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By : Capitalist

From Ayana on October 22, 2007
Oh my...brilliant! I have to say that in this journey...that you are the best writer for this fic. *bows* thank you...
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From ANON - Cherry-chan08 on October 22, 2007
I luved reading this story n I hope everything goes well for u in life. This was one of the best fanfiction stories I ever read, so be proud lol! Well I just stopped by to say thanks n gud luck!!! Ja-ne
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From ANON - Mekana on October 22, 2007
Ah Capitalist. I am struggling for words on how to respond to this. I discovered PS maybe 4 months ago and read through it with great interest. I have since checked for updates every few days, always feeling excited when they came (it frequently made me late for work or other activities because I wanted to finish the chapter ;). I want to say a very sincere WELL DONE. I have read books since I was very little and read fanfictions for years and there are very few books/stories that I consider extremely well-written. (thats not to say there aren't plenty of books that are good and entertaining - just not fabulous.) This story will be added to that very small collection. You may be unemployed but I think you were born to write stories. Some people just have that gift. The depth, clarity, realism of this story, its plot and characters, is so astounding and genuine, I truly believe it would be a shame for you not to continue to write stories and have them published. I am not a writer myself and am not able to express therefore, how incredible this story is, but I have a very strong passion for literature and would like to encourage you further. PS is incredible, in its entirety. The whole story is so well thought out and developed and that is a task that I have found in my years of reading, many people do not do well. So a sincere THANK YOU! For writing such an immensely entertaining, heart-wrenching, thought-provoking story. My gratitude cannot be expressed fully. PLease continue though! I look forward to reading your other stories and any future ones you write. Good luck on the publishing. It will be a hard task to change things in the story but I am convinced you will do fine. I look forward to someday being able to buy a copy of the story. Truly I thank you!

Mekana

P.S. I just wanted to add, I have read many of the reviews with flak about the SxS pairing and I would like to say you explained their relationship perfectly. I completely agree with you. I have found in years of reading fanfictions that when people put Sakura with other people it really somehow cheapens her character, no matter how OOC it is. There is something really genuine and elegantly simple with the two of them together and I think no other pairing ever seems so real. I am glad you stuck them together. Thanks for that too!
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From ANON - natasha on October 22, 2007
i found this story about two years ago and was hooked from the start. you have written an awesome story with a gripping plot. i used to regularly check this site for updates and many a times this fic made my day. thanks for a great read! i hope you continue to come up with such good stories. kudos!

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From ANON - Amy on October 22, 2007
Hello.

I have been following your story since you started and i have been shocked, amazed, sad, happy, over joyed, and crying.
you story is THE BEST story i have red so far, and i dont think i will find a story anythime soon that can beat it.

i must say the ending chapters were very fast but they were still good.

i cant wait to read some more of your other AFF.

Thankyou so much for writting this story and sharing it with me and everyone else. xoxoxoxo
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From ANON - Bound2Darkness on October 22, 2007
So in all my years of reading this (since chapter 4) I finally created an account (not signed in now) that will never be used again. I know I didn't review much but believe me when I say I reread each chapter several times out of my love for you. I can honestly say you are the only reason I visited this site!
I don't really know what to say now that its the end, other than I'm sad. On the other hand, I can now go add you on ff.net and obsessively read all your other stories!
As for the story itself? Best written case of Stockholm's Syndrome ever!

I'll love you forever and ever (even if your a. dateless, b. jobless and/or c. stop liking yaoi for some odd odd reason)

