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  • From ANON - TwinkleStar on November 02, 2006
    You have got to be the best writer out their. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Creamy on November 02, 2006
    Wonderful story you have hear.
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  • From ANON - Sandy on October 31, 2006
    Since I don't review a story 'til it's done I'm breaking one of my own hard and fast rules here - but excellent job so far! I particularly like the way that Touya has unknowingly come to depend on Yue for emotional support and validation and that Yue has come to regard THIS pleasure slave as something much more than that - both in spite of their commitment that nothing of the sort would happen.
    Can't wait for the rest of the story - hint, hint... I DO so hate to have to finish these types of stories in my own twisted mind.... not to mention that by showing that Yue does indeed have a soft spot (even if he doesn't want to admit it) helps tp lay some of my own demons to rest as it were - but that''s another story...
    THanks for conrinuing to update when you can - I completelly understand hectic and busy schedules.
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  • From ANON - Spaz on October 29, 2006
    I absolutely LOVE this story and I think it would be a shame if it just stays here on the internet and never gets published. Maybe you could get a really good artist to help you... This would make a WONDERFUL manga and an even better animated series! good luck! and I will be sure to check on it regularly ^_^
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  • From ANON - Spaz on October 29, 2006
    I have one chapter left and god am I hoping it ends! Not that I don't like the story, far from it in fact! I LOVE the story and don't want to be left hqanging! ^_^ well, on to the last chapter! @_@
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  • From ANON - Final Fantasy XIII will b cool on October 29, 2006
    I was recently introduced to your story by a friend. I thank him gratefully for that and I thank you even more for writing this beautiful piece of art! I think you should definitely make this an original work. You deserve it! I want to review every chapter but don't have time so I'll just review the last chapter. Love the Yue/Toya moments especially in this chapter. They're finally in bed together! I can't wait for next chapter to see what happens. There was too much Sakura. I love her but prefer Yue/Toya.
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  • From ANON - Ta Boo on October 24, 2006
    I was re-reading this chapter, and I just thought of something .... did Yue hit Touya because of Clow?
    I thought it was a bit strange that Yue would hit Touya (ont the face) for a comment that was, well, typical for Touya. And I thought it might have something to do with Clow.
    Actually, I have TWO reasons as to why I think Yue hit Touya -

    1. Yue HAS loved someone before (Clow). And (for some reason) it's a touchy subject for him.
    2. Yue has never been in love before. And now that he IS in love (with Touya), he doesn't know how to react to it.


    That's all I wanted to say ^^
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  • From ANON - Sparky delux on October 23, 2006
    Please update soon. This fic is sooo good. I'm dying for the next chapter. It's been nearly 2 months since the last update. Please update before a full 2 months have past!
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  • From ANON - lili on October 22, 2006
    !! Wonder what's going to happen when they wake up

    Anyway, thanks for the reader review mention, although I'm not sure if leaving four reviews a chapter is necessarily a healthy thing ;;;;;;

    I don't much to say, but there is this one thing...after Touya and Yue made that deal where Touya promised to participate, I don't think they have had penetrative sex yet. (I hope I'm not the only perv who noticed this ***** but needless to say I hope %$#! happens next chapter ahaha)

    But the Sakura and Syaoran thing is soooo cute, although I wonder what happens if/when Touya finds out, and if Syaoran or Sakura ever actually say anything.

    Like always though, hope you update soon!!!

    -lili



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  • From ANON - Hi on October 20, 2006
    Please update before the weekend is over. *Gets down on knees and begs*
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  • From ANON - zuria on October 20, 2006
    awesome fic it was very interesting it held my attention so much i couldnt stop reading it!!!. I dont usually find good card captor sakura fics that i actually like so i was pretty excited about this one but maybe im just a little to picky or stupid lol. Anyways its very well written im hoping that maybe there will be more...........O_o but if not thats ok too (i guess) lol kidding but yeah just wanted to say your fic was very inspiring it makes me want to look more for better CCS fics XD thanx for the great fic
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  • From ANON - Spaz on October 19, 2006
    I love it! Poor Touya! and yet Yue likes him and cares for him in a very twisted way. I guess the Lord is not one to use and throw away. I do hope Touya starts to fight more again. and will something happen to Sakura? or will she continue to be sort of boring now?...

    P.S.
    I know that the next chapters are done, these are just my thoughts. Thought you might like to know what I think ^_^
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  • From ANON - maddi on October 18, 2006
    One word: WOW O_O This monsterous ficcy of yours is absolutely amazing! I love it so much that I can hardly tear myself away from the computer whe nI'm reading it. You deserve a HUGE round of applause...for the plot, for the writing style( I lOVE your writing stlye; so very. . .descriptive), for everything! You are teh awesomest. I totally luff yew for writing this :3 Update as soon as you can! I'll wait as long as it takes!!
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  • From ANON - Marylyn on October 17, 2006
    I can't wait for the next chaptor. XD
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  • From ANON - Dean is da best on October 17, 2006
    great story.I am eager to find out where yue went and why he is tired. I am guessing it has something to do with the moon cycle and if it does, will touya realize that it has to do with the moon. He noticed that yue prefers night. and that the meditation room has a moon on the floor. Maybe he will put 2 & 2 together?please update soon!I wanna know what happens next when the 2 boys wake up. we all know Touya didnt get off the bed after "just a little while". what will yue will say when he wakes. Yaoi 4eva!
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