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By : Capitalist

From ANON - Sophia on November 02, 2007
WOW! wow! WOW!
stunning....
i love yhoo! =P
what do u plan on writing for us now? lol
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From ANON - caffeine addict on November 02, 2007
What can I say about PS.... other than the fact that for the past 5 days i have been completely captivated by it. I really don't know what to say, your story is so wonderful. It's made me laugh as well as cry. I just recently finished watching the complete CCS series, except for the first movie. I just felt like reading some Touya/Yue or Yukito and I see your story and open it, I start reading it and when I'm changing the chapter I realize that it is 50 chapters long! Usually i would have just closed it and forgotten about it, I'm way to lazy to read something so long.. especially a porn fic. I must admit I found the first few chapters rather boring, but after those few chapters I kept reading and was hooked. It's your fault I have such huge bags under my eyes after staying up so late reading every night, and I've been ignoring my schoolwork (not like thats anything new.... =P). Well I just want to say that theres not very many fan fictions out there I would have bothered so much with. You had an amazing plot and I love your writing style, the way you always kept me at the edge of my seat. Your chapters are like Oreo cookies, I can't have just one. I finish one chapter and automatically start the next. I really love your story, its definitely one of the best I've ever read. This fan fiction and "The adventures of Roy Mustang" (something like that) which is a fullmetal alchemist fic are my favorites of all time, I can't decide which is better. Ok, between you and me I do like yours better =P. I wish you luck on publishing this, its truly a work of art. Even with the sex, I don't consider it pornographic or obscene. Your story had sex, but it wasn't the main focus which is good. Some stories just have lots of sex in them and no plot and are just pointless. So basically I worship the ground you walk on, I can't believe all the time and dedication you put into this story. Lots of love ;)
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From ANON - Mimi on November 01, 2007
I have kept up with you with your work, and even though I admit that I have never showed my appreciation. I would like you to know that you are one of the few that I can honestly say I respect. I wish you luck with your endeavors in the future, and I wish you the best of everything.
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From ANON - strawberry_buttercup on October 30, 2007
Fairwell. I will not bore you with yet another "i love you, don't go email" as i believe you have done a sufficient goodbye in your last chapter. i loved your story, no doubts about that. You updated regulary, never keeping us waiting and you obviously stuck true to your original idea as each chapter contributed significantly to the overall plot. (i find that hard to do myself -we all have faults ok!). And to top it all off, your story had class. It was sophisticated- the sex not being used simply for the point of it, but it had a specific purpose, adding to the mind games played amongst the characters. It read like a book, the characters working perfectly within the world you created, acting in such a way that made it believeable to us the readers despite us already have pre-concieved notions about their personalities(this is FAN-ficiton afterall). Yes, it may be only fanfiction, but this story didn't seem like it. It has a presence and a following all of it's own and you should congratulate yourself on more than a job well done. But do not worry, us fans will always be here to lend a helping hand to pat you on the back with. I know i will read it again. It has left an impression on me at the least, most definelty, and that should be soemthing to be dam proud of! how many people can say that they have had over -how many was it?- 600 people thinking about them, specifically, at different points in time, wondering about their health and life, hoping everything is well simply so that person can promote ideas they have conjured almost out of nothing? Not many definelty. It's kinda celebrity like isn't it? You and your story are in a league all of your own.

hope you find something equally as beneficial to so many people to occupy your time and life with now. Your time spent on this ficiton were sooo not a waste. Congrats again and i will end this rather long "i love you, don't go" review that i previously stated i would not do.

tootiles

bELINDA. A.K.A ~strawberry_buttercup
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From ANON - Dahlaine on October 30, 2007
Well, first time I review this thing. I actually found it years ago, and later couldn't read it because I was not eighteen yet. Now I am, found the whole story actually finished, and decided to review.
Your story was one of the best CCS fanfics I've ever read. Even if it seemed to start out as 'trite plotless porn', it turned out to be not so much smutty as it was well-thought out, with a plot most fanficcers can only dream of having.
And even if I have nothing useful or constructive to say, I felt that I should review it to let you know I loved your story and I would love to see more of your work.

