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  • From ANON - Emeraldwolf on January 08, 2006
    Amazing chapter. I especially like the cute blushing of both Sakura and Aya. If I wasn't loving the torrid affair of Touya and Yue so much, I might be interested by Touya and Aya's relationship. ^_~ And yeah, the Ralen punch was a definite high point. I love Li's reaction to Yue's anger, very believable. Can't wait for the next update. ^_^
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  • From ANON - ZoeyJade on January 08, 2006
    I absolutely love love love this story!!! This is one of the best CCS fanfics I've read and I can't wait for you to update. I love Yue and Toya together...one of my fave pairings. And I really love Sakura and Li together to so I'm hoping that pans out...lol. Anyway just wanted you to know that I sat down and read all 21 chapters in one sitting and am now eagerly awaiting more!!
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  • From ANON - ME! on January 07, 2006
    Once again AcColeman87@aol.com Sorry but thr=e thought just hit me while I was rereading this chapter. This whole Ai no Kusabi bussness is wierding me out. I was wondering, will you be taking a very Kusabi-ish point with this? Will Touya sleep with Aya? Will Raelin get fired and start rummors in the village and convince an angery mob to follow him up to the castle to "kill the beast"? WIll Touya and Yue only share their first kiss amist the firey inferno of the castle burning down with them inside it??? I'm dying to know!
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  • From ANON - Scorpinac on January 06, 2006
    Oh, yes, loved Ralen getting clobbered, and also liked Yue having a "word" with him afterwards! Also, everyone seems to have forgotten about the dance lessons, but I imagine when Meilin returns the following week they'll recall. Well, loving the progression, and I do believe Aya's falling for Touya, there! Well, Laters!
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  • From ANON - ayachan on January 06, 2006
    DAMMIT! AND THEY WERE STARTING TO GET ALONG SO WELL!!!! ;0; lol, yup, i definitely got those distinct nice and fuzzy Disney vibes from the library incident.. sigh..but watching touya sock ralen one was just classic.. not sure if it was worth it ;_; poor touya.. AnK huh? now that i think about it, it's true :P mwahahaha, this means that yue will love touya in the end!!! lol, yeah, i am so convinced that they love each other.. well.. probably more along the lines of liking for now... but man, i am convinced that yue told him all the stuff about being a man to lessen his punishment.. otherwise i think touya would have gotten double

    anyway, the syaoran/sakura relationship coming along nicely! meilin still cracks me up, and i hope tomoyo will make a visit again sometime soon.. w/ meilin! lol, that would be awesome

    nevertheless, i looooove this story ^^ so keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - inuyasha nut on January 05, 2006
    wow
    u updated!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    pls do so again soon. pls!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - PockyFille on January 05, 2006
    WHOO! It updates! i'd nearly given up on this updating again. * total sucker for fics with actual plot*
    Can ralen get beat up more? please? * makes big puppy eyes*
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  • From ANON - Hisoka Kurosaki on January 05, 2006
    OMG! I'm so glad you finally updated. I've never enjoyed a fanfic this much! lol. Anyhoo, I saw the conncection to Ai no Kusabi recently( I got the DVD over Christmas and thrououghly enjoyed it might I add) And now I love this story even more. I really appreciate your writting and hope you continue to keep the awesome work.
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  • From ANON - Aleanach on January 05, 2006
    I must congratulate you on a story truly well written. However even though I was impatient for this chapter to finish, I understand the difficulty of posting even a chapter during the holiday seasons. I shall wait impatiently for the next chapter to come out. Though I am hesitant to admit it, I love how Yue is portrayed in this story, allowing him to feel without losing the basic of his true character.
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  • From ANON - Aoi on January 05, 2006
    -taps her cheeks lightly to see this if this is a dream-

    ...

    -pinches herself-

    ...

    Oh my goodness... It's not a dream... it's... a real... decent... fanfiction...

    Excuse me while I slowly bask in the glory that is this story.

