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Reviews for Pleasure Slave

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  • From ANON - h on December 22, 2005
    Good, good. Love the story, and glad the chapters are of a decent length. Keep it up, onegai.
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  • From ANON - Virgo's Kiss on December 19, 2005
    This story is... well, beautiful. I love every single one of your descriptions including their sex scenes. ^///^ Another big plus is everyone doesn't rush in and jump each other. While I'm very fine with that, a backround story and plot in general make a story really good. I also like where they all stand in their story, especially the uke Touya. I cheered when I found that out since not many people I've seen make him that way and a seme Yue is much too hard to resist. (no pervy pun intended.) I'm also glad that the yuri pair was Tomoyo and Sakura, I just started the manga and if it ever had any yuri, they seem to be the most likely. Many kudos on making a story last this long, a lot of people give up before the first 5 months or so. This review probably sucks since I've never been very good at them, but I very much hope you'll continue soon!
    -Anonomous fan a.k.a "Virgo's Kiss"
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  • From ANON - Rebear on December 18, 2005
    Every new chapter I read, I die of glee. You're amazing at writing, and you've got so much talent in describing every occurence, without sounding overly flowery or vulgar in the lemons. Pleasure Slave = Bookmarked FOREVER.
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  • From ANON - Hibiki-chan on December 15, 2005
    This great! A bit boring during first few chapters but as story progress I can't take my eyes off!
    It never occured to me that Yue can be aggressive but man! This surely change my mind!!!!
    Next chapter pls!
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  • From ANON - ? on December 10, 2005
    Now, i hate to be a pushie pushie...but do you think that maybe we could have another chapter by Christmas? Think what a nice gift to readers that would be! *hint* *hint* Thank you in advance!
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  • From ANON - Chibineko69 on December 08, 2005
    PLAESE UPDATE!!! THIS STORY IS SO GOOD!!!! I'LL EVEN GIVE YOU IDEAS lol....But please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Kuroi Hikari on December 08, 2005
    Wow. I must say, this fic totally blew my mind! I feel like I've found a gem; it's so rare these days, that there's a fanfic with both detailed sex scenes, such a great storyline AND character development. I adore yaoi, yuri and light hinting of straight couples, so every chapter of this fic was definitely enjoyable to read. I am glad that the yuri pairing turned out to be Tomoyo x Sakura. The pairing Yue x Touya really surprised me! I've never heard of this pairing before, so it never crossed my mind. This is the first fic I've read that featured this pairing, and you've managed to turn Yue x Touya into my favourite CCS yaoi pairing. The character development and relationships portrayed in this fic is amazing! I agree with quite a few of your reviewers; I really love the relationship between Yue and Touya, and how they are slowly but surely falling for each other, though both of them won't admit it. Meilin's sudden appearance didn't really surprise me; I knew that she would show up somewhere in this fic. I was very happy at the way that she treated Ralen (the guy really deserved it! Someone should stomp him in the nuts...). One thing that I hope for, though, is that Meilin doesn't try to gain Syaoran's attention sexually; if there are to be any straight pairings, I hope that it'd be Syaoran and Sakura.
    Overall, this is an excellent fic that I am sure to recommend to my yaoi/yuri loving friends. I look forward to the next chapter, and hope that you'll update soon (and not four months later like some of your reviewers mentioned). Thank you for finding the time to write this fic! ^_^
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  • From ANON - W-R on December 06, 2005
    'mazing, absolutely A-MA-ZING! *finished all 20 chapters in one sitting* I am a late comer, yes, but I AM glad that I read this at all! I dunno where to begin, except with maybe, p'raps, that your muse is Teh WINZ!!!111one!1eleven xD

    The whole story, it's written extremely smoothly and flows along perfectly, and the way you use words is Really Good. And, and, um, update soon pwease ^o^;; *gives you big box of motivation* Go on! You rock, yay~ :D
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  • From ANON - darkchildren on November 30, 2005
    wow, its cool, but i think there should be more sakuraXlo
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  • From ANON - holly on November 30, 2005
    Hello,
    Ive been waiting a little les than patiently for the next chapter.
    That said I basically have to restrain myself from smashing my
    computer into a million tiny pieces. So I figured that maybe if I
    reviewed you would type a little faster.
    My review is as follows. This story has it's good and bad pionts.
    I love the pairing and the story lineand to be truthfully honest
    the not so nice scene could actually be alot worse. So I thank
    you. Please put up the next chapter. I really want to read how
    toya and yue's relationship will progress.
    Thank you for yourtime and imagination,
    Holly
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  • From ANON - Outlaw Angel on November 27, 2005
    Plz....make new chappies ...I'm dying here....I wanna know
    what will happen now....Plz update sooooooon.....
    Cuz I can't wait no more.....Your chappies are soooo goood
    I just keep reading and reading.... Idon't get
    fed uo with your story cus there sooo coool....
    But plz update as soon as you can....
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  • From ANON - Yaoi_Luver on November 19, 2005
    more more! :)
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  • From ANON - Chibineko69 on November 19, 2005
    Pleeeaasseeee update sooooooon!!! PLEASE!!! WE'RE BEGGING YOU!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Berylia on November 19, 2005
    This is sooooooo good! I just engulfed three chapters and I feel my insides turn jelly. Such a wonderful sensation, I love it. The first lovemaking of Toya and Yue was beautiful and left me with a singing heart. I love the way Yue said please when he asked Toya to read, I can just picture the scene, so lovely and warm and just fuzzy. I love Meilin, she is just great and I adore her when she grips Ralen's balls and crush them! I hope will see more of Tomoyo.
    It's such a great story, I am ready and willing to go to the second half! Let's read!
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  • From ANON - Inulover16 on November 19, 2005
    I must say sr that i have not reviwed on the last two chaps..To state off i just what to say that i love this story soo much that its worth the wait just to be able to read another chap..I really love how everything is progressing with Meilin..Li and Sakura's relationship seems to be progressing nicely.^__~..anyway i just want to say that the discription of the room in which Yue stays all day is so beautiful that i wish such a place was real..When Toya said that he would obey i was really happy...it was such a good lemon..Anyway plz take ur time and i just want to say how happy i am always with how long u make the chaps..if u took u as long as it did and the chaps. were short that would really suck..but yay that is not the case with this..anyway i hope that ur well..Ja Matta Ne..^-^
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