware of it, but when I saw that in the anime I instantly thought of this story and was glad you had him play. ^_^ And again, great chapter!
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From ANON - Sana-chan on April 15, 2007
my god...do people really bash your story that much?
thats horrible! your one of the best writers on the whole site!
I asbsolutely LOVE Pleasure Slave...I cant believe anyone would say bad things about it >:(
great job on the new chapter...it was so romantic *heart*
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From ANON - Liane on April 15, 2007
You are without a doubt, absoultey freaking amazing!!!!!! ^_^
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From ANON - S. St. James on April 15, 2007
Okay so I had a whole review typed here but I accidentally pressed a button and it was gone. If it was revieww... well you get two! Yippie!

First off, people who dont like this story should be pfft'ed upon. You're here to write what you wanna write, and the hell if you should bend over backwards to please anyone else. Dont you forget thet.

Two... I love you. I like pairings, I like Touya's easiness now with Yue... blah blah... I'm really bummed my thing was erased. But anyway, I with Touya, I wanna know more about Cloooooooow.

Holy Sakura/Li happenings, batman! Those two are dancing on the strings of luck. That scene in the begining was cute, btw.

Write more or else I'll go into a state of depression. So booya to everyne else.

S. St. James

Ps, I hope my sarcasm on a few things travels well. I mean no disrespect and I absolutely love your story.
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From ANON - mewling on April 15, 2007
Sucks about the crap you've been getting. I noticed an Administrator put a notice on your review page asking people not to blame you, but who reads review pages? (well, me, obviously, but I wanted to see the angry reviews ^_^').

Another great chapter; I'm beginning to get more into the Yue/Touya storyline than the Sakura/Syaoran one now. A reversal! (Although I must admit the idea of them having sex in a feathered cocoon makes me laugh)
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