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  • From ANON - Anon on August 31, 2006
    keep going. make li jelousy of sakura some how. thanks
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  • From ANON - Gear on August 30, 2006
    Your writting is brilliant, Li's dialogue especially. I love the wit there.
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  • From ANON - happy, yeah, im happy on August 30, 2006
    you are good!

    you do write pretty well...

    this story has a nice plot.. very nice plot for a NC-17 fic!

    im looking forward to ur next update.

    this fic actually made me cry..

    wah..

    im such a sucker for romance..


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  • From ANON - Outlaw Angel on August 29, 2006
    O MY GAWD!!...I SOO LOVE YOU!!!...YOU UPDATED!!! YAY..HAVE BEEN WAITIN FOR YOU!!!
    Anywayz, can't wait for the next chapters, I like it how
    Touya is getting confused at his feeling for Yue...please continue...
    Update as soon as possible!!!

    Ya Ne!!!
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  • From ANON - midnightfox on August 29, 2006
    I just read this story and I think it's really well written. You have them all in character and you even have Yue (I love Yue) I hope you update this. This is an excellent piece of work and one of the very few I've come across and enjoyed. Hope you update soon.
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  • From ANON - Mel on August 29, 2006
    I am amazed at your genuine skill in story writing. I love your story! Iwould very much like you to
    update sometime soon, please. I especialy love the fact that Yue let Touya sleep in his bed with him! Ah, it was so great! I also have to say that this may well possibly be my favorite fanfic.
    I sincerely thank you.
    Your loyal reader,
    Mel.
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  • From ANON - ayachan on August 28, 2006
    ok, that was stupid of me -_- anyway, i'm impressed with sakura! finally! go sakura go and kick ralen's ass. can't wait to see what happens between touya and yue ^^
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  • From ANON - Jaida on August 28, 2006
    UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!! OMG I LOVE THIS STORY!!! IT'S SO AMAZING!!
    To be perfectly honest this is the first fanfiction story I have ever read that I thought about when I wasn't reading it. I actually ponder what is going to happen next and the development of the characters. It is a captivating character study and I am so in love with your characters I can't tear my eyes away from the computer screen. Please keep working on this story and update soon!

    Jaida-chan
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  • From ANON - 0ri on August 28, 2006
    Eep, I'm the best reviewer for the last chapter? Yay! I didn't even know there was such a competition. xD Very smart way to get people to review properly, heh. It's probably a good thing that I have decent grammar and spelling, seeing as how I write as well... Would be sort of bad if I didn't. Hehe.

    Well, anyway, onto reviewing for this chapter... GAH your writing is intoxicating. Ralen makes me... so mad... he's such.. a bastard... Throughout the entire story... I really want Li to stab him in the face. It made me really happy when he threat him with the knife.

    And awww!! The scene with Yue hugging onto Toya just made me melt. Yue was being so cute, and Touya is so stubborn to try to escape when he's accutally getting the opportunity to lie on a nice bed. And just... squeee!! Hearts for you on that.

    As for how long this fic is and how long it's taking you, WOW, what an accomplishment. What's your secret? (lol xD) It's so difficult to keep going on with a chapter story, to not lose intrest, or inspiration, or just.. get lost in the plot and not know how to dig your way out. So yeah, that's extremely impressive... And as for the other 400 page fic you did, tell me where I can find it if you posted it anywhere, I would read it in a blind instant.

    One last comment... turning this into an original... I would recommend it. Although your characterization is of course, close to the original characters; it's also different in a way that makes them unique. You could easily play with the names and call this an original. It's your choice. :3

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  • From ANON - Lauren on August 27, 2006
    I've been a fan of Pleasure Slave since maybe.. The ninth chapter was posted? I can't really remember. But I do really enjoy it. I really missed it when AFF was changing and stuff.

    But anyway. I really enjoy the detail you put in your writing, and I think you really keep the characters in character, even though it's an AU fic. Especially Yue. Sometimes he might stray a little, but then you add a twist to his relationship with Touya and pull the rug out from under us. x3 Those two certainly keep things interesting.

    Also, the way Li protected Sakura was just adorable. ^^

    Oh, and though I never noticed it until you pointed it out, I think it's good how Yue and Touya have never kissed. It's really not normal for them. I'm sure it'll be very... captivating when or if that time comes. :o

    Keep up the good work, I can't wait to see you update! Even though this fic has been going for so long, I don't think it's ever dragged.
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  • From ANON - P0kebaLL on August 27, 2006
    Hi. New reviewer here. Well, all I can say is: This was an excellent chapter, as the same goes for the rest of the chapters. I'm not a big fan on yaoi, but I don't know why I'm still reading your very well written fic. I loved the part when Sakura was practicing dancing and Li was stealing glimpses at her in the reflection of his sword. I thought: Wow! That's really original! Also, I like the part when Syaoran was blocking Ralen's path, and then said how he's afraid of the dark. That was a funny part. I just realized something... I seem to like Li and Sakura's moments the best. Don't get me wrong, I enjoy the TouyaxYue moments also. I hope you'll finish within a year! And damn AFF's for screwy formats and random upgrading! I used to have an account with successful stories, and when I came back to AFF to check my review status, I realized it was all gone. I was like: NOOO! Because you know, I didn't have my stories saved on a disk, and it was a somewhat awesome account. T.T Anyways, keep writing. You'll become an astounding writer, if not already. Hehe. Go Yaoi! >.>;;
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  • From ANON - Lemoney on August 26, 2006
    I am still loving your story and I would definitely buy it if it was published! Just change the names and you have it all set!
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  • From ANON - Aureawolf on August 26, 2006
    Lovely chapter. Its amazing. You went in this fic from making me cheer for the yuri couple, to heavily salivating over the yaoi couple, and now my interest is totally focused on the het couple. Which are incredibly adorable in all they do by the way. Fantastic fic, as always, and I can't wait for the next one. Rock on!
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  • From ANON - kasahios on August 26, 2006
    oh no!!!! they fell asleep in yue's bed!!!! what's gonna happen?!
    please post the next chapter soon... i can't wait!!
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  • From ANON - LuverOfYaoi on August 26, 2006
    I'm so happy you got in another chapter! I would never have the patience to write such long detailed chapters like this ^-^
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