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From ANON - Samantha St. James on March 27, 2007
I don't think I've ever typed up a reply to this story or not yet... and if I haven't, let me start off by saying how sorry I am. It may sound kind of corny or whatever, but really I love reading this story, new update or old favourite chapters. I really did like the anime and was sorely put out when it ended (as well as what I saw when 4 kids or whoever did the dubbing did to it *shudders*) and I think it's lovely that people are willing to take the time to give us other people who are *cough* lazy something to do.
Now it's been a long while (and it's also like friggin' one in the morning) and so I cant remember if you said anything, but... we know that Yue has magical powers and then in this chapter we get a mentioning of Clow; is Sakura going to play any part in that at all? I wondered to myself whether I would have thought the story would be more interesting either or but I'm really indifferent. I do have to admit that I adore the bond between Sakura and Yue and would love to see something more with them. I don't know how, but I love how a pairing in this fanfic makes someone else jealous. Touya and Sakura make Yue jealous, I'm very much thinking that Yue and Sakura make Li jealous, and maybe Yue and Touya make Ralen jealous? *wiggles eyebrows* You know he wants in on that; he is rather dodgy about the subject.
Anyway, I'm a hopeless romantic and would love to see some sticking-up-for-lover fighting, so yeah. But then, I think (or hope...) we'll be seeing even a tiny bit ^^

Thanks so much for giving me hope for better CCS fanfiction,
S. St. James

Ps, would we ever seen an appearance from Clow? Or any of the other characters that haven't been introduced thus far? There aren't too many that you haven't gotten to, but you know...
Pss, I know you did last time... butupdatefast
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From cocoke5 on March 27, 2007
the chapter was good and i l voe the way that yue got mad atonya and then tonya lie to his sister and then tell yue so he is fell in love with yue and can not tell his sister. good luck update soon.
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From ANON - lili on March 26, 2007
Another chapter in less than two weeks, I am super happy. I can just feel the Yue-Clow-past explanation starting, and I am very much in love with Li and Sakura. It's sooo romantic, to put it shortly, but I really liked how you described their chemistry. Also, the exchange between Li and Touya about archery and the vegetables was priceless.

Anyway, nice long chapter, really liked it, thank you!
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From ANON - Sana-Chan on March 26, 2007
Wow that was really quick!
I gotta say this chapter is one of my favorites :)
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From ANON - Loli on March 26, 2007
Hayhayhay! Long time no review! But, I just wanted to take a guess at what Clow is in this story. Is he like, Yue's old lover who died, or something like that? And I still love your story and you don't know how happy I am to know that you are updating more often! xD YOU MAKE ME A HAPPIER PERSON IN REAL LIFE.
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From ANON - Anon on March 26, 2007
^ ^ yay! ^ ^ you updated! I've been looking foward to this ^ ^ Keep writing ^ ^ I loved it.
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From ANON - Sana-Chan on March 25, 2007
I adore the affection between those two hotties..
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From ANON - Lanie Kay-Aleese on March 24, 2007
Aha!! The foreshadowing was so strong here, I could've gone mad with it! Obviously Yue's past lover is going to come into the picture... yay!!! I'm so excited to see how you will weave Yue's past in this AU with the characterization revealed in Yue's past in canon. Somehow, I am thrilled at the thought of it. Through this entire chapter, I kept feeling like Touya in the music room. Hopefully I won't have a lifetime of bad posture from all of my hunching over the computer screen. You're such a faithful author! I'm so pleased whenever I check this story, it seems you truly do spend a good amount of time working on it, and thus speeding up the time between updates. I could expound upon my glee some more but will instead leave with the final hope that Meiling makes an appearance again soon :)... And, the Kinomoto siblings will be so cute, with Touya making music and Sakura dancing to it!!
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From ANON - Anon on March 22, 2007
i like this chapta. Its shorter than your other ones. i hope the next chapta will be longer. :) what exactly does the chapta title [ever and never] mean? i dont get it. yue and touya are more relaxed with each other now. the scene in bed was cute. like they were in love almost. yue doesnt punish or yell at touya anymore if he does anything wrong or backchats him. thats good. i wonder if touya will do something that makes touya *snap* and punish him in the future.
will touya run away with sakura if yue lets him out of the castle. will he try to escape back to his town. i wonder what all the people from the town think happened to touya and sakura?
PockyFille has an interesting idea: will the servants all be gossiping and making bets about yue and touya. in 1 of the chaptas you said that gossiping is their favourite thing to do so surely they will b making lotsa interesting bets [cos yue has kept touya so long]. and wat will all the servants think when yue lets touya go out the castle? now i have turned into 1 of them reviewers who speculate lotsa stuff. i guess im making up for the mean review that i left last time.
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From SisterWicked on March 21, 2007
OMG HOLY HELL ZOMG!!1!

