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From ANON - shelinda on January 13, 2007
first things first: this story is really good. it is good that you have kept the flow of the story the same during the 2 years of writing it. not many authors can do that. well done. as someone said in a recent review: only sakura left the room after touya saw her dancing. so li must have stayed in the room and saw touya yelling at yue. i wonder what li thinks of this? i bet he has never seen a slave act like that towards yue. i wonder if li will tell any one [like the gossipy slave girls].

also when you said: "Best review goes to Katbites, who isn�t as whiny as she claims she is and postulated an interesting theory about Yue�s disappearances. Very well thought out, very rational, but not quite right, as she will soon see." in the authors notes, you got me very interested. you said 'AS SHE WILL SOON SEE' which means that yue's secret will be revealed soon? i hope so.

i dont want yukki in the story. some reviewers have already said that his personality wouldnt suit the story and i agree.

yue was also weak when he got back and a few nights later touya noticed that yue was weak when the moon was thin. i thought tht was interesting. i hope you write more about that in the next chapter.

i am also sad to hear about your election. that must have sucked.

i hope u update soon. could you plz update this month in january? to make up for the long 3 month wait we had last time? plzzzzzzz.
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From ANON - inuyashanut on January 08, 2007
pls pls pls update soon
me like dis
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From ANON - Fiona Aliece Lenet on January 07, 2007
This story is very unique and the thing that continues to make me wonder, well one of two things anyway, is why Yue has no interest in Sakura at all? He bought her but the moment Touya arrives she is all but forgotten. Seems kinda cheap to me. I would think someone as him, finding the need for pleasure slaves, would find some better use for Sakura, then to simply diregard her the moment he lays eyes on Touya. He bought her, I'd think he'd at least use her for some reason. I know you put that Touya took her place and all, but he doesn't seem like the personality part of him, having made Touya's his with it, would listen to him, just to make him his. Seems illogical on some levels. But maybe with this new chapter's last words, he will find a use for her. x3

And to note upon his disappearances, you stated he disappears every month on the New Moon. And from Cardcaptors, his ruling was the moon. That was his source of power. Seems like that'd be a reason enough to leave for a bit. The moon vanishes and he doesn't want that weakness shown, when he is powerless. I was pondering that theory since it seems to fit. But I don't know if you're using parts of the series like that.

Anyways though, keep up the good work. I look forward to your next chapter.
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From ANON - TOMO on January 06, 2007
I REALLY ENJOYED DIS STORY^_^ IT WUZ DA BEST CARDCAPTOR YAOI STORY I READ KEEP UP DA GOOD WORK N WRITIN ^_^
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From ANON - Otaku_lady on January 05, 2007
This story is one of the most interesting stories i have read on AFF.net, and most certainly the one with the most plot twists. I am VERY much interested in learning what goes on with Yue's dissapearances, and personally, I have a theory.

I think that Yue turns into Yukito on these nights, and leaves the castle so as to avoid any of his servants or slaves noticing this weakness. Yue always seemed very scandalised that he shared a body with Yukito, so I do hope you will put that into your story as well. I'm hoping that Yukito will make an appearance. He is my favorite character after all.

Anyway, this story has thrilled me and kept me up for near twenty four hours reading it, helping me to reset my internal alarm clock. I do appreciate the work you've put into this story, and I'm very sorry aobut your lost job. I hope that you update soon, and I VERY much hope to see a chapter if not just as good, then better than this last one.
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From ANON - looney on January 03, 2007
i think i kow what happens to yue.....does he somehow manifest into yuki and some strnge thing happens where the moons powers have something to do with it....am i close????? or did i just ramble on. well whatever it was this story is very goodd. keep it up and trow me another chapter bcause even if you think your story id dead, i'm sure someone will read it (me)

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From ANON - morwen re on January 02, 2007
yay! another update and you haven't died! great job with how you made sakura preform infront of yue, it was very believable. i can't wait to see your next update and i hope it's soon! oh, and sorry about losing the election thing...
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From ANON - Mizu on January 01, 2007
I'm sorry you don't have a job. D: I'm in need of one right now, too. Keep hunting. You'll get it.

I'm not sure that I've reviewed this story but I've kept up with it. It's so much more than just an adult story. I really, really love it! I can't really explain it but this has to be one of my favorite fan fiction stories. I'm curious what the theory about Yue was. I'm starting to think perhaps he draws his power on the moon... That's why he's so weak and tired on the new moon. As to where he goes, I have no thoughts on that.