    [insert moment here]

    -cough- Sorry about the outburst. Nonetheless, this fanfiction is astounding. The cream of the crop, the diamond in the rough, and so on. I'm amazed how well you sculpted the plot and how you wove your dazzling writing skills around the characters of Card Captor Sakura and managed to result in an intricate story that just screams near-perfection. I can't deny that your yaoi moments certainly aren't my most favorite but the subtle feelings between Sakura and Syaoran is just pure euphoria. My cynical mind pines for Ralen to do something to Sakura (that collar needs some change), I must stay away from those non-consensual stories... Then there'd be a good enough reason to decapitate, if not castrate, blondie boy. But then again, I appreciate your story for what it is. No need to heed the insignificant rants of this reviewer. Carry on with your life. I'll be happy that you even glanced at this pitiful review.
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  • From ANON - Mewling on January 05, 2006
    *Gasps* An update!

    Wonderful, as always. But I wonder where the plot is... I mean, wouldn't they be trying to escape...?

    So I suppose this must be more a character romance development story...

    (but what the hell is Ai no Kusabi?)
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  • From ANON - alpha_paper on January 04, 2006
    Thank you for the update. I don't mind the long wait, really, every time you post an update, it's always worth it. I love this chapter! So many things had happened and I can't tell which one I loved the best! That Touya finally punched the living daylights out of Ralen... I have to tell you, I actually cheered out loud! Go Touya! I think maybe even Yue had wanted Touya to punch Ralen! LOL. I think, somehow, he could've stopped Touya easily...Meilin is such a character! I love how you write her. Bringing her in the story... she's some sort of a catalyst. She comes in and *bam!* I love it. I hope we'd be seeing more of her in the coming chapters. I could see her as matchmaker of some sort. The way Sakura and Syaoran's relationship had developed... I liked it that it wasn't at all rushed and they have (or at least Sakura) moments of blushing around each other. It's adorable and sweet and seems a great equalizer to the rather general dark, angsty mood of the fic. Touya and Yue. Ah, what can I say... you write them so perfecty. Everything they do and say, I could clearly picture it inside my head. I wonder what Yue has in store for Sakura. I don't know how you do, but everytime I read your updates it makes me want the story more... my devotion to this story is well... it's cemented! I'll still check daily for updates! And if there are none, it's absolutely fine, take your time, I love re-reading your fic. Every chapter reads like a new one and there's something new to discover! Thanks again for the brilliant update! I know I sound like some rabid-fan girl... hehehehe. Sorry about that... anyway, just a random question, how do you find the Touya and Yukito of TRC? I love Touya in black! He's so gorgeous! Well, that's it for a rather long review! Looking forward to your next update! Take care! Hope you had a wonderful Xmas and New Year!
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  • From ANON - ~*Kinky_Sweetheart*~ on January 04, 2006
    Wow! This chappie was awesum!
    Go Touya go! *waves pom-poms in the air like a frantic fan girl*
    And I LOVE the Yue-dom thing going on... it's not really expected.
    SAKURA AND SYAORAN FOREVER!
    And YAY! to ralen getting his face smashed in by the oh-so-lovebale-uke-knight TOUYA! XD
    I love your work! Update soon please!
    ~*Kinky_Sweetheart*~
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  • From ANON - Chibineko69 on January 04, 2006
    OH MY GAWD!!! I had a feeling that this would happen between Touya and Ralen...this chapter was so good that i couldn't stop reading it!! Please don;t take so long next time..we're all in love with this story!!!! (Oh, btw im an author here, so if you wanna e-mail me click on CHIBINEKO69 k?)
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  • From ANON - Mizu on January 04, 2006
    I can't remember what name I used last time..maybe it was this one.. I've got a few..

    Another excellent chapter though! However..I have no idea what you're referencing to ^_^; The name doesn't sound familiar to me..

    Yes, I did get Disney fuzzies.
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