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Reviews for Pleasure Slave

By : Capitalist
  • From ANON - amy on April 15, 2007
    hello.

    This is a fantastic storie. please write another chapter soon. i cant wait to read it.

    thankyou
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  • From ANON - ta1ahina on April 14, 2007
    i apologize i am one of those people that is accustomed to leaving a review at the end of a story. i was unaware of how meaningful it is to an author to recieve acknowledgment for time and effort spent. you must pardon my ignorance. i find your story truly a marvel. you have found a true fan in me. the scene involving the balcony was truly innovative. i could invision the raging storm surrounding the two characters while they were getting it on. their first kiss was detailed enough as well to leave a impression.....
    Though i have to admit begrudgingly if being kissed should feel like "A rush of warmth" the is "envelope[ing]" so much so that "every new sensation on his tongue and lips ignit[e] another flush of heat" where "it became too much to handle and he had to pull away, at the very least to breathe"...... I MUST BE DOING IT WRONG. OR SOMETHING IS BEING LOST IN TRANSACTION. ive been kissed. believe me i am NOT innocent in MANY accounts. but OMG!.....
    IF BEING KISSED IS SUPPOSE TO FEEL LIKE THAT THEN...DANG...I DONT KNOW. I MUST SUCK OR SOMETHING. Congratu-FREAKIN-lations, you've informed me of my obvoius lack of skill...aka...that i am a terrible kisser......partners should be made to inform the other if you cant kiss...but then again MAYBE THEY SUCKED TOO!!....MAYBE ive never been properly kissed by anyone...EVER....im beginning not to like where this train of thought is going....oi oi i feel a headache coming on.........

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  • From on April 14, 2007
    ATTENTION: ADMIN

    Please do not ask this writer to stop spaming your email account. They are not the person responsible for the emails being sent out.

    We are working on this issue right now. Thank you for your patience.

    If you have any questions, please do not hesitate to contact us.
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  • From ANON - Katarachan41 on April 14, 2007
    Whoa. You know, I think I've fallen in love with this fic. XD
    I really think it is written well, gives the reader a specific picture of the surroundings and the events in the story. The story's just SO nice that I even spent TWO WHOLE DAYS of my summer to read the whole thing. XD Sometimes, I even repeat reading the TouyaXYue scenes XD X3. Anyways, I really do think you did a good job writing the story. One of the only things I can point out is how much I want to crush Ralen. XD (Did I get the name right? I hate him so much that I don't care about the name >:)) How many chapters will this story probably be? I'd really like to know the past you created for Yue in the story. (I'm not good at predicting things) Well, good luck with continuing the story! You wouldn't really need it, but I'll be one of the readers who will give moral support! (In some way... XD)
    Hmmm... And I was also wondering if Yue had a childhood. XD I doubt it. XDXDXD
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  • From ANON - gal on April 13, 2007
    if people actually payed any attention to email adresses they would realise that Capitalist wasn't the one who sent those advertisment emails. just look at his profile. it has a different email adress.
    i don't know why I got sent an email. i have been an avid follower of this fanfiction ever since it was first published 2 years ago. regardless this is a wonderful fanfiction and i hope you don't get into any trouble for those emails capitalist. you have put a lot of time and effort into this story and you certainly don't need any trouble with this. and you don't seem like the sort of person who would resort to petty advertising via emails. your story is already very popular.
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  • From ANON - Outlaw Angel on April 13, 2007
    OOOhh my gooodnesss....ur story is the BEST!!...i'm like all giddy now...
    I love the last chapter..it was amazing..can't wait for more...u need to make more
    this is the most favorite story of all time that i have ever read!!!....
    u have to now that i'm like ur 31 fan cuz this fic...aaah...I can't even put in in words...
    keep up the amazing work that u are doing...update as soon as you can.

    ya ne!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 12, 2007
    Please don't spam us with e-mails asking us to read your story. That is rude to say the least. If you want to create a mailing list to keep those fans updated when you update, please for the love of GD, ask the readers in your author's note if you wish to know when I update next, please leave your e-mail address in your review and let me know that you want to be notified. The next time, I get another e-mail from you, I will report you to your e-mail host for spamming and let you deal with losing your e-mail account.
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  • From ANON - KarenElhyam on April 12, 2007
    I have to say, more than any other story I've followed on this site I'm hoping for a happy ending! You said this story wasn't going to be fluffy, and that's fine by me, but gosh, I'm really rooting for a *relatively* happy ending.

    Either way, though, I know you'll do a great job with it. You're a wonderful writer.
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  • From ANON - Angry person on April 12, 2007
    Unsolicited email, either from you or your fans telling people you have never met or had no contact with whatsoever, telling them to read your story, is called SPAM. It is offensive, and in many cases, it is illegal. I have reported your account and the email that sent it to the abuse team at AFF. If you are in any way involved in spamming members in an attempt to get more hits, I suggest you stop. It could get your story taken down if more people complain.
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  • From ANON - SAKURA-CHAN on April 12, 2007
    WILL YUE EVER GET REAL ANGRY AND HURT TOUYA BAD?!! LIKE HE DID WHEN TOUYA PUNCHED RALEN BUT WORSER! EVEN ANGRIER THAN HE WAS IN THE LAST CHAPTER!!
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  • From ANON - SAKURA-CHAN on April 10, 2007
    WILL SAKURA EVER GO TO THE BEACH!?
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  • From ANON - mewling on April 09, 2007
    Last chapter I was thinking, so hmm, Yue is an old slave himself, but to whom? And being a total noob, I completely forgot about Clow (but it has been years since I've touched a CSS book).
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  • From ANON - Eloradanin on April 09, 2007
    as always I'm so happy to see an update, and the story just seems to get better and better. Keep up the great work and update again soon
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  • From ANON - update soon on April 09, 2007
    2 weeks is up where is the update? update soon
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  • From ANON - update soon on April 09, 2007
    2 weeks is up where is the update? update soon
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