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From ANON - BabyBlueRowen on June 20, 2006
I still love this story. I started reading it before AFF changed. I hope to see more soon. E-mail me when you update please.
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From ANON - Emeraldwolf on June 20, 2006
yay!! another chapter!! ^_^ i'm so happy you updated this. yay for all the glorious Yue/Touya bonding going on. hehe. and i just love your Li/Sakura interactions. so realistic and young, not making them seem too old. rock on!
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From ANON - Sai on June 17, 2006
Has it been over a year?! I dunno feels like it. I just decided to check this fic at 3am and WOW *instant happiness* its updated! Such a long, wait I was hoping for a little more smex XD But its still awesome! Yue seems to be going crazy over Touya, and no one has noticed yet muhahahaha YOUR AN AWESOME WRITER!
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From ANON - Hisoka kurosaki_ on June 16, 2006
OMG! Thank you so much for updating! I've been waiting months for this.
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From ANON - Samantha[not signed in] on June 13, 2006
excellent. im off to bed i'll read the rest later. this is fantastic.
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From ANON - Amaya on June 13, 2006
I quite enjoyed this chapter. I've been waiting for the update to come for a while, and was more than dissapointed when you weren't able to update do to the site being down. Thanks so much for this fic, it is indeed one of my favorites.
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From ANON - Lemsy on June 13, 2006
0:

YOU BETTER CONTINUE MORE OFTEN THAN LAST TIME!

Like... Once every week? :'D -winkwinknudgenudge-
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From ANON - Scorpinac on June 13, 2006
I actually feel kind of sorry for Aya. She really didn't deserve that. Maybe Touya could yet talk Yue out of it? Perhaps? Didn't think so... And just how long does Sakura really think she's going to be able to hide her dance lessons from Touya? He's bound to notice the rise in muscle tone eventually. Well, look forward to the next one. Laters! Oh, and in regards to the last one, I actually had a copy printed out from when it was posted(had to use another machine as I'd unintentionally killed mine), and had in fact re-read it just a few weeks ago, so I was good. Again, Laters!
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From ANON - almne on June 12, 2006
Yes! An update! Loved the bit with Touya correcting Yue's pronunciation of his name.
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From ANON - lili on June 12, 2006
Okay this is stupid but here are more thoughts that I didn't put in my last review, which I wrote when my adrenal glands were still pumping (if this keeps on happening I think you can expect to get double reviews from me every chapter. Eh heh).

Anyways, the full impact of what Yue said in the end ("And you always will belong to me," summat along that line) hit me. And I guess it's not the end of the Touya-Yue arc. More like a very puzzling interlude. Since Touya knows that Yue usually releases all his slaves after a short time, what's he going to do about that? Does he even want to escape anymore? And I'm so confused!! What the heck is going on with their relationship? Touya admits and promises Yue that he'll only have sex with him, Yue gets manic-possessive, those literary hints that you put in there coming out (Yue asking Touya if he knew why he reacted the way he did when he was with Aya, and Touya saying yes, but we're not sure what's going on: what is that, reverse dramatic irony?? IT KILLS), Touya still not comfortable with the way Yue looks at him and agreeing to not do any more chores because he doesn't want others to get exiled from the castle, not necessarily because Yue asks him.
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And since this could be like Ai no Kusabi...I think that Yue might let Touya go for a year or some time period, since Touya cherishes his freedom so much and is still thinking about escaping. Although I agree with Aya-chan and I hope they don't commit suicide in the burning castle or something.