So...Touya is jealous of his little Sakura. XD And it's almost as though he has a sister-complex. But didn't he always? XDDD And Syaoran is jealous too! I really keep wondering about his fate in this story. Though somehow I'm a little more interested in Touya and Yue, even though I'd started reading this for the Syaoran and Sakura. *yawn* Tired. Well, Happy New Year! I hope the next update is as good as all the others have been.
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From ANON - ME on January 01, 2007
Wow two reviews for one chapter. >.> Sorry 'bout that, but I was rereading this today and I realized that Sakura is the only one who leaves the room when Yue and Touya have their exchange. That means Li was there to overhear everything yes? Will that lead to something interesting?
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From ANON - Anon on January 01, 2007
Oh.... Hey, in my review, I meant chapter 19, not 18... I have been reading so much, I forgot which chapter I was on.... Hehe.... It hasn't even been 8 hours of me reading this. I have been reading on and off, and when I add those times I have been reading, it's probably about 5-6 hours. But ever since around 1AM I have been just reading, reading, reading, and now it's almost 5AM
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From ANON - Rhian on January 01, 2007
Wow, this fic is just the best ever. It's good in length, nice details, love the Yue/Touya, have a hate for Ralen, and I cried after reading chapter 18 when Touya was telling Yue of how Sakura was kidnapped on her birthday, since I'm just an emotional person. Keep up the good work, it's worth waiting for this story, even if that waiting time is many years or more. Happy 2007 ^_^ *Hasn't read chapters 19-25 yet*
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From ANON - Lanie Kay-Aleese on December 30, 2006
I have never read a better CCS story than this one -- and I've read far too many for my own good.
It's difficult for me to pinpoint precisely what it is that has given you the ability to put each character in the exact modes of thinking and action; it boggles me truly to consider the intricacy that is involved with the eloquence of your writing. You have a way with words, a way with thoughts, a boundless imagination and a tantalizing story that begs to be continued. I'm in awe of what you declared as a "crude pronfic" -- this is a work of art, to me, far more than I'd expected and infinitely worthwhile.

I wonder about the characters of Keroberos, Eriol, and also, Yue's alter of Yukito. Considering that Yukito is the dominant personality of CCS "Tsubasa: Reservoir chronicles", I can't help but wonder what you have in mind to handle that particular question. And of course, my thought is that since Yue's power comes from the moon, perhaps he pulls a rather Inuyasha-like transformation into the form of Yukito?

Whatever it is, I find it most intriguing...

And finally, Yue and Touya are sleeping in the same bed. ADORABLE.
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From ANON - gabby on December 29, 2006
i was wrong. there was an update. i like this chap it was kawaii. plz update agaan soon. dont make me doubt u again lol. can u update for new years day? as a new year day present?that wuld be awsome!
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From ANON - pockygirl on December 26, 2006
oh my gods, not only did aff actually load, the only story i stillcheck it for updated.
thank you very much for feeding my addiction to fanfic that actually has a plot.
i love the interaction between the characters, they feel very much like real people and i can never wait for the next installment. good luck with everything you're going through. at least you can take comfort in the sure fact that you write a very good story.
~pockygirl.
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From ANON - ME on December 21, 2006
My apologies for November's events and best wishes for your future (especially if you live in CA in which case I think I know about which slimy grease ball you're talking about, *ugh*).

Hmm, I went back and read her theory on where Yue disappears each month and I have to say that while the thought has crossed my mind I disagree. It seems to me it would have to do something with Clow to a certain degree, yes? You have yet to introduce him or Cerberus to the story line (which I only assume will happen, I mean you added Sonomi in there) and there have been some other hints of his existence as well. Like that time Touya accused Yue of not knowing what it was like to love another person and Yue had such a strong and angry reaction to what he said. It must have been for Clow yes? And then why doesn't anyone ever sit in the thrown room? Is it because it's not Yue's place to sit? Its suspicious and I think it may perhaps be Clow related? Just like all that extra guard for such a supposedly lonely palace is suspicious. >.>

Er, sorry I don't mean to be presumptuous. Perhaps its just the ramblings of someone who's a bit too fond of the CY pairing looking for things that aren't there but the suspense is maddening! Have to create a theory sooner or later.

As always this chapter was wonderful and I eagerly await your next update. ^ - ^
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