Ahem.. Now, with that out of the way, lol...
I am absoloutely in awe of your talent! I've been checking and re-checking this fic for updates since I fisrt discovered it, and I must say, it has only gotten better with time! I just love these kind of stories, the abrupt beginning, and the slow downward spiral into love, the ending far from sight on the distant golden horizon..

There are far too few fics like this in any fandom, especially Card Captor Sakura. Never mind the AU, I personally feel that this story has created it's own private universe, which, as you know, is in the truest traditions of CLAMP's works.. It shows the versatility of a writer of any kind to revisit old and oft-loved characters of one story, and to truly create something new with them, and I really hope that your creation continues to flow as it has here.

Thank you, sincerly, for all your hard work, and may you never feel doubt in yourself or your abilities. You have proven them ten times, no a hundred times over with this singly story that I just can't seem to get enough of!

Most humbly,
an aspiring author,
Sailorlight22
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From MistressMizu on March 21, 2007
Alright, I was a little disappointed that you made it so that only members could review. I couldn't remember my old name or password so I made a new account.

I don't really want to guess at what Yue is or where he goes and why. I think it's intriguing but I certainly have no theories as of yet. I'm a little surprised that someone has come so close to guessing it right, but I want to leave things as a surprise so I won't go looking for this person's reviews. (I really enjoy surprises!)

I love your style of writing and how well everything is planned and posed. You seem to me very thorough and you have a very nice vocabulary. The story flows very nicely; even better is that I never find mistakes in your spelling, grammar, or punctuation. Personally I think that adds a lot to a story because without it, you loose so much. You've given this story a lot and it really shows through. While I have many favorite CCS stories, I doubt that I could read any others here because this is absolutely the best. I'd have to say of all my favorite CCS stories this is in the top 5. I know you're planning on finishing it soon, but I'm not quite ready for it to end. ^_^;
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From PockyFille on March 20, 2007
Oh, this is the only reason i even check AFF anymore. I really like watching yue's walls crumble, bit by bit, and kind of touya's too.
That willing kiss was just wonderful, and i'm kind of curious about how the various other inhabitants of the castle wll react when that bet gets around the gossip circles.

looking forward to more of the same!
~pockyfille, formerly pockygirl
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From kagome1303 on March 17, 2007
Wow, nice chapters. I can't wait until Touya learns that piano piece. And when Li finally kisses Sakura I just said "Finally!" Those two really needed to be together, just hope Ralen doesn't find out. Although, if this story were an actual anime show, I would think 'Great, Ralen's going to find out in the future...' I think of Ralen like a boss monster on an RPG game, like Kingdom Hearts or the .//hack series of games, or Final Fantasy. Who knows? Maybe I actually have an idea here, with my Ralen's going to find out theory... I loved the first kiss between Touya and Yue, I really never noticed they never had a lip to lip kiss before. I need to pay more attention next time. Good job, can't wait for next chapter ^^
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From midnightfox on March 16, 2007
AWESOME and completely mind captivating. The suspense and drama just keep building. Fantastic work and I am patiently waiting for the next chapter.
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From AnimeHuggler on March 15, 2007
Aha! So now Toya will play wile Sakura dances. Nice addition!
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