P.S. (hehe pun...wow I need sleep) Who needs family when you have strangers from all over in love with you!!
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From ANON - RandomPanda on October 22, 2007
I remember finding this fic 2 years ago and just staring at the screen going 'WOW'. I recall being on a hunt for Yue/Yuki/Touya and begroaning the fact that there were hardly any stories for this pairing and no Touya as uke fics, and suddenly I found this little treasure. I couldn't believe how long the pages were and how detailed and picturesquely the scenes flowed. My absolute favorite pairing too! *sigh* It was heaven! And now it's all done. Congratulations! It was a wonderful piece and my personal favorite of them all. I've truly became addicted to it (and hope that you keep it up on this site for future rereads because it's just that good!). I have to admit that I'm sad that it has ended, but it was inevitable and you finished it off splendidly! I also wanted to thank you for actually finishing it as well. This is the longest fanfic that I've EVER read and I was actually afraid that it would go on hiatus at any point. Sadly, too many stories have ended up with that fate, and I couldn't bear to imagine this story being left unfinished especially after that long break before you started up on the story again. Can you imagine my glee when I randomly checked this section again too reread old fics and saw that your story was updated? I swear I whooped out loud, screaming 'yesyesyes!' (and startled my roommates in the process). You took so much effort to complete this and complete it well that its impossible not to see the beauty of it all. You've inspired this CCS section to be updated again as well by the popularity of your story! Once again. thank you. I'm also sad to hear that you've decided to stop writing fanfiction, though after taking years to complete this huge novel it's very understandable. It's a shame that I won't be able to read more of your works in the future for you have a lovely style to your writing. I wish you the greatest luck in the future though, whatever it may hold. You're a talented writer and story teller, and I'm truly inspired by your dedication. Thank you.
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From ANON - Eloradanin on October 22, 2007
damn I will miss looking for updates on this story it's been a wonderful ride. good luck in your future writings and look forward to anything else you may "dream" up lol.
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From ANON - Moonspell on October 22, 2007
Wow I don't belive its you! I read your story Hair to the Kingdom on FF.net a long tome ago. It was one of my all time faves. As for being to old to write fanfiction. I'm 22 and I still write fanfiction. Everybody needs a hobby it keeps us working girls from lossing our minds. If you ever want to cheak out some of my stuff look up TheFicChicks2 at Fanfiction.net. My stuff is not as great as yours but I try. And remember your never to old for anime. This past summer at a con I met a 70 year old woman cosplaying as Kayade from Inuyasha. That put all my worrys to rest.
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From Anata on October 21, 2007
It's perfect. The ending wasn't overly sappy (as some are), but it still brought everything together in a heartfelt way.
If you do end up revamping and publishing this, I will definitely buy a copy.

I love the notes you gave at the end. I think it's important to hear an author's comments on his or her own writing instead of constantly making up completely random interpretations. I hadn't noticed the parallel between Yue's offhanded wish that Touya would jump for him and Touya jumping for him in the end. Really well planned and wonderful.

Thank you.
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From ANON - Jean on October 21, 2007
you are probably one of the best writers I have read, not only on this site but the best writer period. And I hope when you do get published you tell us, I would love to continue reading your work. Reading this story was one of the most enjoyable things in my life, even when the story brought forth overwhelming feelings. I hope only for the best for you in life. Thank you for sharing your vision.
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From JuyJuka on October 21, 2007
Dear Capitalist,

I wasn't luky enough to know your story form the beginning. But it took more than a week of my life! I only remember this week as reading Pleasure Slave, I must have been at work (because I stil have the job), but those days are only flashes between chapters of Pleasure Slave. One night I only read Pleasure Slave instead of sleeping.

Perhaps now I'm saying someting false, but I have to. I do not even know "Card Capture Sakura", I didn't read or watch it. But your Story only was greate enough to catch me. All on top I dislike to read about gay sex (don't misunderstand me, I don't hate gay people or so. I just don't want to know anything about ther sexlive *cringing*), but I endured it to follow Pleasur Slave.

I realy hope you finde a publishe for you work! And I hop you will tell us. (*haha* I'm still not able to find that mysterios Yahoo-group???)
If you don't publishe it, I hope you give us the authorization to make a book out of the story for ouerselfs.

I don't know how to reakt to the end of Pleasure Slave. Shuld I cry, panic or be happy? But one thing I know:
Thank you for this greate story! Thank you for so many happy hours! Thank you for plesure, happines, pain, thrill and so mutch more emotions.

Greatings
Juy Juka
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From MangaForever on October 21, 2007
i love ur story, tx u sooooo much 4 finishin it
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From ANON - Sophia on October 21, 2007
ZOMG! Loveeeees it!
what do i do with my life now! XD
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From DarkChaosMage207 on October 21, 2007
wow, this story completely blew me away. it was so awesomely written and i loved every chapter of it. i never reviewed but was quite happy to read it all along. i love the Toya and Yue pairing and this is by far the best story i have ever read concerning these two. i was also quite happy with the Li and Sakura pairing even though i'm not much of a fan. but thats okay because everything in this story was so well done i loved it all. it was amazing and i was so happy to read it and i'm sad to see it end but it was a great accomplishment. i'm thrilled for you. the descriptions and style of writing made it so easy to imagine everything that went on in this story and i feel every chapter was done with great success! good luck!! ^_^
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