Way too obsessed with those two.
Okay.
-lili
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From ANON - ayachan on June 11, 2006
remind aff to never upgrade again XD but i'm glad you updated ^_^

oh god... that was one scary chapter- i thought touya was in for another ass-whooping and RALEN SUCKS!!! so much -_- i'm not a big fan of aya but it really was cruel what ralen did to her ;_; i hope she'll be ok in the city... hey, since this is mildly based off ai no kusabi, you aren't going to make both yue and touya die or anything are you o_O_o_O

can't wait for the next chapter or their first kiss ^_^
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From ANON - lili on June 11, 2006
*DOES THE HAPPY DANCE*

For some reason I feel like the Touya-Yue arc has somewhat ended though. Feels like they confessed to each other. Jkadfich. But big change in Yue at the end of the chapter! He is a lot more, uh...catty. And they started to call each other by their names! *MELT*

Poor Aya though. For a minute there I thought she'd tell Yue the whole story and Ralen was busted. Then he'd get fired, and then a new keeper would come, and the YUKITO ARC would start. Hahaha.

Okay still giddy. Loved the part at the beginning with Li and how he peeked at Sakura.

*HOPES JEALOUSY II IS COMING SOON*

Thanks for the chapter!
-lili

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From ANON - lili on June 10, 2006
Okay so I went back and browsed through the reviews and I realize that I do have a few constructive things to say!! (Although I still really really really crave an update.)

Touya and Yue : Riki and Iason. Whew. I can see the connection, although I think that there are some small differences, but that's mostly because of the characters' personalities. I'm really happy and a bit in awe that you were able to base the two on Ai no Kusabi without screwing up the characterization. :)

I think Aya likes Touya a lot. She thinks he's handsome and she really cares for him. I don't think he's ever going to reciprocate her feelings, since I feel like he's nice to her but not in a really "You're my friend" way. (...If Touya is capable of making friends. I never realized how antisocial he was without Yukito!)

And Sakura with Li. They're really cute together and I think Sakura fell hard; Syaoran is a little less invisible, but I think he likes her too. BUT WHEN TOUYA FINDS OUT...is the big bad question. And what happens after that, since Touya won't leave the castle without her, and if he does attempt an escape, if Sakura is in love with Li WHAT THEN...etc, etc.

And I want to know how Touya responds to Yue's threat! And whether Yue is so infatuated (for lack of a better word) that he does something even more forward that says "there's something special about Touya" (like when Touya is the only one allowed into his meditation room, to sleep in his room...). Like making him sleep in the same bed as him. (!)

Also, how Touya is going to follow through with his "I'll participate" proposal after Yue made him take it like a man. Mm hmm.

It's pretty obvious that I think too much about this stuff huh?

Much encouragement, much curiousity,
-lili
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From ANON - lili on June 10, 2006
Sorry for not reviewing. I honestly read the new chapters the day or the day after they come out, but I don't review, because I don't have the brain capacity to write a constructive review and I feel like I should leave constructive reviews... Well as of right now I still have nothing to say except that YES WHEN I READ IT FOR THE FIRST TIME A COUPLA MONTHS AGO I TOTALLY ENJOYED IT, although the "WHAT IS TOUYA'S AND YUE'S RELATIONSHIP GOING TO BE LIKE NOW?? NOT TO MENTION, HOW ARE SAKURA AND LI GOING TO PROGRESS??" questions were nagging at me, and then finally and most utterly and sincerely and pleadingly, PLEASE UPDATE SOONNNN. I seriously check back every single day. Like, when the site first went under construction, I went to the groups site to check when CCS was transferred. Then after it was transferred I sat around for the first few days and checked back in the category as OCD-frequently as possible and everytime I saw another story up there (At first it was "Unforgivable" and now it's the Wolf Falls story...) I was like SHOOT. And okay, I sound like an addict who needs a hit, but rehab is for quitters and I'm not ready to quit on the next update coming up sometime soon.

So now, beyond the "what-ifs" of the Touya-Yue and the Sakura-Li relationship, here is my relationship with this story, as exhibited by passages from chapters that I have re-read way too much:

"I will finish...if you ask me. If you beg me.�

�Please."

�Again.�

�Please!..."

PLZZZZZZZ

-lili
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From ANON - almne on June 05, 2006
Read this while it was part of the read only archive and ejoyed what's going on thus far. Yay, they've finally transferred this section to the new area! Is there a possibility of an update?
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