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From silvergirlrox on October 29, 2007
wow!!i put it off for as long as i could, 2 weeks, and im so sad to see this story come to a definate end!capitalist i really enjoyed reading this fic and im really happy that you finally told us your ff.net account name!!:P anywayz ill definately check thosestories out!!i rally have to find that yahoo group!!

thanks again for a GREAT story!!
best fan you'll ever have... Silvergirlrox aka Andrea :P
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From ANON - Aistariana on October 28, 2007
this was a magnificent fan fiction. it had just the right mixture of everything ...not too much not too little.i was just simply hung on each n every chapter.luv it.
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From ANON - sakura on October 28, 2007
excuse me, do u know how to tell how many readers you have on one story? if so tell me how please.
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From vix111 on October 27, 2007
It took me long enough, but I couldn't review until now. Everything about this story I have said before, so I won't bore you with that.
I've been following this story for months now, and when I found it first, I couldn't stop reading until I finished what was comnplete. I won't say I stayed all night reading it, because it would be a lie. I joined around chapter 34 or 35, and even made an account just to review. I've gone through banned periods of Inet access, and still, I did my best to check aff.net on fridays. When you created the yahoo group, I joined without second thoughts. Then I noticed your yahoo screen name, and I couldn't help but think 'I've seen that name before'.
It didnt take long to find out why. At the beginning of the year I had read one of your stories in ff.net. It wasn't wild flower nor lotus reborn, but "Behind the Camera" XD
Needless to say, it still is one of my favorites. But even then, I wouldnt venture in the AU stories, and most of your stories are AU. After reading PS though, I had to read the rest of your stories. I now read AUs, but only from recommended authors XD
It must be nice to add the "complete" tag in the story summary, and even though I'm glad its finished, I can't help but feel sad. I really hope that turning this into an original story works out, and I'd be glad to help in any way, so I'll keep watching the group.
"It was a battle not easily fought" Yue said so, and we all agree. The epilogue was really lovely, and Yue almost smiling on the beach was a great scene. Of course, he'd better get back to the castle with Touya before he finds out Sakura is pregnant already.

That's all for my last review of this story.
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From ANON - Amanda on October 26, 2007
Thank you for a great story!! YOu definately have the story and sex and every quality fit for an amazing story! When I thought "oh this is getting boring" or "What? that doesn't even make sense" you seem to surprise me everytime with your twists and turns. My guess and predictions were all false. The story was really very original and thoughtout. I like how you didn't make it all about sex and all those good stuff. Thanks for the great story which will be read over and over again. I can't wait for another great piece!
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From priya on October 26, 2007
.....you wrote 'Wild Flower'........!!!!!!!!!! OMG!!!! i will bow down to u n declare u as my queen forever!!! That was an epic fic.... i read it when i was still fairly new to ff n was just ok with shounen ai. That fic converted me into a hardcore fan!!!! I am eternally greatful capitalist san!! i still can't believe it was u!! that story was SOMETHING!!! *looks stary eyed* I LOVE U ALL THE MORE NOW!!!....but that fic seems like a lifetime ago.... n now this has come to an end too!!! WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA..... NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! TT.TT
the epilogue was too short.... but at the same time too beautiful!!! I loved that Sakura Touya moment, for a min i forgot who was the elder one!!! but the sun... the sand... the ocean.... n a weddin sigh.... a very very beautiful scene indeed!!!
*brain still in la la land*

U know ur never too old to do anything ne??? if u like writting fics then u should keep doin it!! truth b told, ur like an inspiration to us. The style n the level of maturity that u showed in ur writing..... we were actually wondering if a teen could actually write like this!

ur puttin up another fic...... YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Lookin forward to it greatly!!!!... n I'm really glad u liked my pics, makes me feel all warm n fuzzy inside!!! i was suppose to put up another pic by now... but my colorin is not up to speed... but i shall put it up in a few days!!
good byes are for people who will never meet again... so see ya later Capitalist!! take care!
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From ANON - Cher R. Shales on October 25, 2007
Wonderful story and ending. Though, I haven't been reviewing since the first chapter or so, I apologize for that. I've been standing by for every chapter... Silently. Lol. It's prolly unfair for you but It's really great.
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From FlaxenWings on October 24, 2007
If you ever manage to turn it into an original and get it published, please let us know! I'll definitely be one of the first to buy it!! x3
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From ANON - kika on October 24, 2007
I don't know why I never reviewed before (probably being lazy) I really loved reading this. I stayed up late for days catching up to chapter 23 (I think this is where I started). And then checking up every week or so for an update. It saddens me to see this come to an end but happy because it was one of the best I've ever read, and it ended so beautifully.

I can't really say I have a favorite scene, every part was pieced perfectly in my opinion. Yue's dream at the end of chapter 42, it really gives you that big finale feel. At least that's what I felt when I read it.

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From ANON - Anon on October 23, 2007
I just realized I have no reason to come to this site anymore now that this fic is finished. What a weird feeling. Kudos to the good work!
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