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By : Capitalist
  • From ANON - Blackrose on October 25, 2005
    This is getting good. Glad to hear Tory and Yue are getting along. Hope to see some romance between Sakura and Li. I love the way you've made Meiling. She's a real cool chick. Please update soon.
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  • From umiko on October 25, 2005
    I have to agree with random. I litarlly gasped when Yue said "Toya", and again when Touya said Yue's name. It was a beautiful moment. Then Yue had to go and ruin things by getting all scared and chase him out. That man's more afraid than Touya is, and less likely to admit it.
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  • From ANON - Ephe on October 25, 2005
    kyaa~! You updated early! I check at least once a week for your story after I found it around chapter 15. =)
    BTW, is there going to be other couplings in here as well? (SS?)
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  • From ANON - random, yet love stuck reviewer on October 24, 2005
    Awesome! You updated...in less than a month... I'm so happy that I can't get my emotions straight! Thank you for writing such an awesome fic! I really love how the relationships are steadily evolving at its own pace. It's not rushed or too slow. The writing itself is also amazing! A work of art! I so love Yue and Touya pairings! Aww, Yue actually called Touya 'Toya'. You wouldn't believe how muchy I felt at that part. Your chapters are so wonderfully long too (well it seems too short by the time I get to the end, but that's what happens since I'm so addicted to the fic). Well, I'll stop gushing now. Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Somnam. on October 24, 2005
    Just so you know, yes, I did read this chapter. I was going to abstain from any comments until I had something truly productive to say, but I'm beginning to think that isn't going to happen since that's also what I said about chapters 18-19.
    Even if I don't totally agree with the way you write Meiling, I like it. And the subtle (fond) rivalry between her and Syaoran was very familiar to me re: most of t_d.
    I did like the ball-grabbing. Fun for the whole family. But Ralen was a bit too talkative for a man who'd just been dented in the crotch.
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  • From ANON - chekiita on October 24, 2005
    awsome, not only was it fast it was good too, i loved this chapter it's one of my favorites and meilin was hilarious
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  • From ANON - ms. paper on October 24, 2005
    aaaahhh... it truly is worth it, checking for updates everday! There were many so brilliant things on this chapter that if I list them down, I might as well repost the whole story. But here are a few of my favorites: Meilin! It's so lovely to see her make her appearance. I like her assertiveness and how I wish she could teach Sakura not just dancing but a bit of attitude too. The girl needs it. I wonder how Ralen would react to it if that happens! Ha! I have a feeling that Touya would more likely blow his top over the prospect of Sakura having dance lessons. I can so see him now, "Your practicing what? In front of who?! Grrrrr!" LOL.

    Everything about Touya and Yue is just... lyrical. The way you write Touya's feelings and thoughts is so gut-wrenchingly real. I don't know how else to describe it. I most especially loved the part where Meilin mention that Sakura was pretty and Syaoran replied that she was "beautiful." I can't wait for more Syaoran and Sakura moments. And although I am all for Sakura and Syaoran, there's also something so terribly sexy about Meilin teaching Sakura to dance. I don't know where I got that vibe at all, but I did. LOL. But I really am looking forward to more S/S interaction.

    I think the best bit though, the one that beats everything that I just said is when I read that we're only halfway through the story. OMG! There's more to come and please do keep them coming. Please, please, please do. Looking forward to the update. I'll definitely check back for updates tomorrow morning. Until the next updates (until the very end of this fic), I remain, one of your many, many fans. -ms. paper
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  • From ANON - Scorpinac on October 24, 2005
    Oh, yeah, I almost forgot, a sancutaury?! I always figured he hid himself away in an office and took care of politic-y stuff ("Hmm, such and such is four weeks behind in their taxes, this law require mild updatung in the wording, another party invitation from Ruby - when will she get the message I'm not and never will be interested?! - legal scuffle between rich overbearing moron and poor helpless tenant....") After all, if his castle is the only one near Terriene, doesn't that sort of make him the ruler of Terriene? Ah, well...
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  • From ANON - Scorpinac on October 24, 2005
    Wow, that was fast. Yay, Meilin's here! Love the "Nutcracker" move, love it, love it, looooove it! Of, course, when Yue does finally find out about the dancing lessons, it could be trouble, but that's for later. I have visions of Meilin going for her horse, and the guard start to come check her out, and Li telling them something along the lines of "This is my cousin, she took combat classes alongside me, and she's the only one in the class to actually *beat* the teacher in a full on match!" As for the Yue and Touya, well, at least the chains are gone, and now Touya knows there are books here! Hmm, only half-way through, you say? Oooh.... @_@; Well, don't take too long then. Laters!
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  • From ANON - Nuriko on October 24, 2005
    OMG!! I LOVED THIS PART!!! PKEASE WRITE MORE!! PLEASE!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - noone on October 24, 2005
    yay! I can't believe you updated so quickly! Thank you so much! Meilin is so funny, but Ralen needs to see that he isn't the boss of everyone besides Yue once in a while. Poor Touya, must be torture for him. Anyways, I'm sure that the second half will be just as good as the first half, if not better. Looking forward to reading more, baibai!
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  • From ANON - northstar on October 24, 2005
    another update from you = another review from me! Great chapter! Very hot and satisfying. I was so glad to see you had updated when I checked your story! Today is *definately* a good day.
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  • From umiko on October 24, 2005
    It was such a wonderful gift, checking the sight on a whim before bed and discovering another chapter waiting so soon after I finished the rest. Thank you! This story is wonderful, it sucks me in (no pun intended, honestly) and doesn't let go. I love the way you wrote Meilin, and I adore the interaction between her and Syaoran; it's perfect. And it was nice to see Ralen finally get treated as he deserves.

    I wonder, have you ever read the book Maia, by Richard Adams (author of Watership Down)? The beginning of this story reminded me of that book, although the plots of each story part ways fairly early on. Just curious. I am enjoying this story quite as much, if not more, than that book, which is one I am quite fond of.

    I hope your muse keeps you inspired. I'm currently trying to bribe mine, but she doesn't seem as fond of pudding as Kero is.
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  • From ANON - boo on October 23, 2005
    woot! An update! I absolutely love this story!!
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  • From ANON - lili on October 23, 2005
    Heh heh...heh heh...

    *faints*

    This made my day.
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